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Everything posted by drsawzall
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Good thing he wasn't intoxicated as well, as we all know the definition means "shot with a poisoned arrow"....
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You know that comment could also be considered damning....
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Well, throw an unfortunate accident at Matyas....
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Not to be confused with all the A-Holes that populate the vast majority of @Lee Wilson's stories...
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Excellent chapter, I'm curious if the Mayor twigged on to something about the boys and it looks as if Adam's memories just might have a role to play in the future... Was the following a mistake???? Rationalism witness, I couldn't even remember the last time I was without a collar. 74258 removed his collar without much difficulty and tossed it into the disposal bin. My paws were shaking so much that I couldn't take mine off right away. But 74258 just watched silently, knowing this was something I had to do myself. Finally, I steadied myself, removed the cursed restraint from my neck, and threw it aside, not wanting to have anything more to do with it.
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Things are going well, love the new boat and it reminded me of a boatyard that builds custom craft like the new boat and other styles. They have become so popular that the waiting list is phenomenal!! Hinckley Yachts I Iconic Picnic Boats. Luxury Sport Yachts. I understand that bitcoin and other crypto currencies can, and do, generate immense profits. But in the end, they are only glorified 'Ponzi' schemes. Too many of these fail at alarming rates and there are no guardrails to protect the investors, as we've seen in the news a year or so ago. My advice would be is to take your profits and run. So...the family sort of grows again, pretty soon they will need more than 2 pans of lasagna....
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I still say throw the frigging Captain out of one of the airlocks....
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Well done and a very interesting take along with one of the better lines in one of your stories... There have been many claims that we are a team who uses smoke and mirrors to show proof. We do not believe we do that, most of the time.
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Well...that was certainly setting a scene and a couple of screams... Not sure why but...this came to mind...
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Old Wounds, Fresh Blood I
drsawzall commented on Celian's story chapter in Old Wounds, Fresh Blood I
The results of not paying attention to what he was doing. This is not going to be good. -
Thanks for the proof to my earlier corollary...that this is a @Lee Wilson story where unicorns fear to tread....
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Late night revelations
drsawzall commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in Late night revelations
Well said, at the end of the day, nothing has really changed other than some of the darkness in one's life is gone away!! -
One other point I neglected to mention, your transitions from, let's call them different timelines/events, is a bit disconcerting as there isn't any referencing points letting us know the story has just jumped from one arc to another. Don't get me wrong, it's a fantastic story, one I am enjoying very much.
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I'm glad they are considering all of the options available to them, no matter if the child is gay, lesbian, trans, straight, or special needs, both need to realize it is a lifetime commitment.....whoever they adopt will find a home full of love and caring!
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Truly a sad couple of days.
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Late night revelations
drsawzall commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in Late night revelations
Vince has crossed that particular Rubicon whether he understands it or not...hiding behind a glass in the shadows only delays the inevitable... -
Sequentially this story is all over the place, making it exceedingly difficult to follow. While I am enjoying the story, I'm left scratching my head as to trying to understand the non-linear purpose.
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Part One: Bathroom Confession
drsawzall commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Part One: Bathroom Confession
Would that not be crumpled undies tossed into the corner??? -
Which just may be the source of his downfall....
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Act I - Touch-A, Touch-A, Touch-Me
drsawzall commented on Jack Poignet's story chapter in Act I - Touch-A, Touch-A, Touch-Me
Wow....did that bring back some fumbling memories.... Ray sat up straighter, eyes narrowing, voice suddenly softer. “Wait… could it be that… the heir to the throne… chair… whatever… the prime slab of meat around here… hasn’t done this before?” Gabriel’s gaze flicked away, sharp and fast. Then, finally, he looked him in the eye and… nodded. From heated, I want, need, have to, oh my god that's his dick I'm looking at, to he likes this, he frigging likes this as much as me, to...can we do this again???? Talk about blue balls..... -
Lord-almighty, that's quite the pickle Luther/Able/Jose/and Ian find themselves in...My senioritis is tickling my brain but...in a previous chapter did not Luther admit to killing Richter??? I'd run, and Able/76184....we now know he did make good his escape and let a part of his past come to the surface...Did he do it alone? "Have you ever seen someone hanged, only to be cut down just before they suffocate, only to be hanged again?" I ground my teeth and spoke slowly, though I couldn't stop trembling. "At first, before the suffocation sets in, their legs kick wildly for quite a while. Some say it looks like they're dancing." I let out a derisive snort, baring one side of my fangs in a sneer. "And usually, they'll lose control of their bladder--unless, of course, they've been dehydrated by the previous tortures. By the third time, they won't even struggle anymore. You'll have to revive them with a cocktail of blood oxygen agents, adrenaline, and cortisone just to keep them conscious for more of the strangling until they pass out again." The hairless skin on my neck started itching again, but I tensed my body, forcing myself not to scratch it. "Do you know how cruel that is? That, in the end, death becomes a mercy." The room was deathly quiet until the sound of liquid splashing on the floor broke the silence. Only then did I realize I was crying. Next chapter PDQ please and thanks
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Part One: Bathroom Confession
drsawzall commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Part One: Bathroom Confession
You could have named this chapter, "A Case of the Red Herrings" Loved the following, it described the effects of teenage angst and DSB (deadly semen-back-up) to a T...oops, did I mean testosterone??? “I could explain simple biology to you, at your age, your body is producing enough testosterone to power an elephant and your hormones are raging so crazily you can’t think straight,” Brandon said with a wry smile. “But that wouldn’t help you.” “Not really,” The boy said sadly. “The moment a boy gets a boner, for some reason he just loses all rational thought. -
On the whole, I think the dinner went well, our little passive-aggressive bitch, Cyril has landed himself a tart, that just might be smarter than he.... Another chapter or twelve please!!!
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Yes indeed...there's a girl tossed into the mix.....talk about complications!!!!! One hopes that after the next 3 chapters and the epilogue, Book 3 is right around the corner!!!
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And to think...you're just up the street from the "Ponce" hotel...a double entendre ifin I ever saw one.... Urban Dictionary: ponce
