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  1. drsawzall

    Epilogue

    And yet, you'll let Killian get behind the wheel and drive....
  2. drsawzall

    Chapter 19

    Bwastone, where ya pak da kah
  3. drsawzall

    Chapter 17

    At the risk of repeating myself, get Leo a tongue...the clothes are a nice start....
  4. They are nowhere near getting back to France, this important church official, hopefully, will have a fondness for young men...
  5. drsawzall

    Before you go…

    Flynn and Britteny were made for each other. It would be nice to see both of them in a car next to Clair and Anduin when the 18-wheeler full of hot, slow-moving asphalt tips over.... Frank continues to delude himself with the man faking a tragic boy, he runs hot and cold so much that it is becoming difficult to fully warm to him...His man-child act is wearing thin and tiresome. I suspect it just might come to seriously bite him in the ass... Is Henry developing a fetish for women's underwear? Mistress Alice, properly dressed at an event, where she will be seen, just may attract a suitor....
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    Chapter 47

    Is there anything like or better than young love??? “Now, if that just doesn’t bring a new level to our relationship. I don’t know what does.” Mike blushed and Taylor chuckled. “Did you ever tell him about us?” I asked. Taylor looked over at me. “Not entirely.” He said as he looked at Mike before continuing, “Possibly I should explain it to him in detail so he understands our relationship better.” I looked at Adam. “Maybe. And maybe we should talk to Liam about it so he understands it better.” Adam said. I nodded, “Yes. Possibly.” I took another sip of wine. “So no one here has a problem with them, right? Except my upholstery?” “Father. We didn’t make a mess.” Adam snorted again. “Liam. We know. Your father is just teasing you.” I gave Adam my best smirk.
  7. I'm reminded of a line from a Grateful Dead song..."What long strange trip it's been"...
  8. drsawzall

    Epilogue

    First off...@Josh Aterovis, thank you for this. And as you can tell by the comments, you've reached your readership with a compelling story. As with most of the comments, most of us are processing the death of Aiden. It was/is quite the kick in the teeth, and the rest of the story leaves many threads unanswered. Frankly, I see the involvement of Killian and Asher as minor actors in this drama. I ask myself, what did they bring/add to this story...not much from this vantage point...But I digress, and thanks again for sharing this with us!
  9. Actually...in the video, from 1:43 to 1:47, my doppelganger makes an appearance. On the far right of the screen, dressed in black, dancing as if no one is looking...it's that or he feels the world will end shortly...he's got my moves down pat!!~!
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    Chapter 22

    Then I'm in with a chance???
  11. I'd end up in the emergency room if I had to dance to a song like that...hip replacement anyone???
  12. What have they found and what was it used for? Is the train partially organic?
  13. I like this story's beginning, an interesting premise and looking forward to the next chapter!
  14. Lessons to be learned (will they though) and friends to make, I can't possibly believe that the "bumps" in this story are over just yet....
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    Chapter 26

    It would seem the Lady in Black will/has met her match. I remain curious tho...what of the dark power behind her guiding her actions, I seriously doubt she is, for the lack of better words, a free agent....
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    Saying Goodbye

    So glad to see Coradiel survived the battle and David, the man who will squander a fortune over twenty gold sails!!!
  17. Truly a very enjoyable chapter and enjoyed seeing the different perspectives!!! Young Toby is a hoot, and a well-adjusted young man at that...I would think at some point, he just may have his own tale to entertain us!! “And that’s what I think. You’ll look good in something like this.” Brian smiled, “Will I?” “Can I see the pictures?” “I think that’s only fair, isn’t it sport.” “Will you be doing one with Gordon and Russ?” “No, I think the idea will be to do them separate, but I’ll let you know.” “And Dad?” “Yes, sport. “ “I want one of these for my 18th birthday.” Toby pointed to a particularly revealing number. “Do you indeed.” But Brian grinned.
  18. drsawzall

    Chapter 1

    Thanks for this, that everyone had a friend like Jack!~!
  19. That everybody like Austin had a friend like Jack, simply a feel-good short story!!
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    Chapter 23

    Not sure what to say here...Catlin left crumbles of clues telegraphing her guilt. That along with some suspicious behavior by others seemed to cast a wide net of red herrings... Sadly, once more Aiden saved Will's life with his own, what a shame.
  21. Hoping that the humans get their just desserts when they realize the Temple is no longer functioning...
  22. Well now, that was an invigorating chapter...whew!!!! Someone point out where the line is forming???
  23. Troy is gonna need one of those donut cushions when this is all over so he can sit comfortably....
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    Chapter 22

    It seems to me that the crown of red herrings seem destined for Catlin, and I am seriously considering that she isn't the killer. I think she fell hard for Will the night of Joey's murder... Then it would seem that Aiden could possibly be a good fit for the crown and, let's not forget Laura, could she be harboring a hidden crush for Will, is she a true candidate for that fishy crown???\ We know we've met the killer and while the obvious suspects could earn the crown of red herrings, there's one suspect who has been conveniently missing...Nicki's brother Lurch or whatever his name is...
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    Chapter 2

    Rezak is heading for a fall of humongous proportions, I can't wait to see him misstep....It may take a while but boy is it coming...
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