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  1. drsawzall

    Prologue

    Boy...does this bring back memories...navigating the gay world without a guidebook...
  2. drsawzall

    Chapter 1

    Thanks for this and I remember those days when.....now if I could only swivel my hips like Elvis......
  3. drsawzall

    Chapter 1

    From the frying pan into the fire....
  4. drsawzall

    Prologue

    What do we have here??? That was an interesting start...
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    Regret: 10.1

    Have you thought of taking your writer's block out for the evening, hopefully a couple of shots and a beer or two along with some barroom snacks would/could do the trick.... Thanks for the chapter and whether he likes it or not, James just learned something...
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    Chapter 9

    Ok...everyone has made the points I wanted to comment on....all I got left.... Where is the damned antique Benz???????????
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    Chapter 8

    At least the boys are being honest with each other...for now... Have I mentioned Victor is a frigging twat??? “Okay.” Ms. Everton holds up her hand. “I got the picture. But Jonah, you can’t skip your classes. You just gotta go.” “You make it sound so easy, but this was so bad and he probably thinks I’m gross now. Can’t you just move my classes around? Or better yet, I will consent to euthanasia.” Ok...admit it folks...we've all been there at one point...
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    Chapter 17

    That Marc needs professional help is obvious and given the tools to better understand the issues he needs to confront. What is disappointing is that he needs to feel the world/universe revolves around him, not a good thing....His relationship skills need work, he lives on assumptions and expatiations, not the positive traits of good leadership.... So, what of those who attacked the base, endangering Marc's family and Bonded? Who was behind all of this, it is very telling that it would seem that little to no effort is expended to find out who and why.... We now know more about the 2nd mystery ship, what do we know of those people???
  9. drsawzall

    Chapter 3

    As noted before, Ben has all the consistency of Marshmallow Fluff, vapid is another word that pops into mind, and somewhat similar for the inane commercials that pop up in between segments of your favorite TV shows...
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    Wanted Sons

    I need some time to process this chapter, so many threads in this tapestry are now forming a loving pattern, of faith in doing the right thing, knowing the hope will be realized, and the awesome power of individual connections. Like many, I would be delighted to see any spin-offs and hopefully soon. It's been a long day of snow and ice storms, and I will be back in the morning to better say what my mushy brain is unable to at this time. I wonder if there's room in Rocky and Orlando's car trunk for a certain, obnoxious someone, cough, gasp, wheeze, nudge...nudge...say no more Jean Lundgren....
  11. Well...with Momus as part of the date I suspect they will be on their best behavior...or not once Momus goes to sleep...just sayin....
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    Hope

    To the day we live long enough to see... "In boot camp, a rookie explained that he was late for muster because he overslept. The commander angrily asked if he knew what would happen if all the soldiers in the world overslept." I glanced at the mutt, who tilted his head. "The rookie replied, 'Then we'd have world peace.'"
  13. drsawzall

    Chapter 16

    Our 4''...get your minds out of the gutter folks...just turned into freezing rain...thank goodness for the whole house generator
  14. Loved this and glad to see it will continue in some form and fashion...
  15. drsawzall

    Chapter 1

    Here's hoping they encounter little trouble in a dangerous occupation...
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    Chapter 16

    Overlooked here is who is/was behind the attack, and if successful what would they have done with Adam and the blended families???
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    Chapter 16

    It's early days in their relationship and I feel Marc's impulsiveness and rash actions can/could come back to bite him in the ass...I can't at the moment remember who said it but the e following quote applies to Marc..."Revenge is a dish best served cold".
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    Chapter 2

    So why is Cheffy following Ben??? From Ch 1 And then, at that exact moment one day, just when he expected someone to buy for him, Cheffy walked into the bar and all eyes turned on Cheffy. It seemed they had all—down to every last one of them—forgotten all about Ben and buying him a drink.
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    Chapter 12

    Well...spank me silly.....living proof that sometimes sober times can be dangerous....
  20. Sounds like the Hotel California to me....
  21. Oh my goodness...Richter has no idea as to what his hormones are going to do to him....
  22. Poor Louie Lee, a terrible way to go and for being a "Ghost" our man isn't infallible...is he... Cakes are baking, the noose is tightening, and what of the body stuffed in the outhouse????
  23. drsawzall

    Chapter 12

    And just exactly is/are the goal(s), it's a bit nebulous at this stage, to what end are they working? “Apart from you two? I used to take myself off to a gay resort in Palm Springs. That sort of thing. Sometimes you’d meet guys who were interested…” “But?” “Difficult to tell if they wanted my bum, my connections or my cheque-book.” “Shit.” “You mentioned about other guys having no qualms about taking money.” Russ pulled a face, “My interpersonal skills leave something to be desired when faced with a sexy guy”, he laughed. “So, sue me.”
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    Chapter 1

    Thank you for this, you made my morning with a smile and chuckle!!
  25. Avery generous offer by Russ, I thought it was telling as he described the different boyfriends, none of them equating to Brian and Gordon, and the offer to help with the wedding costs truly showed the three of them connect on a very different level...I have to think the Russ sees something in them as they simply value the friendship...unlike... “Apart from you two? I used to take myself off to a gay resort in Palm Springs. That sort of thing. Sometimes you’d meet guys who were interested…” “But?” “Difficult to tell if they wanted my bum, my connections or my cheque-book.” “Shit.” “You mentioned about other guys having no qualms about taking money.” Russ pulled a face, “My interpersonal skills leave something to be desired when faced with a sexy guy”, he laughed. “So, sue me.” Now it makes sense to me when faced with a hunk!!!
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