drsawzall
-
Posts
16,412 -
Joined
-
Last visited
Content Type
Forums
Stories
- Stories
- Story Series
- Story Worlds
- Story Collections
- Story Chapters
- Chapter Comments
- Story Reviews
- Story Comments
- Stories Edited
- Stories Beta'd
Blogs
Store
Help Center
Writing
Gallery
Events
Everything posted by drsawzall
-
I'm intrigued by the possibility of some "bigwigs" possibly being blackmailed by Ira... I'm also wondering if a visit back to see Caleb might be in order, letting him know the secret room is known and it may reveal who else has been there...
-
Why do I get the feeling that the Lord Mayor will never see that seat cushion again and...could there be something important inside of the padded seat???
-
A birthday treat & an offer
drsawzall commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in A birthday treat & an offer
I'm gonna guess a few understandings will occur!!! -
Someone has it bad.....Chubby hit the nail smack dab on the head...
-
I'm gonna assume that this society does not inhabit the entire planet, what are these other societies like???
-
At least 4 parts, 10,000 words long with an epilogue for the epilogue!!!
-
This just keeps getting better and better, there's a trouble with storms...one never knows what damage they will leave in their wake... Let Pitt keep his gloves and his moral distance. Jamie Blake was a storm gathering on the horizon, one the lieutenant would not ignore forever. Let William Pitt keep his polished mask. Storms didn't ask permission. I am stunned that Daniel is only nine, what a tough life he must have had to go to sea so early...
-
The holiday should prove to be entertaining at the least!!
-
Not all disabilities and illnesses are visible. A well-written story that gives us a glimpse of a day in the life of one who struggles.
-
- 4
-
-
This one hit hard and close to home for me. The son of a good friend has Crohn's disease and has lost his lower bowel from a surgical intervention and an ostomy. While he's feeling better, he'll carry a hidden reminder every day. There are new biologic drugs out there that can work wonders, such as , Humira, which I take monthly for psoriasis, a genetic cousin to Crohn's
-
Hummm Then a faint shuffle. Zereth, bloodied but alive, pulled himself from the rubble. His silver hair was streaked with mud and blood, his face twisted in rage and resolve. A handful of surviving Helmsfirth soldiers staggered to his side, and with a final glare at the oblivious heroes, he led them limping into the distance, vanishing into the smoke and trees. Don't we all wish to be so lucky... Ash tipped his head back and laughed, loud enough that a few soldiers turned to look. “He’s gonna be born swinging a sword, just watch. It’s in the blood!” GASP...you mean a piano-playing encyclopedia junkie???
-
But will it do Hugo any good where they end up next???
-
There are so many ways this could go, and the title is truly ambiguous at the moment as to whom the consequences will apply to... Three of the bandits have suffered the consequences of their choices... Sam learned some harsh consequences as well... Is their quest over with the return of the girl???
-
Oh my...that's an intriguing start!!
-
I think this was your best chapter, I loved the part with Cian...
-
Bout time and yes @Cane23, go...go...go power rangers!!! Is it too much to ask to give Scarlet The Bald this world's version of gastroparesis...oh wait...she might...it would spalin some things... Seriously, do what you need to get yourself taken care of!!!
-
Yes, but how many setbacks will they encounter??? Let's just let 'em kick ass from start to finish....
-
That's where Cian steps in....😄
-
How about when the battle is over and they find their romantic hideaway.....and Elion should get pregnant...
-
With descriptions such as below...no wonder Thalion hummed through a mouthful of food. “Oh, that one? The floaty, gentle one telling me to be calm and serene and all that rot?” He waved a hand. “Of course. She drops in now and then. I find her incredibly patronizing, but I do enjoy her breakfast suggestions.” Kieran’s expression darkened. “And you just listen to her?” “I don’t exactly get a menu of options,” Thalion said breezily. “It’s either obey or spiral into madness. And I hate spiraling before noon.”
-
Well the surprise that Holden and Elion were more than the sum of their parts was great, not as wonderful as Rory using the death curse... I must be an outlier, King Thalion we hugely unimpressive. It is way past time to put these A-Holes on the back foot, I mean...it's past time to take the initiative...
-
Glad to see things are smooth at the Dunlops, Amy seems like a good fit...Marie-Louise and teenage boys, what could possibly go right???
-
This should prove to be very interesting, however, Several of the leading archaeologists working in Egypt today happen to be women!!
-
I agree with the comments and as noted above, this was a very informative chapter....
-
Chapter 18: And Peng Makes Four
drsawzall commented on astroguy's story chapter in Chapter 18: And Peng Makes Four
My spidey sense is tingling as well...insert the theme from Jaws here.... "Thank you, I'll miss you," he told them, hugging both. "We'll miss you, too," one of them replied. The other added, "Don't worry, I'm sure you'll have a great time at BBC. My days in college were some of the best of my life." I hadn't really been listening, still preoccupied with societal taboos from Earth-616, but something clicked in my head. Wasn't that what my dads had said? Come to think of it, wasn't that what Lev at the hospital had said, too? "Yes," gAI verified. "Exact same words as your dads, and almost exactly the same as Dr. Metasis, not Lev." "My spidey sense is tingling," I told gAI silently. "I agree, that is … odd."
