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Instead of acting like a petulant spoiled brat, Jeremy needs to take a long look in the mirror... For instance, did he even think to do some investigating on a possible car, analyzing costs, budgeting and so forth...I am willing to bet the answer is no, creating a proposal that for a teen like himself that makes sense??? To do a little bit of homework on his situation instead of acting like the world owes him a favor??? From what I see, Ken is trying to reach out, not replace his father, Jeremy needs to smarten up, grab hold of his private parts and start acting like someone who comes to the table with solutions, while they may not be workable, at least then his efforts are trending in a positive direction... Up to now in this first chapter, Jeremy is a waste of space, a whiner...I have no sympathy for him. He is old enough to have a drivers license, and old enough to take the positive steps to make his life a tad easier...

Can we just say that Emmet was overreacting in this situation???

An interesting beginning and looking forward to seeing how this develops!

Loved this chapter, the nuances were subtle and sublime…. As with the case of most “Pick and Choose “ Christian’s, it is St Paul who is most often referenced when quoting the scripture regarding homosexuality…and yet at the same time he clearly states that women should never cut their hair or wear jewelry, along side about never speaking in church..

Did someone piss in Raymond's cheerios this morning?

Drat...a 'wait and see hanger'....do not pass up the chance to clerk for a justice of the Supreme Court and I do get the feeling we will be meeting Drew's father soon...do you think Drew's sister may be feeding information to their father??? Next chapter pronto buster!!!! Please, and thanks....

Oy vey such a mess….one step forward and twelve backwards….

Might there be more than one snake in the grass?

Jeremy, grab hold of your testimonials and suck it up. The pity party is so yesterday.

Mom, Mac and Devin in this order….valium, elope, and use a surrogate…..

Someone is like a pressure cooker left on the stove with the burner set on high....

Wondering what ‘K’s’ story is

Will they learn more about the man in the portrait??

Well...that blew my theory in the last chapter out of the water, so to speak....

Could Rod be the cause of the break-up with Quintin? Using a potion perhaps???

Don't know why but rod is a bit worrysome....

Rod needs to bend over a few times as well and Philkin needs to be a bit more assertive in his sexual escapades...

Phew...anybody have an extra cigarette? And I don't smoke, a shower may be better...

Wonder if Rodney is a pump and go type of fellow, three strokes and voila!!!!

A thought-provoking chapter to say the least...Here's hoping Drew's father takes a moment to reflect and see the forest for the trees...and the hell he is living in now....

Loving the growth between Ralph and Nolan and a very enjoyable chapter indeed!!

It will be interesting to see where this story goes, can't quite tell yet...will Dante make an appearance?

To me, this was a must read, one of the amazing stories that populate this site, making GA one of the best story sites out there. This story captivated me right from the start, hanging on to all the twists and turns, wondering where in the heck we were going to end up. In any author's work reader engagement is the goal, and judging by the comments this tale elicited from me, the author succeeded handsomely! What more could/can be said but...Read. This. Story!!!!

Danger Will Robinson...danger....

And we are all richer for the effort you put in, this was a seminal chapter even as new threads were woven into this growing tapestry. A master class in wordsmithing, so well written and presented. I'm repeating myself but this is one of your best yet to the detriment of my box of Kleenex.... Simply...wow....