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Well if you do include the @weinerdog in another story keep him the heck away from my slippers…I still get a printed newspaper, it’s a weekly….and 4 internet subscriptions…can I wack him with tablet?
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Parents Weekend, Book One of Five
drsawzall commented on Boy Mercury X's story chapter in Parents Weekend, Book One of Five
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The tension is building nicely, am enjoying this tremendously,
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I have a sense of unease, foreboding…..
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The Thing About Konstantin
drsawzall commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in The Thing About Konstantin
Sad and tender at the same time, a story of missed chances when two can’t talk to each other honestly….well done…I’m still thinking you wrote the hot wings story tho….but then again, that’s why I avoid Lost Wages….. -
Our furry friend has missed the lesson, the true heartbreak needs to be his….
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Open Evening at the Centre
drsawzall commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in Open Evening at the Centre
I have a disclaimer here, I love Adele's songs, but once she stops singing, I turn away... I see what Anne is doing; Neil was the child who was an early disappointment for whatever reason... Ironically, dear sweet Charlie is turning out to be a bit of a flub...a wasted talent, while Neil's is starting to shine. Turnabout is such sweet revenge... -
When these two idiotic numbskulls finally get their act together it will be a miracle that neither self-combusts….
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I think a title for this chapter could have been called ‘Awakening’.
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I thought it was his brother who snored… At least one of them seemed incapable of keeping a promise, because the first thing Lawrence felt at the break of dawn was something heavy weighing on his legs, making it impossible for him to move. It took him a moment or two to realize that Ali had somehow managed to end up on his back, snoring, and throwing his leg over his bed partner.
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Does one require removing clothes and underwear?
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The bit&ch should have gone out the window, she has left one hell of a mess to clean up, and how will Flynn’s father react…I imagine she has burned through a crapload of “goodwill “….now to get Poitr out of Jail….and get Flynn the freaking cure
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That would explain some of Chad's attributes...not that I mind....or care...or interested...yawn...nothing to see here folks...nopers, I never would have done that...who cares if it makes its own peak when exposed, I'ma still gonna peek at it...just once or twice or forty times.... Chad blinked, his eyes going wide again. "You jerked off over me?" Jake shrugged, a faint blush creeping up his neck. "Yeah. I mean, I thought about other guys, but it was mostly you. I dunno, you're really tall, and you've got a giant dick... I used to sneak peaks in Gym." "You peaked at me?" Chad practically squawked. "I used to peak at you!"
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The closer the two boys come to loving each other, the closer they are to the mountains and danger. I wonder if the flying thing is the same, or close to the same, as Kalhoh...
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Key tags and access cards
drsawzall commented on Thomas Lindblad's story chapter in Key tags and access cards
I worked as a Facilities Manager for two office buildings in Downtown Boston, and one of my responsibilities was issuing and deleting access cards as well as the security video at every entrance to the buildings and the underground parking garage. I guess this is why this story resonates with me. And if I were a much, much younger man, I'd be dating Tim. Or at least buying him new sneakers to replace the ones he wore out running away from me!!!! 😉 -
Key tags and access cards
drsawzall commented on Thomas Lindblad's story chapter in Key tags and access cards
Access cards in this day and age are created by computer; a list should be printed for all entrances showing time of use, and while they have some info on the car park, print the time as well. As to the second phone, if it is on they might be able to track location. And if all the suspects are together, call the number and see what happens... -
An interesting beginning: you are creating this world, and you have the right to create, interpret, or devise as you see fit.
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We can all see the horrific crash and burn coming from a mile, or is that a kilometer, away? How bad could it be?
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When you think of it, so many parallels to today it seems
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Where do these gems come from??? Declan leaned forward, resting his elbows on the table, a glint of desperate calculation in his eyes. "You're gay. You know this ecosystem. Which of these people might be interested in corrupting the president of the Purity-r-us brigade? I need a distraction. I need an outlet that will completely horrify my father's traditional sensibilities but keep me sane." Andy stared at him, genuinely appalled by the request. "You are asking me to point out hookups for you. What am I, Grindr?" Declan blinked, his brow furrowing in genuine confusion. He tilted his head, the tactical mastermind completely derailed by the cultural reference. "What the hell is Grindr?"
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Don't forget, squirrels are basically rats with furry tails...
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Too f'ing funny.... Can you PM me with the medications you are taking... just a fantastic, wonderfully bizarre story!
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I can't help myself, why am I reminded of this...
