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drsawzall

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  1. I fear that at some point in the not-too-distant future Jamie is going to have to tell Mike what is going on, especially considering I am still of the opinion that these specters will be coming for Jamie, if not Mike... Good on the Minister for Wanking for making that speech, but he is a career politico who can jump on and off any bandwagon issue multiple times without injuring his back... Ya know its love with the following... Mike came to hug me. “It’s not a competition. You’re important to me. I love you.” “I love you too.” Mike kissed me on the cheek and then slapped my butt. “I’ll wash, you dry.” I get the sense the shite is about to hit the fan, so to speak...
  2. @kbois and @Mrsgnomie why do I sense a tong war coming up...
  3. Very enjoyable, I loved the way you kept the reader and the protagonist in suspense...and a great ending!!
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    Prologue

    Dear Lord in Heaven....I'm gonna be showing my age...the very first rock and roll concert I ever attended was Three Dog Night, if my memory serves me correctly it was in celebration of the dinosaurs losing the civil war...
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    Chapter 1

    You may want to check in with your ophthalmologist...😉
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    Chapter 1

    Oh my goodness, I can see all sorts of complications coming up....
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    Chapter 1

    The conversation between the two lovers was too rehearsed...trust no one or anybody... something is off between the two of them... “Because the policemen, who are not on your payroll, are all out to get you. If I stay on the force, it will be a conflict of interest. I love you too much to keep on trying to get you behind bars.” “That’s nonsense. We can’t live together, so nobody will know about our relationship. Stay on the force. Get the real bad guys. I swear, the only time I did something ‘bad’ was when someone threatened you.
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    Chapter 32 Okay

    Oh my...the dissipation of the entitled and the wealthy...Gatsby had nothing to do with these vacuous souls... Should we all have these challenges...
  9. All I got is...
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    Chapter 3

    I had to chose wow...rather than sad or angry as I believe there will be retribution for the guilty... Henry, you nearly broke my heart with the following... While searching a remote treehouse, Henry was startled by a sound coming from under a bench in the back of a small room. He cautiously approached the bench and discovered one of the horrendously mauled bodies of one of the women. Beneath the body, covered in dried blood and gore, were two eyes peering anxiously up at him. Henry, overcoming his initial fear and surprise, said. "I am a plainsrunner from Dinas and here to help you."
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    The Killer

    Ya know...with a bit of hair coloring...they could be twins...😆
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    Chapter Ten

    As noted above, I am not sure they are in the clear just yet...will the bow and arrows need to be used sooner than expected... The ice has been broken as to their feelings, will this be a slow boil or will passion overtake them??
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    Beach Babies

    I am content knowing Manny's legacy is carrying on through others. I am reminded of the ripples a pebble makes when tossed into water...
  14. Bingo...I could not agree more!!!
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    The Killer

    That's my image and I'm sticking to it....
  16. I have to ask, the client, the billionaires son, Fred has to exonerate on appeal in order to keep his new job, what if he is truly guilty??? Having said that, the other files Fred has to look at, were the clients all gay, was the defense attorney Silas Fred is replacing a cousin to Bully or from the same school of motivation???
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    The Killer

    Well now...the Minister for Wanking got his wish and was able to find out who is behind the specter...I can't quite call it a ghost...and some food for thought, I find it curious that bullets have no effect, but a knife will. More to the point the light the specter emitted when its throat was slit, where did it go, was the release of that light the end of the specter or will it be able to rejuvenate itself??? Where is the bowl of spent bullets and what did the Minister for Wanking learn from contact with the specter??? While a heavy snowfall is occurring at the moment, the idea that the "escape" from the cellar via the broken window is bound to raise more questions than it answers. Unless the investigators will buy into the theory that the prisoner flew out the window, there's problems ahead...As we all know, snow compacts when stepped on, leaving a traceable path regardless of how much snow fell after the escape... Was the machine-pistol cleaned afterwards??? How long can Jamie and the Minister for Wanking stick to the alibi they have crafted when interrogated as they surely must be... And the following leads me to believe a fib has been told by the Minister for Wanking... “Oh, Jamie, that is not my forte. All this physical stuff.” My thoughts as to what Jamie might look like...
  18. I was once told the definition of mixed emotions was watching a bus full of lawyers going over a cliff and realizing one seat was empty... Hey @weinerdog, do you think they'll leave the light on at the motel???
  19. The very idea he would like to extend his time in the pokey, pushed him to the very forefront of all the idiots to grace these pages...
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    Haifa

    In many ways, this was a sad chapter, one can only imagine the abuse Joseph was subjected to, with love, patience, and therapy one hopes he comes out healed...
  21. Why do I get the feeling this isn't going to end well...for anybody....
  22. I am going out on a limb here, up to this point Fred has to not only be the dumbest protagonist in the pantheon of leading characters here at Gay Authors, but a shoo-in for top spot this year for the Darwin Awards... Cheese and crackers folks...I'd be wielding a sword called Restitution and smiting all the filthy, unwashed A-Holes and starting the process of rebuilding my life. Next in the pantheon of blooming idiots has to be the lawyer, was any attempt made to settle Fred's affairs before going into the pokey??? I've seen 7-watt lightbulbs shine brighter.... If, and this is a stretch, Fred gets his shite together, how bout seeing what could be done for Mo??? I seriously doubt much but...it is worth a shot... Fred is so frigging clueless, he couldn't get hit by lightning wearing a tinfoil suit flying ten of Ben Franklin's kites during a massive, once in a millennium thunderstorm... Not that I have any strong opinions or anything, while reserving the right to change my mind... Darwin Awards: Evolution In Action Then there's this...
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    Chapter 6

    Thank for taking the time to entertain us with this...it is appreciated!!
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    Chapter 3

    I am reminded of the book/movie called "All Quiet On The Western Front"...
  25. Loved this chapter, did anyone get a picture of Joseph and the collateral damage???
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