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What Misunderstanding?
drsawzall commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in What Misunderstanding?
Could it be he's getting his info from the phone via a program similar/like Alexa or Waze??? It would be a hoot, or a howl, if Average Joe was his intended.... -
I sense there might be an inevitable series of confrontations coming up, the attack that failed to kidnap Richter has set some larger forces in motion...much sooner than planned...
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Talk about putting my foot my cookies in my mouth....
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Fantastic chapter, Marc needs time to process the events from the beginning. There are still many unanswered questions as well. As a warrior Marc has no peers, his strategies are first rate and now is the time to put those processes to resolving his personal issues. Some things were blown out of proportion, other issues had tragic results. With so much responsibility now Marc needs to delegate all that he can. Orders/commands/requests to those in his family who chose to operate independently need to be clearly understood moving forward... To me and my way of thinking, much of what's noted below still has questions to be answered... Warnings of the coming war that you have been secretly told you'll need to stop. An invasion force masquerading as pirates.
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Dinner with Rod and Continued Improvement
drsawzall commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Dinner with Rod and Continued Improvement
Like @weinerdog how did he get the booze??? I can't completely blame Rod, his parents, however I specifically blame his father...... -
Chapter 17 - Regrouping
drsawzall commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 17 - Regrouping
Hopefully Candi and the wagon will show up... -
Me hungry for the next chapter
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Wonder if they might happen across an audition for Idol....
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Looks like nothing is going to be easy.....
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Is there the slightest, remote chance that Claire and Brittany might be related??? What a sad commentary on this civilization.... "No, on the contrary. But my ma wasn't too happy about my decision not to follow the family tradition. My big sister is more made for it, but I..." She sighed again. "I really like the concept of our school, you know, a lot of it is very individualized and not mass processing, but there are still a lot of slaves. And many of them are just incredibly young and often not even mentally mature enough to serve in our current society. That creates a kind of pressure, not only on the slaves, but also heavily on the instructors, where I know I'm not up to."
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What is it that Qana isn't saying and how does it tie into Aether's comments??? Sounds like some high stake's skullduggery to me...
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Can't disagree with any of the comments above...however the following gives me pause for thought...I don't see the Fat Lady singing anytime soon...... “OK. Let’s work some movement in to this.” Ron moved over to the HoloTable and handed me the latest from the probe launch I requested. I scrolled down the info before handing the tablet back. “I know something is there. I can see its ghost, shadow, whatever you want to call it. But I can’t tell what it is.” Ron was looking at it, too. “Do you want to try to draw it out? Send a Wing in under cloak.” My hand pulled on my chin. “Maybe. Not sure if it would or not, but it would be great if they could get a visual on it.” I sighed. “Let’s try it.” Ron ran up a search pattern and showed it to me. “Yeah. Try it and let’s see what happens.” I tapped into the probes we had launched and pinged them a few times during the search pattern, and I was looking at the results as Ron watched the HoloTable. Nothing happened. I raised an eyebrow at Ron. “Thoughts?” He shrugged. “No idea and I checked with the Wing. They saw nothing on visual either.”
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Thank you for sharing this with us!!!
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Wolf will be a protector and a great friend; Uncle Joe will be very pleased!!
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The players are nearly all set in what might be an incredible confrontation...
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Chapter 22 That’s The Way She Goes
drsawzall commented on JLynch's story chapter in Chapter 22 That’s The Way She Goes
Who is he.... “Jesus!” Cornish yelled, reflexively squeezing his butt cheeks together and swiveling around. Seeing who it was, he responded in a tight gruff voice, “You again!” That same guy, the one that had been hanging around his dock the other day. The one with the cap pulled down on his forehead. Lanky, dark hair, menacing. And where did Elliott go??? -
Is there another shoe to drop??? “Do we need to be worried?” Gordon paused, “Not sure. Sleep on it. Don’t say anything to Toby, yet.”
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An arduous evening for these folks, what other traps lie ahead and what will they finally find?
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Intrigue and Double Cross.
drsawzall commented on E K Stokes's story chapter in Intrigue and Double Cross.
Or was the Syrian army on high alert in anticipation of Rashid's orders? -
Chapter 7 - Resonance 7.3
drsawzall commented on RedMoon's story chapter in Chapter 7 - Resonance 7.3
Amazing, with such a strong, core belief about mixing up the gene pool in this society, the action almost seems counter-productive to Piqsirpoq's vision of the future... To what point and what intended results are they going with this blatant attempt??? To create/clone a series of Richter's? Normally, this wouldn't necessarily be a problem, especially given that we live in such a highly stable artificial environment where we don't need to worry about some massive extinction event happening suddenly. But the high-density compressed codes in our genes mean that even a small drift could cause countless precious legacies to vanish forever! This was one of the first things every wolf is taught as soon as they're old enough to understand--the immense responsibility we bear. "Would it matter?" Piqsirpoq said faintly, his voice unnervingly calm. "Let what belongs to the past disappear." He slowly closed his eyes again, his breathing steady. "The future belongs to those who are willing to envision a new world, not to those who like echoes, endlessly wander the decaying tombs of the dead." As if to emphasize his point, the echo of Piqsirpoq's words lingered in the ward, refusing to fade away. "I will change this world, liberating everyone from these irrational shackles." He didn't speak with the tone of someone making a vow or setting a goal, but rather as if he were simply stating an inevitable fact. -
To make more rum????
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Chapter 7 - Resonance 7.3
drsawzall commented on RedMoon's story chapter in Chapter 7 - Resonance 7.3
The slow roll-out of answers continues apace the slow-roll out of questions...very intriguing to say the least...like others, we need to know more about just who/what faction hired the canines!!! -
Chapter 7: To the Castle
drsawzall commented on The Radish Spirit's story chapter in Chapter 7: To the Castle
I think there is a dearth of age-mates for Nari, and of those available, I get the sense they may passably tolerate him, just guessing here...Then there were some clues as to his sexuality as well... The tree in the courtyard has some significance/importance and may have some importance to Ben. One has to wonder just how long will Ben stay, or is this all a realistic dream he's having??? Loved this chapter, need more!!! -
Rod Apologizes and Domenico Returns
drsawzall commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Rod Apologizes and Domenico Returns
I still don't trust Rodney Dickhead.... "I'm really sorry I was an asshole. I, I don't know. I let my feelings about gay people override friendship. I'll do whatever it takes to make it up to you guys." Doesn't sound as if he's truly contrite... Aunt Carmella needs to kick Uncle Asswaffle to the curb....
