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    Chapter 9

    I suspect the same as well, the author’s denial could be a distraction… Lachlan is in idiot of the first rank…
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    Chapter 10

    Jonah had best watch his his back, if Dictor ever becomes aware of the North Carolina legal issues, it could be just what he needs to screw with everyone.
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    Chapter 6

    While my logic and reasoning part of my brain says he will, most of me thinks the two of them become a committed couple... When I returned to the bedroom, at first I couldn’t see Mike, but then I laughed when I spotted him sitting against the wall like a little boy. He looked so handsome I was overcome once again with my attraction to him. I wondered if I’d ever find another guy who would interest me as much as him.
  4. Personally, I think it might be Simon from the last story.... And..I hate it when this happens to me being forced to work with an incompetent employee from the past... And five years ago it had been said that the great battle mage Kellen McAdams had lost his magic in an incident and had therefore been kicked out of the CID. I couldn't use someone like that here and now. I needed a mage. Not a temptation.
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    Person Register

    Hummmm........
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    Chapter 33

    Bring your own bottled water and pass on the snacks...and NO face shots....
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    Chapter 21

    I would have an additional line item... E-- What about the ship Uncle Fran trying to reverse engineer? A subset to Question A 1) Who was the traitor working for, can one assume they were working with the invasion fleet disguised as Pirates? To me, the main issue wasn't the fact there was a traitor, but those they were working for.....Which are noted in Line Item C. I keep coming back to this from the introduction to the story... Warnings of the coming war that you have been secretly told you'll need to stop. An invasion force masquerading as pirates. When, where, and who disseminated this info to Marc???
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    Chapter 21

    This looks like it may be very interesting…. Aye Sa.” I went back to my workstation and started making changes I wanted on tomorrow’s plans as checked the latest reconnaissance again. I nodded as I looked at it. “You still think it will be tonight, Marc?” I turned to Ron. “We know they have it. They don’t know we know. If I were them, I would be starting to bring fleets through early tomorrow morning. Just before we Jump in.” I allowed my lips to lift in a feral grin. “We have, after all, been holding to a schedule.” He laughed. “We have indeed Admiral. Do you really think they fell for it?” I gave him a waggle of my hand. “I think we’ll find out tomorrow morning.”
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    Chapter 2

    Well...can this end well????
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    Chapter 5

    Muy caliente muchachos...and the evening is just beginning and more positions to experience....
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    Chapter 25

    Well...I learned something new today...and if it works on bovines, there are a few folks who would be coming after me if it is approved for human use, if it is already approved...I'm pleading ignorance.... Interestingly enough, if you add seaweed to the cattle feed you get healthier cattle and less methane coming out the back end. Hopefully we can have the beginnings of a thriving business that cleans the water and provides natural fertilizers for farms and feeds for animals. A week in P'town and that part of the Cape does not seem long enough!!
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    Chapter 34

    Still, it won't be all sunshine and roses as he is living off the grid. Admittedly he will have to use some solar and whatnot, but going to the outhouse in the deepest part of winter won't be pleasant, or during the hottest parts of summer...running water is not a bad thing to have!!
  13. Oh my goodness, this is very intriguing...
  14. What a fantastic chapter, so full of portends for the future....Well done!!!
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    Chapter 1

    Well done, brought back some memories!
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    23: Emmett

    I've had no issues at all here in Central Massachusetts!!!
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    Chapter 20

    Even Grandma's can make mistakes sometimes...this was a doozy....I still love her tho... From the intro to the beginning of this book in the series... Warnings of the coming war that you have been secretly told you'll need to stop. An invasion force masquerading as pirates. I have to wonder...is this in any way similar to what Marc found, and the one Uncle Fran had??? “Thank you Ron. Alexander out.” I went back and continued the tour. 20 minutes later Uncle Fran caught up with me as I looked dumb founded at the ship in front of me being built. I made introductions before he turned to me. “Did you expect this?” I shook my head no. “I knew something was here. I didn’t know it was this.” He nodded. “Give me and my teams a few days. We’ll see what you have.”
  18. So it is young Lord Nari...humm...Well I've use the GIF before in other stories but I believe it is appropriate here as well...We'll be looking forward to the chapters as they come and thanks!!
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    23: Emmett

    Yea!!!! The boys are back in town for another chapter!!! Loved this chapter and thanks, and I have to agree...the damned thing does have a mind of it's own.... “Good night, Finley,” I finally said, stepping backwards out of his embrace. “Drive safe.” The romantic in me was already spinning fantasies of a first kiss in the back of my mind, and a certain other part of me was continuing those thoughts. ,
  20. Thanks, I think I have a better understanding of what they/them represent...
  21. Of course Geometry escaped....reminds me of the following
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    The Awakening

    Very interesting tale of your first time, will there be another chapter?
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    Chapter 19 Kara

    Well, I learned some new slang today...clam smacking...not sure I can ever look at my fried clams the same way ever again...
  24. I think the questions posed by Richter that are only partially answered are building block of information, that as he progresses and quietly questions more around the edges of the unanswered questions, some of the gaps fill in... Still want to know more about "they/them"...
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