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  1. drsawzall

    Chapter 1 Routine

    Judging by the introduction, this was the quiet interlude before all sorts of things begin to happen...and Luther can't imbibe, is it because of his abilities???
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    Chapter 7

    How about putting Matyáš in an airlock and pushing the button and take over the ship???
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    Chapter 12

    For me, this story isn't over till Ralph eats a copper-jacketed, hollow point 44 magnum round. Coincidently...there won't be enough to cremate... I felt the ending was a bit rushed and left open the possibility of a sequel...
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    Tom

    Well...that was interesting, why anyone would want a piercing like that is beyond me....do I understand male slaves are circumcised and free men aren't?
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    Alice

    I see nothing redeeming about Tom either...Mathew is the enigma I'd like to learn more about....
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    Dante

    Just so sad....
  7. And here I am driving a decade old F-250.....
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    Chapter 5

    Uh-oh...... Khonsu appeared in their midst, but it seemed that only Reggi could see him. “Treasure this day, for there are dark days ahead.” and then he disappeared. Reggi did not know what to make of that.
  9. Nuff said, we'll just have to agree to disagree....
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    Journey

    Interesting to see the family dynamic and wondering what comes next!
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    Rise

    Looks like a bumpy ride coming our way....
  12. The A-Hole ain't going away, with his limited brain power, and we know where it went courtesy of @Summerabbacat's comment, regarding the testing of bowel samples for cancer. I suspect the A-Hole was so bound up the day he sent his sample in, what remained of his limited cognitive ability passed for the sample.... He's the very sort when threatened to lash out, doubly so when it's one of those folks getting him into hot water...Jasper’s been scathing about everything the boy’s interested in. The man’s mouthing off about filthy queers worried Toby so much that he came out to me. I don't think Jasper can take this insult to his manhood as he should, more to the point, and I hope I am wrong, but Deirdre just may be in trouble as well. Ask yourself, if it is known among his 'mates' that he wants to catch young Toby out, how badly would he want to do so now??? Let's hope some 'evidence' somehow is found with the A-Hole and he takes a long vacation on the King's shilling... Brian pulled a face, “Basically he’s a nasty piece of work with a mouth on him but has no follow through.” “And a nasty obsession with queers, one guy said that Jasper wanted to ‘catch Toby out’ whatever that means.” So, according to the following, dressing for success applies in many situations....Had I known that in my younger days a certain sartorial splendor would make my clothes fall off, well...phew!!!! The hand reached the man’s groin as Gordon, on the other side, started unfastening Russ’ belt, an expensive hand-made leather one. Even just coming to visit them, knowing he was going to lose his clothes, Russ dressed well. Why do I think Mr. Russ may/might have a solution at hand????
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    Chapter 1

    Well done, with plenty of food for thought...
  14. I think we both may have a point, my last on this subject... Pirate Navigation Secrets: Charting High Seas Adventures Pirate Cartography: Maps of the Golden Age Unveiled
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    Part 8

    This has been a very enjoyable read!!!
  16. With the way the ocean constantly reconfigures shorelines. inlets and harbor entrances, any captain, good or bad, would keep notations of areas they would frequently sail to/towards....
  17. If as I suspect the ship is somewhat typical for the day, navigation logs of places visited, and yes charts/maps, would be kept. As someone who knows numbers and more importantly, how to read, it's not such a leap to see Pet absconding with either one or both....
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    Chapter Twenty

    Will Desmond be kissing Ash or Ash's ass??? Say that 3 times fast....
  19. Pet needs to somehow figure out what the location of the 'secret hideaway' is and use that information to affect his revenge....if he manages to escape...
  20. We've come a long way from our knuckle-dragging neanderthal days!!!
  21. I'd roll over to let you scratch my belly for a treat like that.... Ray couldn’t smell his wolf from this distance, couldn’t touch him, but he still felt it, somehow: the heat, the tension, the unspoken “I’ve got you,” that the wolf never said out loud. He just huffed, annoyed. Maybe he could buy him a nice dog collar with blinking LED lights to thank him for the protection. He’d sure love it. What's the problem Ray, you've been trying nearly everything to get off in the past 24 hours...wonder what happens if you should accidently touch or sit on the throne????
  22. Ray is more than the sum of his parts... “Kid … come here! There’s nothing you can do.” "He's fine," Ray whispered, his voice thin. "Weak... but fine." Brynjar's voice was low and heavy with warning. “Stop it! Vampires don’t have pulses." Ray blinked down at the unconscious man. "But... he does. He’s breathing," he insisted. "Slow, but... steady." Has he gone and created some sort of kinky bond, the bad boy???
  23. Staying the night could have been, not only letting off some pressure, bit very relieving...
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    Chapter 25

    Will Josel, Zdain, Darren, and Bartos, meet up with Franz at some point? Would it be possible that they all become the next generation of warriors against the darkness, much like Zal and his compatriots???
  25. DOH!!!!! “When Mr. Johnson was replaced by Mr. Durham, we tried. We asked them to meet somewhere else.” Quite suddenly, Mrs. Stevenson's bitter anger turned to fear and seemed to transform her into a very different woman. A woman scared for her family and her business. “Mr. Durham threatened us. Quite openly and directly. He's a mage, you know.” “The police can protect you from mages, too, Mrs. Stevenson,” Vee said sternly. “I'm interested in the man because he's most likely using a stolen identity.”
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