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Is Kevin now the bad influence on Mark now?? What about on Justin??

Will Kevin get to share another moment with his mom and dad?? If he does, will it be good for him??

But will Kevin take the punishment he deserves for what he said??

Don't Kevin and his dad live there too?? :pickaxe: My grandpa (on my moms side) worked for Bart for like 15 years as some kind of engineer

I'm wondering if anythings ever gonna happen between Kevin and Justin's brother :wacko:

Yeah Billy got his ass handed to him, huh???

oooh, me too :pickaxe:

You may be right I wish I knew what was going on with this story

I hope you're right...it seems like Kevins getting a bad rap. I hope things work out for him in the coming chapters :ranger:

MAybe his dad lost his job and the heffer he was with put him out until he finds a new job

Wow, guys...thanks for all the great comments. Since you're seeing me post here, you've probably guessed that the last chapter's been written. This is my first time seeing these posts and I have to say that I'm really flattered and humbled. I know this topic only covers the first nine chapters, though, so I hope you guys enjoyed the whole story as much as I liked working on it. As a lot of you know, this story started out as my Summer Anthology entry but grew into something bigger. Taylor and I worked on it together for about the first three chapters, then I took it all over and followed it through till the end. Thanks to everyone who's been reading this story, and I hope you enjoy chapter 30 when it's posted as much as you liked chapter one.

I wanted to do something different this time. I know it's been a good minute since I've updated, so I decided to do this here..... I want to thank all of my readers, especially the ones who've followed Bodega Bay from the beginning to these last chapters. I just posted chapter twenty nine, and there's only one chapter left to go. I'm about half way through it, so it shouldn't be too long until it's done. Bodega Bay was sorta like My Jump Off, in the respect that it was supposed to be an anthology entry but I saw the chance to do something bigger and better with it. Those first couple of months, when I was posting chapters over at efiction and getting reviews really helped me stay motivated, because I had lost the urge to keep writing it almost as soon as I posted the first chapter. Anyway, thanks for sticking with me, and I hope you've all enjoyed the little bit of writing I've done in the meanwhile. From here, I'll be dedicating my time to Staking My Claim, as well as Time In A Bottle. Believe it or not, I'm still trying to perfect the first chapter of TIAB so I can release it to the public in a decent state In the meanwhile, I've posted quite a few short stories that i've recieved some really good feedback on. I'm still waiting to here back from everyone about Sorry, We're Together, my newest short...lol. I haven't even heard back from my Beta Readers about that one yet. Maybe I should take that as a sign So if you're a reader of mine, thank you and I hope I can hold onto you in the next few months. Some of my newer stories are going to be different, to be sure, but I hope they'll also be better. Please feel free to leave a comment here, at my forum here at GA, or even by email at nicksstorypage@gmail.com. I haven't read any of the discussions about Bodega Bay on my forum yet, but as soon as I finish the last chapter you'l know because I plan to read and comment on each topic for each chapter, just to see what everyone was saying. If you email me, I promise to reply, but you'll have to give me at least a day to get back to you because I'm terrible about that kind of stuff. Anyway, I just wanted to give my readers props, and if you stay on for the ride, I promise to do everything I can to make it worth your while. Kisses Nick

I think the big issue for me in this chapter is how we find out that Kyle's a homophobe. I mean, he may not think he is, but he is. Why else would he have reacted the way he did to seeing Leo and Ben making out?? I get the feeling that he's going to make coming out really uncomfortable for Travis

Maybe he's a camera man with some ulerior motive....like blackmail!!!

YES!!!!! great chapter Camy ....I wonder what Arnie and W need to talk about

It's a conspiracy, I tell you!!! .....a Goat conspiracy!!! :nuke: :nuke: :nuke:

I wonder why I cant see it It must be AOL, the most retarded browser in the whole history of the internet (and yet I still use it )......or, a plot by the evil anti Elton John maniacs to keep people who use AOL from reading LB's stories edit: Nope, just looked with IE7 and it's still not there....are you sure, Goatstew???

I don't see LB's page listed on the hosted authors page anymore.....is there some sort of problem with the code???

Well......a little but not really :pickaxe: The person below just had blueberry yogurt, a banana and a bowl of Cheerios for breakfast

Well, that's what we know so far.....but, what if John Gordon fathered Allan and abandoned him, and later in the story, it all comes out after a sorrid affair between Lyle and Allan??

ewwwww......isn't that incest??? :pickaxe: :ranger: :pickaxe: :ranger: