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    Chapter 40

    drsawzall commented on CLJobe's story chapter in Chapter 40

    Just remember David, you have free will!!!
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    To the victors belong the spoils, the narrative, and history...some amazing scenes...when even the innocent young are condemned, simply for what they are.... ....
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    Date Night

    drsawzall commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in Date Night

    Exciting times. Yes indeed.... Exciting times. Bout time as well....
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    Wartle

    drsawzall commented on Yeoldebard's story chapter in Wartle

    At some point Arlo will sleep, whether he needs it or not...whether he wants to or not...and at some point, this rinse and endless repeat cycle will break and finally the a-hole who started this endless cycle will get their own, well-deserved justice....
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    Welcome back, you were missed and hopefully your medical issues are now on track to be resolved!! Loved this chapter and truly looking forward to the next... I thought the following was relevant to today's issues and waiting for someone to tell a certain someone the tag line at the end!!! Somehow, they had been fueling Desmond’s possession, but the connection was gone. The hold, broken. Oeus’s voice cracked, reduced to a whisper that hissed through the last whirls of mist. “You will never escape me. That power…my power… it feels good, doesn’t it, Desmond?” Ash took a step forward, his fists clenched. “Shut up, asshole.”
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    Chapter 11

    drsawzall commented on Albert1434's story chapter in Chapter 11

    Cakes are baking and there will be no hidden metal files for those who will go to jail for playing fast and loose with others money...
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    Such an engaging/interesting chapter, Dad was so cute when trying to have an honest conversation with Tyler about sex and let it slip about how he finally managed to date his mother, who was she seeing at that time...and who was he seeing, and was he walking a tad on the 'other' side of the street???? Talk about another trip to Mars, the scene/setting was just so captivating and then you just had to include the following...I laughed so hard there was a clean-up call on aisle keyboard... “I’m better than okay,” Brandon assured him with a look of concentration on his face. “Feel free to move about the cabin.”
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    A pirate tale like no other and a very enjoyable read!!
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    Tied Bond

    drsawzall commented on Rafy's story chapter in Tied Bond

    This was very enjoyable and thank you for adding it to these pages.
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    The bigger question is, could she safely raise a child???
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    Interesting to say the least, I hope to hear that there are stories, a thousand years into the future, of then Arch-Duke Golden's very painful demise via "The Right of Correction"...the prick...
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    Chapter 28

    drsawzall commented on Lupus's story chapter in Chapter 28

    And a happy Easter to all.... Somehow...Renn will trip himself up, of that I have no doubt and break Zdain's spirit...
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    I don't think we've seen the last of Marie-Looser...there's bound to be some asthmatic, cancer ridden Hell's Angles out there...
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    A harsh and powerful reminder that all you need is to be true to yourself...
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    Chapter 1

    drsawzall commented on CountDickula's story chapter in Chapter 1

    Thank you for this, for when all else is lost, be true to yourself... And what now? How do I fill the empty space in this shell? This void left by your eviction? Can the host survive without the parasite? I think so A wise friend said to me “The opposite of shame is pride”
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    A reminder that one should look before one leaps and to treat others as you would want to be treated...
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    As much a parable as a poem, very well done!!~!
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    It is constantly amazing to find, and relearn, that much can be said in so few words...
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    The following snippets truly spoke out to me...Thank you!!! So I ask: why presume to insist that everyone wear lifetime labels if we can’t all believe such things to be as true as kisses underneath the streetlights or laughter in the rain or their love? ******** Our puritans protest too much, I think for they forget what’s written in the book Judge not, lest ye be judged – but fabulate that Jesus would have grudged to sit beside and bless those who might look as if they should prefer to dress in pink or change the gender of their underwear while all the scribes and pharisees stood there.
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    A couple of two thought provoking poems, well worth the time to read!
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    Chapter 1

    drsawzall commented on Valkyrie's story chapter in Chapter 1

    I enjoyed both and found them to be thought provoking. While I could relate to poem 1, poem 2 really grabbed my attention and left me thinking! Well done!!!
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    Gloomy Moods

    drsawzall commented on Celian's story chapter in Gloomy Moods

    So...Alice confirmed, that barring any catastrophe, her plan is to grant Dante his freedom, Tom still remains a putz, and I have little to no respect for him and, for the lack of better words, Frank needs to come out of his many compartmented closets and grow up....
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    I thought that those who participated in the anthology so far, have done a fantastic job!!!
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    So...Richter arrives to save the day and then there is Edward, The Marquis of New York, does he become Arch-Duke Golden, the prick?
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