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Queeny's Decision - Prompt 303
comicfan commented on comicfan's story chapter in Queeny's Decision - Prompt 303
Yes, I figured there was too much left unsettled in the first part so I needed a better ending. Glad you enjoyed it -
Dealing with a Nosey Neighbor - Prompt 305
comicfan commented on comicfan's story chapter in Dealing with a Nosey Neighbor - Prompt 305
You are lucky Suvitar. Most neighborhoods have a version of the nosy neighbor who is more than willing to spy on everyone and pass judgement as well. -
Sometimes the only way to see where you are going is to know where you have been. I do hope you enjoy the story Louis.
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Thanks for reading Sam. Hopefully you will enjoy the whole story.
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Bippity-Boppity-Boo or How Charming Fell For Cinder
comicfan commented on Lugh's story chapter in Bippity-Boppity-Boo or How Charming Fell For Cinder
I love the twist you put on this fairy tale Lugh. Nicely done. -
Well Stephen, something kept Mrs. Benson up. After all she did have dark circles under her eyes before she ever got to the cemetery. Guess you will have to keep reading to find out the rest. Thanks for the comment though.
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So I talked about this for a while. Mrs. Benson is one of those wild ideas I had and then had to see if I could actually write it. The story goes back and forth between Cathy Benson - the Mrs. Benson of the story and James Trenton, who is her employee and the audience's way into the story. I offer this as an additional spot to voice comments, concerns, or things you might want to nitpick about. I really do want to know what you think of this, mainly because this is a bit different from anything else I have ever written. Thanks for reading. The story can be found here - https://www.gayauthors.org/story/comicfan/mrsbenson/1
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When Mrs. Benson goes to the cemetery to visit her family's graves she finds they have been robbed. The sight causes her to have a heart attack and leaves her two employees, James Trenton and Alice Frank to deal with ghosts that have been shaken loose by this tragedy.
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The morning began as it had every year on this date. Mrs. Benson had toast and a cup of coffee. At nine a.m., she called for me and told me that she would be going to the cemetery later, and to please have the car ready by nine thirty. Today, she was dressed all in black and there were dark circles under her eyes, as I held the car door open for her. “Thank you, James.” Mrs. Benson patted my arm on her way past me. I stood in my uniform with my hat tucked under my arm. She slowly moved toward
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Congrats to the winners. You worked hard and we loved you for it.
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Spanking? I didn't get the notice. Meanwhile, looks like everyone is busy for a change. Isn't that nice.
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Congratulations and Thank You as well. I'm one of the poor suckers she has helped turn something rough and dark, into a diamond for someone to read.
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Dealing with a Nosey Neighbor - Prompt 305
comicfan commented on comicfan's story chapter in Dealing with a Nosey Neighbor - Prompt 305
Thank you Kitt. Yeah, I think everyone knows that local busybody. Sometimes it is Mrs. Weston, and sometimes it is her husband instead. -
Aw, that is heartbreaking. I agree, I would have jumped to the conclusion Lee was cheating on me and wanted his ba... well I would have seriously considered removing something he might need. However, I too would have been looking for a way to comfort my lover and possibly save his parents marriage. Nice story, KC.
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It had been the week from hell and I was looking forward to nothing more than curling up on my couch with a nice cup of coffee, a sandwich, and a new book to read. Of course, knowing my luck, that was far too much to ask for. I’d barely walked through my front door setting my briefcase down and my phone began to ring. “Hello.” “Josh?” The voice was very soft and I couldn’t make out whether it was even male or female. “Yes, this is Josh. Who is this?” “I’m sorry. This is Mrs.
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For those who are interested Chapter 10 has left my hands and is now being edited. Wish me luck.
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I loved KC's story. Glad to see he is back and can't wait for more from him.
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Congratulations Mann. So glad to see you promoted.
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Thank you KC. I really did enjoy writing this story a lot. It has been nice seeing that people have been guessing all along. You were close. If Dad was Chris, then he had to be Jr. Glad you liked it too.
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Ateneact79, I have a number of stories coming up, so no plans to come back to Frank right now. Glad you enjoyed though.
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Sly, I am glad I could keep your interest in this. Glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for the read and for the comment.
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Glad you enjoyed my story Joann. Some people seem to have had the right answer but no where did anyone spill it.
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I'm glad you enjoyed it Terry. I had a lot of people guessing it was an elf, but hopefully looking back it was clear who was who. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
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Kitt, I figured if I was going to bring in the different brothers, I was going to have to bring in Dad as well. I had been talking about him since the first chapter, so it was only fair. You knew he wouldn't just give everything away, but Santa would have to know how to keep a secret. Glad you enjoyed it and thank you for the review.
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Yeah. I am glad I got it right then. I figured with all the various forms he took, I just didn't want to screw it up. I wanted to keep it all in the family and give the reader something to smile about. Thanks for reviewing.
