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    Tanka

    carringtonrj commented on nostic's story chapter in Tanka

    neat job. you should post more poems.
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    Nice job. Simple. Direct. Poised. Lovely. Sombre. A delicate balance achieved.
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    It would be different every day, except Shakespeare - always there. Today would be: Shakespeare - Complete Works Henry James - The Tragic Muse James Joyce - Ulysses Georges Perec - Life a User's Manual Ingeborg Bachmann - Malina
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    You capture the melodrama of teenage emotion very well. Makes me so glad I am way too old for all that rollercoastering! Thanks for sharing.
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    The Denmark setting is one of the definite bonuses of this story - gives it a real freshness and novelty, for me, at least.
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    interesting lessons in love making. always good to learn things! love or sex, love and sex, roles within a relationship - all interesting topics. interesting how some readers have expressed worries about the sub/dom theme. for me, you're making explicit a question that is relevant to lots of relationships, rather than heading towards the kinky. so I think it's interesting and a good place to explore those themes. anyhow, thanks for sharing.
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    You continue to add depth to the picture very convincingly and maintain the tension at the same time. I like how Charlotte sees through the situation so smartly. that was a good touch. thanks for sharing. good stuff.
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    You fill out the backstory really well, making the characters and situation very convincing. Nice job.
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    you write with real ease and charm. I like the setting, the idea of getting into the outdoors. you throw in plenty of interesting details and ideas, but in a seamless and convincing way. and the relationships is so sweet and delightful. thanks for sharing.
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    Poem Two, Repose

    carringtonrj commented on Toast's story chapter in Poem Two, Repose

    haunting words. perhaps too close for comfort for me. I recognise the emotion, the situation all too well. you write powerfully. I wish you well.
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    Poem One, Good

    carringtonrj commented on Toast's story chapter in Poem One, Good

    You have an interesting way with words. The piece seems regretful. Maybe you should write a companion piece imagining what your future will hold having learnt all these hard lessons.
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    Trying to be Me

    carringtonrj commented on 1brokNangel's story chapter in Trying to be Me

    You write with a directness and immediacy which is good and impressive. it's a raw, honest. impassioned statement, saying something that can't be said enough. You write from the heart, it seems, and that's the most important thing. More power to you.
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    Tell Me . . .

    carringtonrj commented on Ron's story chapter in Tell Me . . .

    It's great. Interesting, intriguing, seductive. The fact that you dedicated it to me is making me blush. I'm very proud to have been in any way inspirational. Write more poems. Please. Write more dedicated to me and I'll be all yours! x
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    Teddy

    carringtonrj commented on Thorn Wilde's story chapter in Teddy

    cute. very neatly rendered. you always write well.
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    Mark

    carringtonrj commented on Aditus's story chapter in Mark

    I like it. Subtle and simple and without wasted words. Nice job. x
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    Bloomings

    carringtonrj commented on yoxone's story chapter in Bloomings

    Subtle and suggestive little pieces here. Nicely done. You are a poet.
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    - Yet For You -

    carringtonrj commented on yoxone's story chapter in - Yet For You -

    Excellent. Interesting and controlled. Cryptic. Intriguing. You have a great way with words. A genuine poem. One of the very best in the collection. Thanks for this.
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    Anthology Poem One

    carringtonrj commented on Toast's story chapter in Anthology Poem One

    you have an interesting way with words. some interesting images. a good piece. thanks for sharing.
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    I like the flarf effect. gives a sense of something strange and mysterious hovering beneath the apparently simple surface. thanks for sharing.
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    III

    carringtonrj commented on nostic's story chapter in III

    imaginative and mysterious. worth sharing for sure.
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    II

    carringtonrj commented on nostic's story chapter in II

    direct and precise.
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    I

    carringtonrj commented on nostic's story chapter in I

    it's not at all bad! it's original and imaginative and curious. thanks for posting. x
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    a sad story. some strong images. thanks for sharing.
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    Chapter 1

    carringtonrj commented on layla's story chapter in Chapter 1

    a thoughtful and intelligent poem, exploring emotions convincingly and imaginatively. thanks for sharing.
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    intense with some colourful and memorable choices of words. thanks for sharing.
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