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I've learned to keep tissues handy when reading your stories...it's a good thing too!! And then, one of the best sandwich joints I have ever had the pleasure of visiting...primantibros.com

An interesting chapter, how will brother and sister find each other and where is Simon???

As a facilities manager I was once called in for a fire alarm at 2AM...turns out a review of the video of the incident showed a new member of the cleaning staff wanted to clean behind the pull lever for the fire alarm...

Oh dear lord...just where do I begin...the chapters just keep getting better... I kept thinking of a yo-yo during this part...that and someone was messing with them... “Golf-Hotel One-Three-One, Sierra X-ray.” “Golf-Hotel One-Three-One, Sierra X-ray.” “Golf-Hotel One-Three-One, Sierra X-ray.” So frigging true, the IT Department tech's just loved to have fun with this old dinosaur whenever I had to call 'em down cause the Fisher Price 186 they gifted my office failed to understand me.... “Yes. As good as he is as a police officer, he’s too daft for a computer. He describes what he wants, and I do it.” I looked at each of them. “Oi! I’m sitting right here, chaps!” I once told a date I didn't wear a watch or jewelry as I looked better with nothing on... “Help me! I need to choose clothes for an important date.” She laughed. “That sounds so girly!” “Don’t care. I’m happy with my feminine side. Help!” “I’ve only known you for six months, mate, but you’re so not you at the moment. Must be, quote, important, unquote.” “Rebecca!” She sighed. “The answer to the question of what to wear to a date with a man is simple.” “And?” I asked when she didn’t come forth with the answer. “You must highlight your assets, cutie-pie, and the best way to show off your nice six-pack is to wear nothing.” You mean to tell me tropical shirts aren't the fashion accessory everyone needs or goes with anything??? “You must highlight your assets, cutie-pie, and the best way to show off your nice six-pack is to wear nothing.” Over her laughter I said, “Don’t take the piss. I really need some help here.” “Okay, okay,” she said and rummaged through my cupboard. Checking my stuff, she said, “Jamie, your membership in the gay club needs to be revoked. You have absolutely no sense of fashion.” Where did I put the frigging engagement ring.... “Nam said one other thing.” “Which is?” “That you’re daft. Say yes.” “Mike,” I began. “What do you want me to do? I’d fall on my knees now, but we’re in a blooming car!” “You’d do that for me? “Instantly.” While I can honestly say it was only a rumor, an acquaintance was reported to pop the question to his intended after a tryst in the bathroom whilst sitting on the throne...

I could not have said it any better, it will be fun to watch Keith 'discover' himself!!!

Frustration isn't just an emotion, but a destination for some...this was a chapter at cross purposes to say the least...

Let's just say if I were in a kitchen with Gordon and he was spewing expletives towards me, or anywhere else for that matter, he'd be eating a frying pan, wondering if his insurance would cover the dental work...

Loved this chapter, Kenny is going to find the space and room to grow living with Billy and his partner...The video as mentioned in the last chapter stands on it's own, and if Judge Crusty Pants fails to see it, on appeal it will make him seem incompetent. The last line in the quote below may be missing a word...I agree with @VBlew on the "you' to 'he'... As noted before, there isn't any freaking way Calvin is going through all this if there isn't $$$ to be found...while it is very improbable and highly unlikely, unless he needs the boys for organ transplants...and I wouldn't put it past him to sell one or two... “Disgusting,” Steve said. “It was. I called him out on it several times, but he'd just pay dumb.” “I'm glad you abandoned us,” Bryan said. “Me too,” Caleb added. “We have the best dads now.” “Thank you, Mijo,” Diego said, leaning over to give Caleb a hug. “I know your dad and I are the luckiest dads on the planet to have two of the sons ever.”

Plans are afoot to intercept any possible kidnapping, would love to see the look of surprise on the poor fools once they realize their plan has failed...better caught alive rather than dead...better PR!!! Both Granger and Calvert are suffering from a bad case of coitus interruptus or delayedus...Both need to rub one or two out before they let pent up hormones dictate what come out of their mouths...and truly make an effort to put the past in the past!!! I love Dr Jackson for making me look like I know doctoring...while I did sleep in a Holiday Inn Express once, I can only hope the last of Calvert's uniform has been excised from the wound!! Enjoy the clip...I just loved this chapter!!!

Every freaking day and twice on Sundays???

Curious as to what is behind the following, overpopulation or greed? Ascending the high point, Twm began. "The nmblings are more numerous than we thought. They are also more deliberate in their movements and tactics. I fear they are executing a coordinated plan against our settlements. Henry and I observed a massive number of nmblings on the plains. Usually, they like to stay close to their home settlements. The nmblings are on the move and appear to be repositioning their vast numbers."

Thanks for sharing this with us, keep 'em coming!!

One of your better chapters yet...just the right touch of humor and kids saying/doing the darndest things... New characters coming into the story, but not for long...what are the odds they are homophobes???

It was nice seeing Harper again and learning a bit more about her feelings, looks like the downhill slide with Reggie is about to become an avalanche, or not...She has opened another door to her sexuality, let's see where it leads to... No doubt Carey has/is a twink magnet, seems like he just may spend his summer practicing the horizontal mambo!!

A thoroughly enjoyable, well written chapter!! Loved the pacing and the realism which is making for a great story...Now the need to learn and understand more about Mike... Loved the following... “Drop the knife!” He looked at the weapon in his hand, then at me. “Drop the knife now!” Two things happened at the same time. To me, such situations always seemed like a movie in slow motion. I saw his face change to angry, and he flung the knife at me. I pressed the trigger on my Taser. Although I knew it sounded stupid, I thought I saw the Taser needles leave my weapon and the cable-connected projectiles fly past the incoming knife that came straight towards me. I shifted my stance, while the Taser needles connected and the electrical jolt made the boy cramp up and fall to the ground. The knife had flown past me. I heard it clatter to the ground. The rest of the Taser discharge procedure had to be followed. “You’ve been hit by a Taser,” I explained calmly, “You’ll feel disoriented. Do not attempt to move or stand.”

Miles' true colors are coming rapidly to the fore...and he's proving to be quite the right prat... And mom is finding out her younger son has been quite successful and settling down quite nicely, along with being open minded and quite fair about all sorts of things!!

Looking forward to seeing just where all of this goes...great start!!!

What a great chapter, can't add much to what has been said...fingers crossed for Nonna!!

I had to go with WOW...and in a good, positive way...It is well done, great conception, and it kept me on the edge of my seat... Barry...so frigging smart he can't realize what he doesn't know, proof neanderthals exist... Thomas, good on you for getting your point across... Adam...needs a restraining order and a right cross to the jaw al la Barry, more proof neanderthals exist...WTF is his issue...what is done is done...much a control freak??? Zack...Good on you, you should report Adam or have him sent a notice that trespassers will be prosecuted...What stage is his stomach cancer... I wonder if the parking area has video coverage...humm...

Thank goodness I have learned to eat my supper before reading one of your chapters!!! I have to add coming to Cape Town to my bucket list!!! And from the mouth of babes... They weren't entirely happy however when they were woken up just after 7am by four exuberant children and an excitedly yapping hound, mainly in light of the fact that they were both still naked after their nocturnal antics. To make matters even more awkward, Jamie was too quick for either of them and dived under the covers, only to emerge seconds later with a look of utter disgust on his face and yell so loud, they were convinced the entire resort heard him. "Ew, daddy! You and dad have got no clothes on. And what is that funny smell?"

An interesting chapter to say the least, full of reminders of the Great Gatsby and lives led in dissipations...

Well...I may be an anachronism here but...as to the following, as long as they are clean, I don't give a fig for style, brand, or whatnot...just what they are holding/concealing is my main concern... It hadn’t happened yet, partly through sheer luck but partly out of fear, though the fear of what he wasn’t sure. A clinch and a fumble in an alley were one thing, but in a bedroom, stripping off, these kecks were hardly sexy – plain grey, the same style he always wore, clean and serviceable. He’d have to get some sexy ones; and what did other blokes think were sexy? Thomas sounds almost too good to be true,,,

What's the old saying...'There's a little gay in every guy'!!

An inexpensive, elegant solution to what could have been a thorny problem!!!

I could not say it any better...somehow she needs to know to mind her own f'ing business... “I didn’t. I thought it up long before tonight because I felt I might need an explanation for what was happening. Even though we didn’t see her turn any lights on in her bedroom, she must have been standing or sitting in the dark and watching our yard. She obviously has been trying to catch us doing something she can complain about.” They could also transform into birds, squirrels, or another smaller creature and run around inside the house if flying wouldn't work...