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Stag, Part One of Three
drsawzall commented on Boy Mercury X's story chapter in Stag, Part One of Three
Hoping we see Ganymede orBacchus, now that would be a fun time! Loving the premise! -
Not a problem at all, nope…nothing to see here folks… Isaiah was down on that planet, and Mickey was getting him back, he just needed to borrow the Battlecruiser a while, and then never return it. Couldn’t be that hard, right?
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Think of the cost of keeping him in snacks….
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Instead of outright confrontation, perhaps a form of killing with kindness… A chapel fresco. A library expansion. Something that reminds Florence what it builds when it is not tearing itself apart.” Matteo nodded. “It will be done.” Lorenzo leaned back, the chair creaking softly. “No further spectacles,” he said. “Control the temperature. Let the flame consume only what it must Hopefully there are no issues with the impending birth…
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How they convince the doctor from the caravan is going to be one heck of a feat!
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I wonder how long this switched connection will last, and the next hurdle to overcome will be…
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This was an interesting and informative chapter. I thought the following spoke volumes.. “No. I think whatever it was, it was love. And it was beautiful. You said neither of you ever crossed the line. In a way, I think he was your soulmate. Losing him must have been hard for you—but you don’t have to punish yourself for loving him.”
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Things are certainly heating up…
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Chapter 11 Boy Meets Holiday
drsawzall commented on Grayson Rose's story chapter in Chapter 11 Boy Meets Holiday
My, my, my… Sam is a gifted boy and Emory is right in wanting to take things slow… -
Or only does the plot thicken, but the stew as well…and bread! Isn’t this quite the surprise…. I wonder what the villages will be like…
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I found the following to be very perceptive,... I exhaled, running a hand through my blond hair, feeling the grit of salt still clinging from earlier. “I think I ran out of waves I hadn’t ridden,” I admitted. Bruce didn’t flinch, didn’t even blink. He leaned back, studying me with the kind of patience that made silence feel like part of the conversation. Then, slowly, he said, “Sometimes people spend so long chasing something, they don’t realize they were meant to find something else entirely.” And for some reason, I can't get the following song out of my head...
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And now we know what everyone knows, about sexual partners and Rutger....
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Are the Celtics using hockey sticks or golf clubs?? Fortunately, the Raiders always lose!!! Well, we have to be inside by 7. It’s 5 right now. Mrs. Williams is usually crowded from 6:30 to 7, which means we have to visit before 6:30, which leaves only an hour and a half to trick or treat-” “Mammam! Don’t math at me!” Rufus complained loudly. “If the train leaves at 5pm and travels north, what time will the Raiders beat the Celtics?” Jessica continued obliviously. “Trick question! The Raiders lost before they took the field!” “Judges?” Jessica turned to Sakis, who stared at the two in utter confusion. “Uh… correct?” the satyr guessed. “We have a winner!” For those of you who might enjoy the music mentioned!! The Ecstasy of Gold
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What a tender and bittersweet chapter, then the video was just so heartwarming and honest. Memories captured not only for the interim, but for a lifetime. I don't mean to harp on this, but keep the Bres' away from that spot....I just have this sinking feeling that they will attempt to do something terrible...
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Well, some things never change, when the truths won’t suffice, lie…
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And the Calvary is off to the rescue 🛟! Will the father follow and discover his god may/might not be all that powerful! Gremlin is armed, during the rescue what could possibly go right/wrong?
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More than a friendship?
drsawzall commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in More than a friendship?
It’s the quiet ones ya gotta watch out for, and I get the feeling that a new work from Alex will be a hit! -
I imagine that Gianluca will recover, if slowly. As to the future remains to be seen. Lauretta has demonstrated a strength to admire.
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What I remain curious about is the who, what and why of the attempted takeover of the pack. Have these folks been eliminated or do they still poise a threat? Yesterday looked bad from your side?” I asked. He cracked eggs into a pan one-handed, the shell splitting cleanly. “Thirty-two rogues.” “You were outnumbered?” “Technically.” He stirred the eggs. “Still would’ve won.” Something in his tone suggested the win would’ve been ugly.
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The Princeps’s Inner Sanctum
drsawzall commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in The Princeps’s Inner Sanctum
Early days yet and not enough information to make a guess yet. From farm to story!,,- 30 comments
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This should be very interesting... Sawyer laughed brightly and loudly, and cute little wrinkles formed around his eyes. "Don't worry, lil'bro, I take good care of my family, even by shady means if I have to. But, and this is the main thing, Frank will talk to you."
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It may be a bluff, but it is one with teeth.... “This is irregular,” the friar said. “Fra Benedetto has left clear instructions. There are processes that must be respected.” “There are accounts that must be examined,” Matteo replied. “There are charters that must be reviewed. There are exemptions claimed by this house that do not survive daylight. If you wish to delay me, you may do so by inviting an audit of your finances and your correspondence with Rome.” The word correspondence landed heavily. The friar’s expression tightened. “You would threaten the Church.” “I would remind it,” Matteo said, and something in his voice stilled the space around them. “Open the way.”
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Chapter 10 Boy Meets the One
drsawzall commented on Grayson Rose's story chapter in Chapter 10 Boy Meets the One
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Now I am officially worried… Rhaelce chuckled and shook his head. “Nyrra is good hunter, but I better and I move without being seen or heard. No worry about her.”
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It is said fortune favors the brave….will it help our boys?
