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  1. drsawzall

    Chapter 2

    Good on Alex, it will be interesting to see how the aftermath of the fight is handled...If it were up to me and any sensible adult, Coach Pervert would be hitting the bricks without a reference...Sam Anderson and his minions need to be suspended, expelled and informed they are no longer with the team... the subs used as replacement players...Alex, there's hidden depths there and I am curious to see how things shake out with him... As to dinner with Baron Pittsburg, I would let him know that other higher-ups are aware of the dinner if it should turn ugly...Like dropping Prince George's name....I am of the opinion that this is simply a feeling out the new guy dinner...who knows, he may have a bridge to sell that goes over the Ohio River....
  2. drsawzall

    Chapter 5

    I completely agree, now what was it you said???
  3. drsawzall

    Chapter 5

    All I can say is...
  4. drsawzall

    Chapter 9 S2

    I'm glad to see the witch next door get a bit of comeuppance, enjoyed the low-key thanksgiving as well...I'm glad to know I am not in the minority as to limiting pranks either...
  5. drsawzall

    Chapter 5

    Well, more red herrings...they seem to be multiplying like bunnies....Will the killer go after Tom???
  6. drsawzall

    Chapter 5

    I loved this freaking chapter...I wasn't sure about Liam but now that he has crossed the gay Rubicon I am looking forward to the next chapter, I am hoping the spare bedroom becomes available for Mike's mother as she recovers from her chemo... Now...I have to wonder...just what does a squirrel sound when he busts a nut????
  7. drsawzall

    Kayaks and Horses

    Truly an idyllic pastoral setting and a perfect place to grow up!!!
  8. drsawzall

    Chapter 2

    Our little mouse Marco, and I have had to realize my distaste for him, has faded away, is flush with all the issues that come with puberty. When days are long and thoughts of where one belongs are longer, it is very difficult to see the trees for the forest... Marco is wise beyond his years, as with his drawings, he is very perceptive, if understandably lacking in self-confidence. One hopes he can find the patience, that love might come knocking on his door soon, and perhaps...just somehow...a proper outlet for his talents, finds him!!!
  9. Not sure how I want to respond to this but to say your understanding, at least going back to the facts on the ground in 1978 are so freaking off base... I had/lost a boyfriend who thought a stint in Uncle Sams army would convince his family he was, for the lack of better words...Normal...needless to say, we had long discussions over this decision...he thought once his term of service was over, there wouldn't any of those 'awkward family discussions'...life for us would be glorious... He lost his life in a high-speed accident on the autobahn, one that could have been avoided...he was licensed... and followed the rules...the other driver was found to be at fault, and he was licensed...and because of stupidity...as a native while he was licensed to drive, it just was a stupid decision made at the wrong time... You've made an assumption that simply does not hold water....
  10. Not sure how I want to respond to this but to say your understanding, at least going back to the facts on the ground in 1978 are so freaking off base... I had/lost a boyfriend who thought a stint in Uncle Sams army would convinced his family he was, for the lack of better words...Normal...needless to say, we \had long discussions over this decision...he thought once his term of service was over, there wouldn't any of those 'awkward family discussions'...life for us would be glorious... He lost his life in a high-speed accident on the autobahn, one that could have been avoided...he was licensed... and followed the rules...the other driver was found to be at fault, and he was licensed...and because of stupidity...as a native while he was licensed to drive, it just was a stupid decision made at the wrong time... You've made an assumption that simply does not hold water....
  11. The old adage that, "No good deed goes unpunished" certainly applies to Fred here!!! Why do I think Sebastian isn't going down quietly.....
  12. drsawzall

    Chapter Fifteen

    Glad to see both Nathan and Brohm understand each other a bit better and see the issues they need to work on...it is critical that Nathan get to the bottom of what is causing his nightmares...
  13. As seminal chapters go, this was simply spot on...what a treat to see the growth of all so aptly demonstrated in their successes!!
  14. I second the motion Mr. Moderator....
  15. There's no moss growing under these folks' feet!! Looking forward to seeing the improvements in place!!
  16. drsawzall

    Chapter 36

    And the portfolio keeps growing, I suspect when the owner of Fountain House realize he's lost most of his staff, he will be a tad easier to deal with and amenable to meeting the offered price!!! Looking forward to the next!!
  17. drsawzall

    Chapter 4

    All I got is the author is using....a
  18. drsawzall

    The Inquest

    Then how would you explain Jamie's first encounter with the Minister for/from Wanking and the specter, or the second one??? I agree it would be just the plot twist, but then why go through all of the above, the training etc.??? Unless...humm...it is to fully develop Jamie's powers for further nefarious purposes....
  19. drsawzall

    Chapter 1

    Welcome back and thanks for sharing this with us. I am looking forward to the remaining chapters!!!
  20. I thought to myself during the ice storm threatening our power supply this morning, how nice it would be to find myself in Ravello...😶‍🌫️
  21. I had a @weinerdog moment or a possible epiphany or plot twist, when I read the following thinking their little deception prior might come back to bite Fred and Mo in the backside... "Mr. Faines, take him to one of the min-sec holding cells until I'm finished with Mr. Jamers, and then return here." Faines went bug-eyed, "I thought he looked familiar." Without hiding his sarcasm, "You clean up nice, Jamers. Follow me, Mr. Wallingford." I don't think Fred ratted anyone out in his conversation with Conrad @Zuri, it was his duty in that conversation to impart everything the AC required and actions they would take and actions required by the law firm...That Sebastian failed to do so speaks volumes as to, character and abilities as a major player in the firm. Quite frankly it shows/reflects poorly and bad judgement. This is proven by the situation that the firm now finds itself in...Not to mention the huge loss of billable hours....
  22. drsawzall

    Reconnecting

    Here's hoping that the air is cleared, and the relationship can now move forward, let's not forget the king may be in danger...
  23. drsawzall

    Chapter 42

    Calvin isn't doing himself any favors, while Charlie had a gun, it was very quickly rendered inert and should not pose a problem if brought up in court...what is Calvin after, it has to have intrinsic value for him to continue on with this charade... Loved the humor in the following... “If you need extra blankets and pillows, they're in the closet.” “James can get them,” Quinton said. “Why me? Why can't you get them?” “I don't ever want to go back in the closet again.” Everyone booed and hit him with pillows. “Goodnight,” Diego said, after hugging Caleb. “Goodnight, Daddy!” All the boys said in unison, causing Diego to blush and Steve to laugh loudly from the next room. Like you @weinerdog my first thought Calvin crapped his pants...shame it wasn't so...
  24. Never underestimate the power of a strong willed mother... “Luis. Shut the fuck up,” she said, her voice an authority. What was this dynamic? What the hell? And then my mother, Luna Cassandra Belcore, magnificent and strong, with a clear gaze and bright eyes that I had never seen before, did something completely unexpected. This woman, who gave birth to me, but that I never felt tethered to, slowly got down on one knee, and bared her neck toward me. Toward us.
  25. drsawzall

    Need: 9.7

    What will happen to Charlie's state of mind if they manage kill the whale or Father gets him out of there???
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