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Chapter 34: A Funny Thing Happened When Landing on the Moon
drsawzall commented on astroguy's story chapter in Chapter 34: A Funny Thing Happened When Landing on the Moon
Per my comment in the last chapter, I could not conceive that they would 'waste' students and resources... It was well done and I am looking forward to seeing how the other teams made out, as they were second...does any other team come in under the wire? Zane...what a dolt... -
Boy, did this bring back memories...thanks for sharing!
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It's a festival of red herrings...could it be Miss Peacock??? Inquiring minds want to know...and as always, on the lookout for red herrings
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A walk in the park - 30 December
drsawzall commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in A walk in the park - 30 December
I've been in that sort of meeting, one where you want to chew an arm off, wish for the apocalypse to come...where nothing happens, or is decided other than to have another later in the week, like Friday afternoon at 3PM... “I figured I’d give it a go. After all, Spontini’s …” He looked down at his phone. “Agnes von Hohenstaufen in German with English subtitles can’t be much worse than some of the three-hour business meetings I’ve been in. And it might make a deal more sense.” -
I'm reminded of the kid who wanted a pony for Christmas and come that morning to find a pile of horse poop in the driveway, Grabbing a shovel, he started digging, exclaiming that there had to be a pony in that pile somewhere... One has to hope that life does get better for Mason at some point in the near future, that he finds he has value others see... If not...this will be a pretty bleak story...and let's not forget Wishbone...perhaps he could be turned loose on the Gods!!!
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Chapter 33: Practical, Surprise Training
drsawzall commented on astroguy's story chapter in Chapter 33: Practical, Surprise Training
To me, a pass the test or die would seem pretty harsh and a waste of resources. I imagine there had to be some sort of fail-safe if it were a real test. I would like to know more about the political situation and conflicts with other powers that be, outside of their solar system... -
Like many others, I hope Tommy finds himself at Harrison West Noah...change is possible, but he reminds me of the fable about the scorpion and the frog... The Scorpion and the Frog - Wikipedia
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Thursday, April 24, 2025 (II)
drsawzall commented on Celian's story chapter in Thursday, April 24, 2025 (II)
Not only is something rotten in Denmark, but in the coven/school as well...something is percolating in the background and Uma and Phoebe come off as less than truthful... I have to wonder if the girls were pawns in something larger... I suspect DNA will identify the dead girl on the couch as Kate...Will there be residual traces of magic that may point to the killer(s)??? Can't wait to see how this next, last chapter plays out! -
One can only hope Anderson gets what's coming...Tho I feel harming Brady and leaving him behind means that he has lost a bargaining chip...
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Can't add much to the comments above, they pretty much say it all...I do want to thank you for taking the time to write this and share it with us!!!
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November Signature Excerpt: When Opportunity Knocks by kbois
drsawzall commented on Cia's blog entry in Gay Authors News
A fine example of some of the great stories on this site! -
Did you miss the balloon sleeves and wide lapels that needed their own zip code?
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Thank you for sharing this with us, a unique story as it is. You certainly piqued my interest, as evidenced by several of my comments!!!
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A bit late to the party here, hopefully Cal and Brady move on from Charlie, not that he is a bad person, he's just dissociative. Wish the two of them well in the future, and while I may have been 'hard' on the boy...Alan too!!! And you can never go wrong with a little Marvin in the background, he and Otis Redding were unmatched!!! If you look at the lower left-hand corner of the video from 2:57 to 3:02, that's me with the striped shirt getting my groove on....
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Glad to see Åke settling in, I wonder why he has a reluctance to explore a relationship with Matthijs...
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At the beginning, it seemed to me that whoever was responsible for maintaining the grounds simply failed at their job; it seemed to me that no one did the needed property maintenance... Am I wrong in understanding that John, Ethan, and Erik were a throuple? Do rotary phones still work these days?
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For those interested... The Brown Palace Hotel | Iconic Historic Hotel in Denver
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Not for Wishbone... Oh boy! Seeking shelter in a hotel room, just the two of them alone! This is going to be so romantic!
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Wow...what could those 4 men be up to??? A VIP, a robbery, or some other sort of skullduggery??? If they were personal security, I would suspect the guys would be a bit more discreet.... Do what you need to feel better @Bill W, we'll be here patiently waiting...Thanks for this chapter!!
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Chapter 32: Readiness Class
drsawzall commented on astroguy's story chapter in Chapter 32: Readiness Class
More 'enhancements' on the way??? Is gAI safe? -
And they say mothers always know their child's sexuality. Is it possible that she spotted tendencies in Creek as a child growing up?? That she's a bit nervous or concerned? I have to believe that if Marvin had not walked into that coffee shop, it would have been some time before he reached out to Creek...
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Another fine example of the very talented authors we have here!!!
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Well... there's a surprise....Killian has a lot to learn, going fearlessly where angels fear to tread...
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I mean...WTF...where is/was all the vaunted security these jamokes supposedly had...talk about sloppy....With the first incursion, they knew someone was coming, as a trip wire was sprung. Did they not learn anything, or upgrade their defenses?
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I'd be an oik if I didn't love the beginning of this story....
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