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Truth, Dare, and Consequences
drsawzall commented on LittleBuddhaTW's story chapter in Truth, Dare, and Consequences
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"Quit Playing Around, Arizona"
drsawzall commented on Nuno R.F.C.R's story chapter in "Quit Playing Around, Arizona"
Hudson needs desperately to set some firm boundaries ASAP. Tessa and Mateo both need some bitch slaps, and what can we say about Elliot? A man whose most faithful companion is a flashlight…. I would never let a roommate talk to me that way….- 12 comments
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Finis: Graduation and Beyond
drsawzall commented on Invnarcel's story chapter in Finis: Graduation and Beyond
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This is a very important question and we will see how it’s handled…
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The Contents, Dinner, and Hockey Tryouts
drsawzall commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in The Contents, Dinner, and Hockey Tryouts
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And as such, he’ll hold the key to success…
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Good night, good night! parting is such sweet sorrow, That I shall say good night till it be morrow.
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Their relationship is growing deeper and that may pose a problem. What happens when our star needs to return?
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Lee has, or is making assumptions and we all know what happens when one assumes…. Having said that, I see no reason that Reilly and Lee can’t coexist… I am impressed with Lee’s grasp to the tactical means and methods….
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Friday, June 27, 2025 (III)
drsawzall commented on Celian's story chapter in Friday, June 27, 2025 (III)
Some more info on Damien’s background and the War College would be interesting…perhaps as a side chapter, also his time with the Bastards.. Should he even be out in the general public with his issues. It seems it is all he can do to keep himself under control… Kellen obviously has a penis with a mind of its own, could this be part of the reason his magic is locked away? Will his magic ever return? And Nora needs to find her feet…quickly!! -
But the zombie would have been well done….
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Nooooo…..it’s too early for April fools day…
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Chapter 61: Virtual Reality
drsawzall commented on astroguy's story chapter in Chapter 61: Virtual Reality
And now another layer and an explanation as to who the original omegas are/were…we’ve met them in a couple of earlier chapters. -
Running away won’t help and very surprised at the father coming around!
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Erik is becoming known in artistic circles fantastic growth for him!
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I think they have bought a bit of time and a through inspection of the flooring is in order. It is a shame the zombie did not get caught in the ladder tube where he could have been roasted and poked with hot lead….
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And now the planning takes place. And they may have only one shot at this. It is best that they take a cautious route when listening to any radio chatter, and not talking back… Now I want some biscuits and maple syrup! As to canned goods, undamaged cans can last indefinitely. I watched an episode of How It’s Made taking place in a canning factory…at the end the hosts opened a 50yr old can of sardines and they were perfectly fine!
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Well…some interesting developments here. But first, TV today is all to formulaic, that you can see modern shows have roots originating from the ‘50’s. Like westerns, I also see a lot of the way I Love Lucy was scripted and filmed… this was a fantastic chapter and now they have see something in the sky, a ham radio and getting one or something similar should be on the list of things to do, just below giving the zombie 🧟♀️ an explosive surprise.
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The trick is to create a scenario that draws the zombie to where they have a trap set. Whatever they do needs to be quickly sprung, confining the zombie as the trap does what it should do. I’m in favor of using fire. The where and the how escape me. I do know gasoline mixed with certain products creates a gel. The other thought might be to use an explosive, do they have any of the dynamite left? This should be interesting to see what they come up with!
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Could this be the beginning of the end of the curse?
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I still think Tabby will be back before winter is over….
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There are wounds that run deep within the nation, will Lalianus be able to heal those?
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Loved the dancing, so honestly raw and unscripted…the phone call drove the reality home…
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Cunning beats brawn everytime.....
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Ulises can make it better, forward the names of the assailants to the local PD!
