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Everything posted by drsawzall
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Like a fine stew, the plot thickens….
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I suspect this will be a brief stop once Rym learns of his location. He's landed on his feet and will be able to learn and absorb the information that will help him along the way. His skills are needed, and one wonders if he will travel to other villages...
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Truth's Hardship, Pt. 2
drsawzall commented on Mike Carss's story chapter in Truth's Hardship, Pt. 2
One hopes Calum's learning curve kicks off and he's no longer slow on the uptake... As for his hiding skills, he's learned it is better to be pissed off rather than pissed on... Bring on the next chapter...oh wait...it's already there....a two for one night!! -
Yes, what is written and the meaning behind both please and thanks!!!
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Got a message for Browbeat...check out the following... Once again Geron, thanks for this...!!!!!
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A return to Benteen for the New Years???
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Thank you for this, it is/was appreciated. Every author hopes to engage his readers, and boy oh boy you certainly engaged this reader as you could tell from my comments...To that, I say Job well done! I look forward to what comes next, and I would like the following... or the supplementary short stories in chronological order (which would mean some short stories interspersed between the novels). I hope in the continuation Killian remembers his drivers ed classes before getting behind the wheel, otherwise I'm taking the keys...Just sayin...
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Russ Kahn and gay Gordons
drsawzall commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in Russ Kahn and gay Gordons
Love it!!!!! Can't wait for the next chapter, but I've thought the same for your other story...The meeting at the photo shoot is going to be very interesting, Morrie should have Toby and Noah model appropriate 'young men's' garments!!! -
Juan certainly isn't a fool, but a wise young man, he's the exact opposite of the Piss-Ant Riz, who by the way wouldn't' know how to take advice...The "Old Artefacts" by the way have been around the block enough times to understand discretion is the path to survival... What is already working against the fuckwad rat-faced pissant, is the story Sam is about to see hit the press regarding Thomas and his boyfriend. With that much publicity, kidnapping or otherwise harming either one of them, would be the death knell of the mob. The heat brought on by an outraged public would reverberate pretty high up, kiss your rat-faced ass goodby...can you say expendable??? I would not be surprised if clandestine meetings and information shared between the Old Artefacts and Juan's team... Chapters can't come fast enough, I've tried waiting so I could read two at a time but...that only leads to wanting three at a time...dang it!!!
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From your lips to God's ears and thank you for your thoughts and comment on this day.
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And that's why I won't ride with Killian till he's like 45
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Death? and Canned Spaghetti
drsawzall commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Death? and Canned Spaghetti
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Sometimes the power of a story are in the words unsaid, leaving the reader to fill in the blanks. A simply powerful story in a brilliantly compacted form.
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Chapter 6 - Close Encounters
drsawzall commented on ChromedOutCortex's story chapter in Chapter 6 - Close Encounters
It needs saying again, not all of this is Mason’s fault…..- 9 comments
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Oh my…..
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Mom needs a straitjacket….with a gag…
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If there was a wrong way to act, and a prize awarded for it, Killian wins hands down…dangerously impulsive and lacking the common sense god gave him…. One of the best things about GA is that it attracts fantastic authors who take the time to grace these pages with their work, along with the ability to comment. And this story engendered strong reactions and comments from me, and that is a testament to a job well done… Not sure I want to be a passenger in any car Killian is driving tho….
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We may see Michael working remotely….humm?
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Thank you for sharing this with us!
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Dang…where’s my Kleenex.
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Here in Boston Ma, there was a high class 'Escort" service that got busted, with many notable citizens as 'customers, from politicos, legal, court and otherwise, to those in the highest offices in the business world. Efforts, so far to bury the list of clients by those who would be embarrassed, are pulling so many strings and favors, delaying their days in court. At the moment, it looks as if they won't suceed....here's hoping anyway... Not only is it possible that the Chief just may have a dirty, offending member, but I am willing to bet there are a lot of VIP's wanting to see Uncle Charles silenced. So...the race is on, protect the scumbag from those who want to silence him, find the 'mole', you can tell that little shithead Riz, hasn't the experience to understand what he's up against...he'll be sleeping with the fishes before this is over... Then there's Sam, hooking on to the story/opportunity of her life, a story if told right is worthy of a Pulitzer.... Just when we could all see the story arc, thanks @Mattyboy, this has exploded into a blockbuster.... What more could be said but...Wowzer, bring.it.on!!!!!!!!
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Chapter 5 - Fixing Stupid
drsawzall commented on ChromedOutCortex's story chapter in Chapter 5 - Fixing Stupid
I have to repeat myself here, Mason is not entirely to blame here, there is guilt with all involved...- 5 comments
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I'm reminded of the old saying..."You know why bosses are considered to be like diapers?" "Cause they are always on your ass and full of shite".... “That is not good enough, you need to come into work and fill in a form to get leave,” came a response. “As I said yesterday, not happening. I accepted this job on the condition that my family and my university studies come first, no matter what… This was agreed to by the company, so you have to stick by that agreement, and as I said before if you don’t like that, then I will quit. I have to go now as I have a family to be with at this difficult time, goodbye,” I said before ending the call.
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At this rate, will the boys have any bullets to fire come New Year's Eve????
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It is called ''Crossing the Rubicon" Alan, hike up your skirt and give your testimonials a squeeze.... I teased Alan about wanting to rent the loft because Brandi might throw in some personal considerations for him. He grimaced and said, “Ha! She could be my mother and seems like a retired hooker. I’ll just take my personal considerations from you. Thank you very much!” A little surprised at his comment, I grinned happily and said, “That can be arranged.”
