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  1. The iceberg known as Ralph is beginning to crack....with a bit of a struggle... Ralph blinked, "OK after last night?" He ended up smiling at the memory. "In case you had a morning-after freak-out." "I..." Ralph thought, "come in." There were croissants in the bag, good ones. Over coffee and croissants Ralph stared at Nolan. "Last night was fantastic." "But..." "I want to do it again."
  2. drsawzall

    Chapter 8

    I think Prince George needs to be kept in the loop via backchannel communication....
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    Chapter 8

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    Chapter 6

    Forgot Mom following dear old Dad...did she make the call to Dewey, Cheetham, and Howe or is she about to kick his ass out of the house and call the cops???
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    Chapter 6

    Well now....some thoughts as I adjust to being back from the left coast on vacation.... Seth's and Killian's attacker was solidly built... Then we discover that notes were left in Seth's locker...3 that we know of, printed off a computer printer, one belonging to the school??? If so, would there be a record of what each printer was doing, in my former place of employment when we upgraded printers/copiers, our IT Department had to remove the brains of each and they were brought to a firm that would destroy them, while they were there to observe...more importantly, if a school printer/copier was used, there will be a record buried somewhere on the network... I'm not completely convinced on Asher, what works in his favor is that Killian doesn't react to his voice... Killian's father, he's hiding something, more importantly, and I'd be judging this on his so-called record, if he's running for office in a homophobic town, the service is last place he should show up to...not many votes in that crowd... Zack and Jessie, where were they that late afternoon/early evening???? Then, why the supposed lack of interest in investigating, so quick to brush it under the carpet...Is Killian's father involved in this as well?? Once Killian hears that voice again, his life will be in grave danger, I'm not sure he could hide his surprise/recognition.... "What? How do you know?” “He kind of stopped when he saw who I was. He was going to kill me, too, but then he got a good look at me and just froze. He said ‘Shit,’ jumped up, and ran.”
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    Two

    @VBlew, now that would be a fitting gut punch to find out Dave's partner hasn't a frigging clue either.... Our protagonist needs to get hisself to a lawyer once he clears the garbage from his head and life...He needs to take the asswaffle to the cleaners.... Dave, and Gary for that matter are two of the lowest lifeforms imaginable, the nerve of Dave riding that road of betrayal for starters, I think the word I'm looking for is chutzpah, and these two have it in spades....here's hoping they both come down with an incurable rash down there!!!!
  7. Thank you for sharing this with us, the comments said it all for me!!!!
  8. This story is chock full of troublemakers...thake your pick, Todd, Anthony, dear old Dad, Barrett, jobs and whatnot... To me the following sort of suggest the real culprit....
  9. Barrett is a first class dofus...2 weeks...really... Is Dad having an epiphany??? Anthony, just a cheeseburger and a large order of fries from meeting his maker...
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    Chapter 3

    I think both Orion and Quinn suffer from DSB, (Deadly Semen Back-up) and should be forced to rub one out twice before bed and three times before work... I get the feeling something has to give and hopefully there isn't any blood splatter...
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    Chapter 2

    Let's see what happens when they talk to each other, not at each other...small steps portend a promising change....
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    Chapter 1

    Quinn...it's called maturity and being honest not only with yourself but others...
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    Prologue

    It sounds like our protagonist was at a funeral and was lucky to have survived an accident, perhaps the one the funeral was for was in the same accident?
  14. Well...all I had was humm, now all I got is I'm at sixes and sevens and need another chapter....
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    Chapter 6

    Thank goodness for the quick recovery time for our intrepid hero and his beloveds...and, have we truly seen the last of Christopher????
  16. A very interesting take on the ignorance of the times, especially concerning the mortality rates. I had a very bad sinus infection and the only thing that worked was Levofloxacin, it comes/came with some nasty side effects. In my case, and it is well documented side effect, it caused my Achillies Tendons to tighten to the point it was very uncomfortable to walk after 3 days of taking the drug... As well as the various stages of the Black Death rampaging thru Europe and England, I firmly believe that the "Church of Rome" was/is responsible for just as many deaths and historical tragedies up to this day....
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    The Last Party

    Like the moths to a flame or the candle simply sputtering out....
  18. If there was ever a time for the boys to share....
  19. As noted before with Anthony....Todd...those dangly bits between your legs...you know, the testimonials you claim to have...give 'em a grope and focus on what you truly want to do...the pieces and clues are all there...right in front of you...suck it up buttercup and get your ass to the work you want to do....suffering is/has been the inspiration for so many great works of art....just as an aside, van Gogh may have cur his ear off in frustration...your testimonials aren't comparable....
  20. Including @Tris...it is when the hair down 'south' turns white one needs to face their mortality...
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    One

    I'm hooked, in fact intrigued...the following is so well written... To make things worse, my relationship with my husband became more and more like two friends sharing an apartment. Not even particularly close friends at that. Even hugs had become rare by then.
  22. So glad to see you posting again and using available technology to assist you!!! Reat assured, I am loving this!!!
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    Pregnancy

    Once again, our George has found the proper tact for this engagement of superior forces allied against his happiness and future, with a deft adjustment and a trimming of his sails...
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    Chapter 5

    In the kitchen the faint but distinct sounds of a phone call being made, after a couple of rings..."Good afternoon...this is Dewey, Cheetham and Howe...the state's premier divorce attorneys...how may I direct your call?" Asher is the conundrum, are his motives pure, what else does he know, what was said in the verbal fight he had with our bad boys? Dad is heading for an ignominious comeuppance, and...just where were Zach and Jessie on the night in question???
  25. At the risk of repeating myself, All I got is humm....
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