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  1. Lux Apollo

    Mother's Day

  2. Lux Apollo

    Journal 4

    I guess my question is along the lines of why is it 'why did I' vs. 'why do I' - that's where the speed element comes in. He's saying all these things in past tense, yet he's still quite in the middle of things. Using past tense implies a change beyond just questioning. That's all.
  3. Lux Apollo

    Chapter 26

    This chapter was beautifully constructed. Just the right ending for that night!
  4. Lux Apollo

    Journal 4

    There's part of me that wonders how he's having so quick an evolution on humans/non-wolf shifters. His exile has truly shaken him so far to his core that everything is now up for grabs? Its an interesting place for a college student to be, that's for sure. Good stuff.
  5. Lux Apollo

    Hospital Visit

    (In a good way)
  6. Lux Apollo

    Dissonants

    Worthy, surely. Nothing you should grieve over.
  7. Lux Apollo

    Dissonants

    Well done. I wasn't quite prepared for some of the emotions they evoked in me this morning.
  8. Starts off with a punch to the gut and they just keep coming... Some very tough emotions here, Tim. Thank you for sharing this part of you.
  9. My thoughts echo the others'. Park has so much on his plate. They all do...
  10. Lux Apollo

    Acting Beta

    This was such a fun chapter!
  11. Doors are such bizarre things - and so important both physically and psychically that the Romans even invented a god of doorways. Some nice writing here, Gary.
  12. Lux Apollo

    Journal 3

    Slowly cracking through the surface of his remorse and the conditions he's living in, and into deeper things...
  13. I had been wondering exactly where things were headed after the last couple chapters. The current story arc definitely feels finished, but definitely not the story itself. I do hope you continue on with things. There is so much I feel is left to be explored in the world of Morningstar. (Though, you may need to throw a bone to your CoTT fans before you move on!).
  14. Francois Couperin le Grand (1668-1733) had a large oeuvre, much more extensive than the keyboard works that form the core of what he is remembered for now. He was very much interested in a 'reunification' of aspects of French vs. Italian musical taste that had become quite disparate in the early Baroque, and nowhere can his efforts to create such a fusion be seen more evidently than in his chamber sonatas. Check out 'La Sultane':
  15. Lux Apollo

    Prologue

    Really looking forward to your take on this journey.
  16. Thanks for reading, Gary. John may be his own worst enemy, but he also has a support network keeping him grounded now. We just have to hope he doesn't try to be a hero and deal with this on his own, right?
  17. Thanks for reading. I am really glad the mood came through, even before getting to the big business at the end. Emma isn't going easy on John by doing this, that's for sure, but John isn't protesting too hard. I think that says something.
  18. Glad you liked it. The two of them have so much to explore and talk through right now, they don't need any walls.
  19. February 4 2022 I’m starting to get a bit stir-crazy. I’ve been awake since the 21st of January and on leave from work the whole time. It’s been helpful, I guess, but I need to be doing something other than trying to write something worthwhile both book-wise and here in this journal, and watching shit daytime TV. I’ve read all the books Xi’an gave me for Christmas and then some others she’s brought me from her personal library too, though I might have to go back through som
  20. This chapter is perfect. Those conditions better be met.
  21. Lux Apollo

    Passo Lavazè

    You always manage to add such vibrant characters. Can't wait for the next chapter.
  22. Lux Apollo

    Chapter 11

    Good to finally see Bailey's side of this event. Well, not good, per se, but enlightening. I haven't much to say that others have not already said so I will leave things be... But Chris and Eric need a reckoning. I hate their type of human.
  23. Lux Apollo

    Chapter 17

    It's good to see that Liam finally seems to have reached a decision point. I think his feelings for Alek are too strong to just set aside. I guess the question is whether or not Liam has the strength to push back against those fears enough to give a relationship an honest chance. I think he can, with help from his friends (and maybe some counselling!).
  24. I do worry about Lydia, a bit. When Park asks if Lydia wants to go over to Park's house, is that meant yo be Deke's? Park and Ritch are sweet.
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