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I’m hooked, this looks to be a great read!
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Well done, a very powerful opening chapter!
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That the Oathbreaker had to 'hire' Flemish mercenaries speaks volumes as to how solid his position is; he has not the force to take on the signatories to the Magna Charta signed at Runnymead. The path ahead will be fraught with peril and treachery, and in the end, the Oathbreaker will learn what keeping one's word truly means. He's waging a fruitless war against those who have something worth fighting for, their word, honor, and the blood of their brothers. And...at the risk of sounding like a broken record, another great chapter, Albert!!
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Chapter 7: Gondola to the Peak (Jeff)
drsawzall commented on Soren Kraft's story chapter in Chapter 7: Gondola to the Peak (Jeff)
With friends like that...I'd want an empty gondoila every time!!! -
Kitt is sacrificing his childhood on the altar of his father's expectations, creating a pressure dome with no outlet. Matt is slowly becoming aware not only of his growing status but also of the effect it is having on Kitt. Both are struggling to learn the language they need to understand each other...
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Well, all we need to know is the who, what, and why.....We know who the assassin is, we don't truly know who hired him and his partner, or the reason neither of them is carrying a gun... Sounds simple to figure out...right?? Oh...what kind of information is being exchanged, what was slipped into Darryl's back pocket, and what is in the cigarette case? As for the 'Syndicate', are they a government agency or a criminal organization???
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Frosted Hearts: The Truth Is Right There
drsawzall commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Frosted Hearts: The Truth Is Right There
So…you’re saying there be ghosts? -
Frosted Hearts: The Truth Is Right There
drsawzall commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Frosted Hearts: The Truth Is Right There
You say that now…. -
Chapter 5: The Night Before the Storm
drsawzall commented on Soren Kraft's story chapter in Chapter 5: The Night Before the Storm
Move cautiously boys…mind your emotions! -
Frosted Hearts: The Truth Is Right There
drsawzall commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Frosted Hearts: The Truth Is Right There
Including the tracks found in the snow, there is this as well… Wow, this is unbelievable,” Krista commented as she reached the bottom. “It’s like an oasis.” “Why haven’t you brought us here before?” Esmeralda asked as she took in the sight. But Percy ignored her as he walked over to where two lounge chairs were pushed together, like someone had made a makeshift bed. What if Bethany has decided to end her relationship with Five? -
What secrets is Fenn learning?
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Opening Night and Closing Thoughts
drsawzall commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Opening Night and Closing Thoughts
Just what the doctor ordered after a tough day…thanks for this! -
Time is running out, Tuesday is right around the corner…Will to the rescue?
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Will and Andrew need to talk, and soon….
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Bottled courage never last as long as the repercussions
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Have another drink boys and let’s see who has the biggest hoo haw
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What a small world after all
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All I got is this picture of Bruce
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Danger Will Robinson
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Bruce and Gavin need a stint in the pokey
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What a slimy weasel…
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And the dominos start to fall…least we know why…
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I’m reminded of a lyric from a Meatloaf album…No…no…don’t touch me there….
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The wise move is to pay for experience, but the shortsighted move is to hope young and inexperienced can catch up quickly…The company I used to work for was like a revolving door…we would ramp up to meet the demands of production, and layoffs when over the hump… Senior project managers use to change jobs almost as often as their underpants. They would cycle through and would come back for a second, third, and in rare cases, a fourth time… hard to hit a moving target….
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Little tracks creating a path, where will it go?
