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Yup, way too short, but a nice set up. Moving on to book 2.
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I have a serious issue here. This is far too short. Luckily, I am late to the party, so on to book 2.
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I've played catch up. The story has been rich and I love them all. I just wonder what is in store for them next?
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I'm probably one of the few who is worried. The twins are ok, Drew is partially relaxed, Jay is having fun, and Drew's mom is mothering everyone. Nice chapter. So are we having a fire, flood, or plague come in to upset the apple cart next chapter? I worry about this group of poppets.
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Now that was a great story. Read the whole thing in one sitting. Eric and Peter compliment one another. I love the Queen and Olek. I'm happy to know there is a second book. -Wayne
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Chance Meeting at the Pride Parade
comicfan commented on comicfan's story chapter in Chance Meeting at the Pride Parade
Thank you, Parker. I always enjoy the challenges @CIA creates as well as the anthologies. Glad you enjoyed it. -
I'm so sorry to hear this. My deepest condolences on your loss.
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Okay I'm going by the numbers. Lol 1) Nico was smart to seduce his husband. I'm glad he also gave Dia space to process things. It seems even Nico is still figuring out things. 2) Dia maybe the king, but after being hurt he cant seem to see the forest through the trees. The man needs to admit his mistakes, own them, and move on. He cant keep everyone at arms length and be an effective leader. 3) Ivan just makes everything better. I wonder how much stronger he will become when he has a mate. 4) I love Henry. (Sorry, just couldn't resist.) 5) There is major trouble coming for them all. We can see the warnings if not exactly how. Cant wait for more.
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The guys have a moment, but waiting for the other shoe to fall. At least they all seem to be on the same page.
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I'm glad you enjoyed.
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Writing Prompts #726, #727, #728, & #729
comicfan commented on Renee Stevens's blog entry in Writing World
I do pay attention and always try to create something that will inspire people to write -
Ok, I love Henry. Then again that should be no surprise. The poor king D is going to need surgery. After all it is hard to get his head out of his butt. Nico has his work out cut out for him. Ivan might have to help Nico. 'Til next time.
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Truthfully, people have a right to be as private or as out as they like. I'm horrible at keeping my life secret. It leaks out in stories, poems, and regular conversation. I always feel that everyone leads many lives, and they are as open or closed as they need to be. As long as the life you live is fulfilling to you and you aren't hurting others, that is all that matters.
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Aria is nearly comatose. Jay is the sort of friend everyone needs. Amara is hurt and fighting to keep those most important to him close. These are who Drew was afraid of? Drew's mom is in full mother mode. She is going to protect and care for the twins, Jay, and Drew. I can see many pots of coffee and tea being made. Drew has two broken souls to help. Both love him, and he loves them. He has a lot to do. Jeff needs to he contacted, the hospital needs to be updated, Amara needs a doc if just for medicine, and Aria needs help to come back to himself. Drew really is in the deep end with the men he loves. Can't wait for more.
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New year - same me but trying new ways. After a horrendous year last year I needed help and have been talking. Hard admitting one is only human. It also helps to hear or be reminded that there are two or more sides to any story, and while your choices are your own, sometimes the things leading up to it,and the choices others make after it you aren't responsible for. In other news I'm working on three projects. A story for the anthology using Seeon and the Waza family. A new chapter in my seer story. (I know I said it was done but sometimes your characters just don't want to be forgotten.) Finally I'm hoping to complete a 5 or 6 chapter story I'm calling Next Chapter. It is about a man forced to start over after being kept on the edges of everything. That's all for now.
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So they are face to face and neither lays their cards on the table. Not only is one a powerful mind reader but he knows his mate is in trouble. The other is a King unwilling to communicate. I get the feeling there is a lot more to Ivan. Until your next chapter and a few new pieces of the puzzle.
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So Nico is in an odd position. His mate needs him, Craig senses him, and his powers are warning him. Seems like a powder keg ready to go off. Onwards.
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Late to the party but enjoying this. Nico is an interesting character and you have a lot of intrigue just below the surface.
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As usual, a mom knows when something is off with her child. Drew might think he is doing what is best for everyone, but neither his mother or the twins see it that way. I expect the former soldier and body guard is about to have his ass handed to him.
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I've learned never to say no.
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Ouch. I know other PKs and it hard to live under the microscope. Glad you made it out the other side. I just remember what one of them was told by her dad. Excuse the paraphrase. You were given life and free will. It is your life to live. You were given my last name. It has no marks against it, so keep it that way. Always remember to live a life you're proud of so when you face your final judgment you have nothing to fear. I was born and raised Catholic so guilt works well on me. Lol.
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I watched a few of those shows but never really seen them as religious. At least not Quantum Leap or Early Edition. Fixers work on all sorts of issues. I picked school shootings mainly because it was being discussed again on the news just before I sat down to write. I wanted something most people could relate to. Glad you enjoyed, and we might yet see the Pops again.
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Well that was a proper mess. Henley hasn't been in his children's lives, so trying to be the father now is a little bit too late. Instead of fixing things, it appears he has made them much worse. Drew is a mess. Running away without speaking to the boys, correction, men is wrong. Hopefully, by going home he will hear from his mother the one thing he really needs to hear, to get his butt back to them. Alicia should have shoved her foot up his ass. The whole damn staff knows Drew is good for the boys. Someone is going to have fill in the twins. God help them all when the chips fall this time. Have I mentioned how I love Mason and Emma. Both of them want to smack Drew but keep hoping he'll come to his senses. I hope they are right. I'm grateful Jeff filled Drew in. However, I kept hoping he would realize how much the twins need Drew and Drew needs them. Til your next chapter and few new pieces of the puzzle.
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It's never easy to admit to being abused. I'm glad, even though he had to be kidnapped, that he finally is breaking free. Powerful story.
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In many respects, a horrific future. I kept thinking of British mathematician who helped win the war and then was punished for being gay. I'm glad that Loy and Kee escaped and it causes a changed future.
