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  1. drsawzall

    Finley

    Mo’s a passive/aggressive dickhead and I have newfound respect for Jake… And… Yes. That too. I generally don't drink." Dragons couldn't tolerate alcohol. That sounded silly, but it was the truth. The fairies are known for their alcoholic beverages, the dwarves for their beer, but we stayed away from it. I wasn't quite sure what alcohol did to us, but I didn't want to try it either. Stronger dragons who could spit fire in human form, like me, often stayed away even from bars, because one spark in a burp and the alcohol-laced air plays fireworks.
  2. drsawzall

    Emmett

    A bar appropriately named Tempest…..what could possibly go wrong/right… As noted above it would be ice to further understand everyone’s background….
  3. drsawzall

    Finley

    I’m thinking tremendous fireworks…what did go wrong in/over the Andies?
  4. drsawzall

    Emmett

    Well now…some progress it would seem however slight….
  5. drsawzall

    Chapter 3

    What could possibly go wrong...or right...
  6. Looking forward to the next chapter after all the issues raised in this chapter....considering the following... The unthinkable destruction of a major faction, with thousands of territories and millions of subjects, armed with advanced technology, would shake this world to its core.
  7. drsawzall

    Chapter 9

    Or twice a week??? Freaking loved this chapter, leave it to an intolerant nut job to spoil the party as it were...
  8. Bravo, it is tremendous to see such a well written story do so well!!!
  9. drsawzall

    Finley

    Well, if in this world dragons snort fire, I wasn't to far off then....many thoughts and questions, why the military and his background...and yes to being a dragon, hopefully the BBQ sauce improves the taste of idiots and A-Holes....
  10. drsawzall

    Emmett

    f course fin is a bad boy, he frigging smokes...could his power have anything to do with fire???
  11. Loved this chapter, so many good things happening...what's the difference between a Rockettes chorus line and Jackie??? A cunning array of stunts....
  12. drsawzall

    Chapter 9

    humm....what could the following possibly portend??? I stood on the Dock and watched as I waited for them to depart. All the time working out how our relationship would work as a Bonded set of Mates. And unless they or I will change lifestyle, we wouldn’t. I shouldn’t say that. I could. They could stay on their ship, and I would stay here mining. We would see each other two, maybe three, days a week. I could live with that, but I don’t think they could, as they are having so much trouble handling this. Maybe in time they would be alright. I watched as the ship pulled away and the running lights blinked. One last wave to me, which I returned, and I headed back to my quarters and bed.
  13. drsawzall

    Prologue

    Well now, I will be nice to catch up with Josel, but I am curious for a bit more background on the following... Zal nodded. "All right then. We'll have to find something for him to do. He can't get over the loss of his wife and children, but he can learn to live with it if there is something meaningful to do." The blond man frowned and looked at his brother, who mourned the cruel death of his own family. "I'm sure we'll come up with something," he said. In addition to brotherly love, his concern was probably mixed with a sense of guilt. After all, he had made a terrible mistake. As a result, his brother Avinnor was now in this state, having lost his family and perhaps his sanity.
  14. God I am so angry, I'm not sure if anyone knows, but in many ways Nick's story was ripped right from the pages of the Boston Globe and the sad, and I'm not sure sad is the correct word to use but...I digress, story of Elijah Lewis, a 5 year-old boy killed by his mother and boyfriend...who weighed 19 lbs when the autopsy was conducted... I was watching the news before reading this and a segment came on about the sentencing of the mother and my blood was boiling mad... if anyone would like to know the particulars the following would be instructive... Mother of Elijah Lewis pleads guilty to 5-year-old's murder (bostonglobe.com) Nick, truly the bravest boy ever!!!
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    Chapter 9

    Two frigging weeks to get his glasses/contacts, WTF???? Simply no excuse for the delay.... Zac and Jessie just might be in cahoots with Killian's father... Asher is a wuss...not sure I can trust him; it is beginning to look as if he is setting him up...something is off with him, and he simply doesn't ring true...hope I am wrong...How is he gonna square hanging with the A-Hole twins when he is back spending time with Killian, and how is Killian going to deal with all his, "I'm staying stuck in the closet" mode???? Kane, it is time to level the 'you've been lying to me Mom...and when I turn 18...the last you'll be seeing of me, is my backside as I walk out the door!!!! Mom...proving to be quite the match for Killian's father, and another who simply didn't fully think things out when lying to her son....
  16. dear lord in heaven, Ralph is 35 for goodness's sake....talk about the 'original helicopter parents'.... The twins know more that assumed..... Ivor has the right of it... Ivor considered, “I know this might sound a bit radical, but what harm might there be in just ignoring them and doing what the hell you want.” What indeed?
  17. drsawzall

    Chapter 1

    I think this story has legs, would love to see more!!
  18. drsawzall

    Chapter 35 S2

    A very nice chapter indeed…
  19. This is gonna take some patience and possibly a spare keyboard...it helps knowing that the POS parents do face 'justice' and pay for their behavior/actions against the children...
  20. Well now, what will become of all this kerfuffle?
  21. drsawzall

    The Garden

    Oh my goodness...the angst permeating this chapter is palpable... and as our esteemed @Summerabbacat noted, Jackie is playing a version of Beach Blanket Bingo...gasp...with a continental...and Gordy, while his play may/might have been innocent, what hidden desires has he woken, will Arthur become more than a 'buddy'????
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    Chapter 8

    Killian, once again not thinking things through all the way through....good on Mom, let's hope her plans are finalized quickly, and just where is dear old Dad when he isn't coming home????
  23. drsawzall

    Chapter 6

    With all that the local constabulary is involved in, I'm sure the visit by them, was just that and surprised that it simply wasn't a simple phone call....
  24. Or a bungeup of Quokkas.....
  25. drsawzall

    Chapter 13

    Thank you for the comments along the way and sticking with the story, it is greatly appreciated. I would be very interested in your thoughts after you've had time to digest the story. Again, my sincere thanks!!!
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