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Everything posted by drsawzall
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Mommy dearest, what secrets will you reveal now that you, we all know there are compelling reasons your sister is the Queen....in your lust for Gab's power, you played your hand poorly, as it has been said before, not so wicked smaart!!! On a side note, I find it interesting that she reeked of Lillies...back in the day when folks held wakes and funerals at home, bunches of Lillies were placed in the room as the smell of them masked the smell of the bodies' decay...
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Wow...aren't we just a tad delusional, self-absorbed, and a potential serial killer in the making... "Well of course your day was fine," I called back as I started climbing the carpeted stairs to my room. "All you had to do was babysit handicaps for an hour or two." "I wish you wouldn't call them that, with that tone…" As she muttered I was rolling my eyes, kicking open the door to my bedroom and slinging off my bag. Dropping onto my bed with an exhale I forgot about her and brought my mind back to Seth Boughton. My perfect, sexy, soccer-playing boyfriend. I gave a lover's sigh and dragged down my pillow, clenching it tight to my body as I daydreamed. ******************* And in who's arms are you gonna cry in when you screw this all up??? Seth is not a special kind of person. At the end of the day he is still just a sporty ego-driven teen who desperately wants to fit in, just like everyone else. When school finishes he would find a job, a nice sweet slut, marry and have a couple of kids. They would've been so happy together, Seth and his wife. Whereas I would be stuck with some self-loathing freak. Fuck that. To me, all gay people are the same. They either work too much or they drink too much, and all that comes down to how desperately unhappy they are with themselves. I'm better than that and I wasn't going to take “no” for an answer. Just as well, now I have a perfect boyfriend because I didn't settle for less than I knew I deserved.
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Poor Liam, confronted with an ass that puts his girlfriend's to shame, that and a burning desire to tap it...
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Personally, I would like you to continue to keep the story character-driven and add some world-building as needed to fill in some of the backstory and augment the thrust of the story!
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Anduin is pathetically sad, he's a random nothing burger looking to give indigestion to all in his presence. The truly sad part in all of this is he knows he's just that...incapable of change, wallowing as a default mechanism...His cloud of misery gives everyone the vapors in his wake as he traverses the halls of that house...quite frankly he's become repetitive and boring...it is past time for he and Claire to tumble down several flights of stairs falling onto a basket freshly sharpened knives.
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You could raise the flag on the pole sticking up at the front of my pants... I watched him, waiting. “I don’t want this to be a thing we fumble through,” he said. “I want to do it right.” His voice was low. Measured. Like saying it out loud cost him something. “You caught me off guard last night,” he continued. “Not in a bad way—just… I wasn’t prepared to want something like that.” I blinked. Something like that?
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Death? and Canned Spaghetti
drsawzall commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Death? and Canned Spaghetti
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2025 Secret Author Story Contest-Reveal the Truth
drsawzall commented on Cia's blog entry in Gay Authors News
Anyone got a set of jumper cables so I can jump start my muse???- 17 comments
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They All Noticed Something Is Different
drsawzall commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in They All Noticed Something Is Different
Ya know, when @Lee Wilson gives us a chapter like this, we all know the wheels are gonna fall off the wagon...we got appearances by a Mel, and it sounds like relatives from the dark ages coming up.... -
My College Crush Is Getting Married
drsawzall commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in My College Crush Is Getting Married
10 days with an ex, and a guy who tweaks your sensibilities and a dozen or more folks you've never met...what could possibly happen????- 24 comments
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I suspect David will be building all sorts of cabins for this campground...and a robust septic system....
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Troy, it would be ok to carefully step down from that ladder of self-infatuation...
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I think the shorts were an icebreaker...
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Chapter 10 - The Mermonster
drsawzall commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 10 - The Mermonster
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Be right back, gotta wash my hands...that's right...that's my story and I'm sticking to it.....
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For god's sake Henry...be very aware when you go where angles fear to tread.... As I thought, Damir wants to use the 624, it would be serendipitous if they all shot each other... The Turd never fails to find the lowest point in the sewerage filled gutter.... Juan finally got thru to his team, how soon will Sid's effort to get the team going pay off and please his boss??? Angelica just got the answer to two plus two, how will she use that information??? “Yes, although I need to keep most of those details confidential as they are part of an active investigation.” The man’s comment reminded her that he was a law-enforcement agent as much as he was Teyshawn’s uncle, which made her pause for several seconds before deciding to ask her next question anyway. “You said my husband told the school to withhold Walter’s information and delay emergency care until he arrived?” She hated when people turned statements into questions but found herself struggling to transform her scattered thoughts into coherent words. “I’m afraid I can’t comment on that either. I’m sorry. I shouldn’t have even mentioned it.” She could tell that the man was lying, just as she could tell he had been watching her reactions like a hawk.
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Chapter 9 - Elstall
drsawzall commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 9 - Elstall
Sounds like their secret weapon just may be Kim Kardashian and her sisters....could drive the humans insane with all sorts of impure thoughts.... Kilial focused on her and whispered in a sultry voice that caught Nuji unaware. “Now, on to the sexy Rothian. What’s your kink, hottie? What naughty thing turns you on?” Nuji snorted a laugh and brought one of her long-fingered hands to her wide mouth in embarrassment, but she freely admitted, “I love a big, round, jiggly ass!” -
A random decision to take a side road led to quite the surprise!!
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A grand day out, a good time had by all, and an amazing new ability discovered...
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Who's driving the car???? Then there is Will, @Jeff Burton noted, a two by four upside the head, however, I think a sawed off 4x4 might be better... Was I suspect? Could I be arrested for fleeing the scene of a crime? Was I a material witness? What even was a material witness? Did I need a lawyer? I was in over my head. I needed to talk to a trusted adult. Too bad I didn't know any. Umm...how about Will, you need to talk to Dr. Wohler about this. Will has to be the most clueless, child-like, idiot ever...
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What's up with the Momster???
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And a fun time had by all, as noted before...whitewater rafting is about as much fun one can have with clothes on...I highly recommend it!!! I highly suspect we will be seeing more of Clint and Lonnie in the future!!!
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Anduin is a toxic, slow-growing cancer and needs to be excised ASAP...
