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Everything posted by drsawzall
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Who woulda thunk, catharsis via ejaculation…that Jessie’s father needs to eat a 38 caliber copper jacketed hollow point.
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The Crossing of the Princes.
drsawzall commented on E K Stokes's story chapter in The Crossing of the Princes.
Yet Silas and his master are trapped, fused to the bedrock, and the knife resonates. Perhaps the remnants of that knife be further melted down, and in its liquid form burned till it no longer exists… -
My guess is is that it is either Tad or Kane outside the house!
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At the beginning of Matt gets into his car as Kitt boards the bus, when the meet is over, he rides the team bus back. Did someone drive Matt in his car?
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Knowing how tough these courses are, I'm stunned that there were a couple of 4.0s!!! 3.978 and 3.970 are nothing to sneeze at either!!! The 4 years certainly seemed to go by fast as well! Looking forward to the wedding and what the summer brings!!!
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Getting the prince out of the castle is not without peril, with the multitude of openings long forgotten, Septimus just might find himself on the defensive, with his troops abandoning him, one hopes!!
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Chapter Nine - Escape to the coast.
drsawzall commented on William King's story chapter in Chapter Nine - Escape to the coast.
What could possibly go right??? -
Interesting to see what goes on in Sara's head, toying with the idea of buying Tom's freedom, her concerns with a noticeable change in her mother's behavior. I was surprised with how forthright she was with Matt, asking how desperate he was in conjunction with asking Alice to marry... "I know." He sighed deeply. "I know." And then he leaned his head against Sarah's shoulder. "I don't like to need her. Not literally. I don't want her money or her slaves. But... now that Isaac and George are dead, there's no one to take care of Maggie, no one to do the housework. I know Dante is not a real house slave, but Great Mother, at least Henry can cook. The Abbermills are all awfully nice, but it's not like we're going to stay there forever." It would be interesting to, gotta admit I'm a bit scared here, see inside Miss Brittany's thought processes...
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Kitt's world has just expanded in a couple of directions, Riverbend, a town/village, showing him something different. Warm, comfortable, and calming, a panacea for the internal turbulence. What remains unspoken is seeping out inadvertently, becoming harder to deny. I still wonder what motivates Kitt's father that his mother is quiescent, without a voice of her own, I find puzzling and troubling... Senior year is racing towards both boys, and decisions about the future are looming. Can...will Kitt and Matt come to terms with what they are, and glide under the radar? College decisions are coming; will Kitt's father insist on the choice of college? Will either boy earn a scholarship? Riverbend reminds me of several small college towns, a place where both could simply exist... Just simply loving this story, it fuels the imagination!!!
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And yet to come, the fallout when Camille realizes the burgeoning relationship between her son and Elias...
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This is no longer a mission to destroy the queens laboratory but the destruction and subjugation of an entire country, bringing it to its knees. They have allowed their on soldiers to harm and rob innocent civilians… Their needs to be a change at the very top ASAP!
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And drop the bones in acid… Always remember to double tap. And burn the body after, just in case.
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And the search for empirical data commences…
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The damage we do when we fail to have those honest conversations…I don’t see how this can end while leaving folks intact. "I kept the door open," she said. Standing. Looking at him across the desk, from above now. "You knew that. You've always known that. Every dinner I cooked for you, every time I sat in that kitchen and waited for you to walk through the door, every text I sent that said come over when what I meant was come back...you knew. You knew what I was offering, took the parts you wanted, left the rest on the table, and I let you. JesusChrist, I'm such a fucking idiot..."
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They still need to make it back to camp…it is as if their leadership is taking stupid pills….💊
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A gauntlet has been thrown…while the king will hear of this, will the marsh leave any trace of the king’s men? Or will this be a situation of plausible deniability? Much fear can be gained by wild stories of a marsh that eats horses and men…
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Between Nils activities in the stables and the no so subtle pressures, things might be changing quicker than thought… Why don’t you marry Göran?’ Seymour challenged his sister. ‘He’s a viscount, he will inherit an estate and he’s studying at Christ Church College. What more do you wish? Or don’t you find him handsome enough?’ Georgina blushed. ‘Don’t be ridiculous, Seymour Thomas. Of course I find the Swedish Viscount handsome. It’s still far too early to speculate about marriage.’ ‘I’m in for anything,’ I jested.
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Shared Secrets and Stolen Moments
drsawzall commented on Soren Kraft's story chapter in Shared Secrets and Stolen Moments
This is getting better and better, looking forward to seeing where this goes.. -
Chapter Eight - The North
drsawzall commented on William King's story chapter in Chapter Eight - The North
Alex isn’t thinking clearly and a world of hurt is waiting for him. -
There’s a lava dome in the volcano that’s resisting the pressure and failing…..
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Los Angeles Prep and Paralympics
drsawzall commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Los Angeles Prep and Paralympics
Just what I needed after surviving the blizzard yesterday with snow almost up to my wazoo...truly enjoying this story and thanks!!! -
They need to find the rest of the body before treasure...
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While not my favorite genre, there are some truly amazing stories here...
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And we have red herring number one in Gordon….and Eldora number 2? Could the be a New Romantic interest with Jacy? What did the carpenters find in Novak’s wall? Ya think??? I nodded uncertainly. I wasn't exactly known for using much caution in my investigations. I was much more likely to run head-first into trouble and hope for the best. I'd been incredibly lucky so far, but I knew I needed to start being smarter
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Alex is a very immature young man, and nothing good will come from his impulsive behavior….
