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Some cars rely on a cable system for the emergency brakes...Depending on the age of the VW, it may of had that system…They were very lucky and the car needs a through inspection…
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And the tension builds…what are the odds they do get separated??
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It’s a case of damned if you do and damned if you don’t…with the current plan making assumptions….
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Varion’s an ass and a cheater….
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When the warlock frees the prince I suspect all hell will break loose… Is the exhausted rider the prince’s brother?
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What one will find when they stop running….
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Sometimes the hardest lessons to learn are the easiest in retrospect…. And somewhere between one heartbeat and the next, I understood something I’d spent years running from: I belonged here too. Right here. With him.
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What an incredibly beautiful frigging mess this is….
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If the Queen only realized the close enemies she is making…
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I have to wonder, is the lich controlling Arlo’s soul, for the lack of better words, more powerful than the grey lady?
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First Night in the Village
drsawzall commented on Soren Kraft's story chapter in First Night in the Village
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Chapter 5: Origin of babies
drsawzall commented on Kileoli's story chapter in Chapter 5: Origin of babies
Priceless, simply priceless!! -
Watch the locker with the 2 mil….
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While I detest Blaise for the snake he is, Brittany scares the living crap out of me….
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Chapter 1 – Is it a scam?
drsawzall commented on Paladin's story chapter in Chapter 1 – Is it a scam?
I’m hooked, next chapter please!- 46 comments
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I’m hooked, next chapter please!
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Here’s hoping they find the creatures the twins were running from and deal with them as they find the twins!
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The Quiet Summer Before Everything Breaks
drsawzall commented on Tony S.'s story chapter in The Quiet Summer Before Everything Breaks
You can feel the breakdown coming, like an ocean liner making the turn to avoid the iceberg… I would like to know more about Kitt’s father, what made him the way he is… When Kitt snaps, here’s hoping there’s room for him at Matt’s house. Peering into the distant future, if Kitt’s grades earn him a full bore scholarship, I can see him being able to breathe, and hopefully Matt follows. I think it is the only way he can escape his father’s abnormality…- 14 comments
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Chapter 1: Washed Ashore
drsawzall commented on Grayson Rose's story chapter in Chapter 1: Washed Ashore
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Another chapter where I’m not sure what to say, other than with Mistress Alice out of the house, some folks feel free to show their duplicitous natures. Brittany’s little power play failed and embarrassed her immensely. We’ve not seen the last of her concerning this. I mean, WTF?? Frank, that fine line you are attempting to walk, and soon you won’t be fooling anyone. Blaise surprised me here, though I still wouldn’t let him get close. There’s much truth in Frank’s analysis of the Matthew/Alice puzzle. And at some point Dante needs to have that talk Mistress Carolyn has asked, will he be able to pull his head out of his ass, and do it? Alice is only going to be gone a few days, how bad can it get? I sense a monumental disaster coming.
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Shackled to a wall with heavy iron chains and inoperable locks to secure the chains is one thought... I get the sense that each ability might/may have an opposite ability, thinking the Fenn and Ain are opposites, what would be the opposite of Yarima's ability, someone who can absorb/neutralize sound... What frustrates me is that no one seems to have the ability to think ahead or anticipate, and plan accordingly...
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Chapter 9: Moving Day Heat
drsawzall commented on Soren Kraft's story chapter in Chapter 9: Moving Day Heat
The only moving that will happen in the future will be to a bigger apartment…🤔 -
Well done and thank you for sharing this with us!
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We know Yarmia is touched in the head, now we see she can possibly fly on her own, and while it is speculation from left field, is it possible having more than one ability is more than the brain can handle over time? The question is, how did she get past the guards? It doesn’t reflect well on your leadership when stupid, preventable things keep happening… Should our ‘hero’s’ start following asap? Let the news out about the windwalker and the crown prince? And, how did Yarima get out of her prison?
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So…you ain’t ruling my theory out just yet!
