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  1. drsawzall

    Chapter 3 of 10

    Not much to admire about Troy either, he made off with Seth's food as well!!
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    Chapter 17

    What a meal and gathering, and as noted, the flying, insect pest has yet to be heard from...and there is still the possibility of even more treasure to be found as well!!
  3. drsawzall

    Chapter 8

    Talk about what is called "Stinking Thinking".... Aidan insisted we have a celebratory dinner after Nikki's big news. While I was grateful that Nikki had somehow sold three of my paintings and handed me a one-man show and a new job on a silver platter, I couldn't help feeling that I didn't deserve any of it, or that it was all somehow a well-intentioned plot hatched by Nikki and Aidan to cheer me up. Sounds like someone needs to get in a car with Killian while Killian is driving blindfolded...WTF??? After everything Joey the frigging Putz did??? "Aidan..." "I've wanted so badly to tell you that I loved you, but I knew I had to wait, that you had to make the first move." "Aidan, last night was a mistake." Punching him in the stomach wouldn't have created the effect those words had on him. He seemed to cave in as his face fell. "What?" "We shouldn't have...done what we did." "Done what? Say it, Will. We shouldn't have had sex? What do you mean? You came to me. I thought you wanted me." "I don't know what I wanted. I still don't. That's the problem. I still love Joey, and right now I can't separate what I feel for him and what happened last night. Maybe I did want you, but what if I only went to you because I needed to feel loved, because I couldn't have Joey?" One can only hope Will was dreaming the ending of the last chapter....he needs therapy ASAP!!!!
  4. drsawzall

    Chapter 4 S3

    Someone needs a dope slap and an attitude adjustment...pronto...or he may end up like his mother in the future... While this was taking place, the seats would jerk about and pivot with every act that was taking place on the screen. I was glad when we finally reached the end of the ride, so we could move on to something more thrilling. “That was fun,” my mom said when the ride ended. “I guess, but it would have been more fun if we were still in elementary school,” I replied snarkily. “So, where do we go next?” Devin quickly stated before my parents could react to my comment. So...there is an evil skin walker near, best to let the grand's know ASAP...and nice to see the bullies taken care of...
  5. Sounds like bedrest to me....
  6. It must be a universal truth.... "My mirror reflects what happens in front of it, so I get it straight, and bounced. I tell ya, you don't miss much that way." "Can I borrow your mirror next time?" "No. You wouldn't be strong enough to hold it. You'd probably let it hit the floor and break into a hundred pieces, Nightstand." "You guys always pick on me because I'm little." Tall Boy and Mirrored Dresser echoed each other's responses, "Well, size does matter."
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    Chapter 3 (7/11)

    Is this where the Railroad song originates?
  8. The job of any parent is to guide their child!!!
  9. Passion excuses many errors in judgement....
  10. Don't touch the stove dear...its hot.....a moment later...ow!!!! Never listen to common sense.....
  11. drsawzall

    Chapter 3 (6/11)

    So how many Quana's are there? Are they cloning? Also, have they hidden tracking devices where the sun don't shine as well? “You’ve gotten sharper. I’m impressed you noticed the bug,” Edwin said with a chuckle, taking the dish and tossing it into a black box before snapping the lid shut. “Wait, is that gum wrapping?” “I had to improvise—it was all I had left. I have no idea where the rest of my gear went.” I said, a little frustrated. “Also, I think Klaus’s training really helped…” For some reason, my butt suddenly started hurting, but I decided to ignore what was clearly a hallucination. “So is it safe to keep that thing around? Could it reveal our location or something?”
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    Chapter 41

    David is adapting to new routines and visitors so it would seem... Sassafras is a tree with three distinctly shaped leaves and is also used to flavor soda in some locals...
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    Chapter 2 of 10

    Uhhh...Troy....what happened to minding the food??? Gay. Troy is actually gay. Suddenly I started flipping the fuck out. "I got to take a piss." I fumbled onto my feet. "I'll mind your food," he said with another cheeky smile. Legging it out of there I spent five minutes in the restroom thinking up an excuse to ditch him. After rearranging my new boner I stepped out and noticed Troy was gone.
  14. Admit it folks...we've all been there....no you dolts, you're keeping your clothes on....sheesh.... “OK, you caught me. The one time I went to a friend’s birthday party at a bowling alley, my first few rolls, someone guided me to the line and I rolled it between my legs. A few rounds later, after listening to everyone walk up and throw it, I tried that.” “Oh, that couldn’t have been be good.” “It wasn’t so bad. I knocked down seven pins.” “That is good.” “The problem was, they were in the next lane.”
  15. I'm not sure Jasper would be all that loquacious around Deidre as to his 'work' affairs...I don't think she's totally clueless, but wrapped up in how she views her life, as she thinks it should be... I'm not sold on Val and Marina change of heart unless there was/were another outside influence such as Noah's older brother.... Can't wait to see the fallout once Jasper and his cohorts are arrested and make the news...will that event force a change in Deidre's living situation???
  16. Or completely or willfully ignorant....
  17. drsawzall

    Discovery

    And now the noose is beginning to slowly tighten as Arlo is still being chased!!!
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    Bad Awakening

    It may not of happened just the way that Max envisioned it but...he's found a form of freedom...unlike Conrad who wishes for the quick ending a vat of molten steel offers... As to Chris, is he a survivor, a coward, or something else???
  19. drsawzall

    Prologue

    A sad reminder about just how far men can be pushed in a world of oppressive rules and morals....
  20. This story is a true gem and a worthy inclusion in the Can't Stop Reading feature!!
  21. This short story manages to pack quite the powerful punch over the arc of our two protagonists' lives. This is a terrific read!!!
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    The Answer

    As a fan of your writing, Bluegrass Symphony stands out most to me, I am surprised I missed this and now will go back to read more of your works. I though as others that both the story and the poem went hand in hand very well. That you were able to seamlessly move through the arc of their 'relationship' was so well done, and to me...this story stands on its own merits. I found the following line(s) to be very powerful... The most brilliant, wonderful smile lit Ian's face. "I'm in love with you. I have been almost from the start. You didn't ruin my life, Shawn." Ian rubbed a thumb across Shawn's cheek to wipe away a tear. "You were my choice. One that I have made over and over."
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    Preparation?

    Bryce constantly amazes me; in fact, the whole damned family does!!! What I can't remember, when did they gain another son?
  24. Where can I find 'bones' like that???? Gabriel’s fingers brushed Ray’s jaw as he helped him button his collar. “Next time you go as wolf, I’m actually buying the collar,” he murmured. Ray leaned in, brushing their noses together. “Only if I get to chew my favorite bone again.” And now we have some proof, we know from a past chapter the bitches, I mean the wart infested toad sucking leeches are slowly draining power from the wolves, and "mother'' says the magic words.... Ray's power does need to be studied, in the library, are there old, dusty tomes that that might/may hold clues??? What about the wolves that were chasing Ray at the beginning of this story, do we know/understand anything more about them???
  25. Danny and Ryder need, and I noted this in another story, no plan of battle survives first contact with the enemy....
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