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  1. "He is mexican, maybe black-haired, handsome, catlike, cruel, compact, lithe, muscular; quick and graceful on his feet." Nothing wrong with multiple adjectives if used appropriately, for example: "I bought a beautiful, antique, red, Italian, silk tie ...". Five adjectives! But this is economical writing - it conveys a lot of information with the minimum words. I've not read any Christopher Isherwood - shame on me - so I can't comment on his overall writing style, but I'm guessing this use of multiple adjectives is not typical of his writing style - which would make for a tiresome read So I have no problem with the sentence you quoted because it too is economical writing, conveying much information about the character in a single sentence with the minimum words. It's also distinctive and memorable - you picked it out - and therefore interesting. These are welcome attributes of effective writing. The problem with uniform adherence to prescriptive rules is that they make everything ... uniform. Do we really want every novel to read like Stephen King? I like variety - variety is the spice of life as they say As for A Single Man, widely recognised as his finest novel, I'd be happy to receive a fraction of the acclaim this has received from literary critics And who would not be happy to produce writing of this distinctive quality: The creature we are watching will struggle on and on until it drops. Not because it is heroic. It can imagine no alternative. Staring and staring into the mirror, it sees many faces within its face – the face of the child, the boy, the young man, the not-so-young man – all present still, preserved like fossils on superimposed layers, and, like fossils, dead. Their message to this live dying creature is: Look at us – we have died – what is there to be afraid of?
  2. You've shown real strength to do what you did. When you are ill it's very difficult to fight your corner so well done you and hope you're soon fully recovered
  3. Welcome IAN - never too late to say hi
  4. One thing I'd like to confirm once and for all is that Richard III murdered the Princes in the Tower. But then I'd want to save them And that would change all history and today would be a very different world - maybe better, maybe much worse That's the problem, try to make one thing better and it has all kinds of unpredictable consequences I'm a sucker for time travel and alternate reality / parallel dimension stories. The Beeb did one based on an old John Wyndham story called "Random Quest" about a sad nuclear physics geek - Sam West - whose experiment goes wrong and he wakes up in the body of his much-more-successful self in an alternate but very similar universe and what happens. It's in 6 parts on Youtube if you like this kind of story
  5. Zombies are deeply misunderstood - we just want to be loved But no-one wants to read about that so you go ahead, W_L, and give 'em what they want
  6. Score: 0 Gender: Male Age Range: 35-39 I'm good at packing too. And at stacking the dishwasher Vision and colour perception is interesting. BBC's "Horizon" did a great science doc on vision and how we see with our brains not our eyes ["Seeing Is Believing" - it's on Youtube]. Because we "see" with our brains, our language also affects how we perceive colour. The Himba, an African nomadic tribe in Namibia have just four words for colour: zuzu = dark shades of blue, red, green and purple; vapa = white and some shades of yellow; buru = some shades of green and blue; and dambu = some other shades of green, red and brown. Colour perception tests with this tribe showed their limited vocabulary means it takes the Himba longer to distinguish between colours within each of these 4 categories compared with, say, English speakers with a much bigger range of words to describe all the colours of the rainbow and more. They'd probably do pretty crap at Foopy's test You still think the eye's just a camera? OK, open up this link. You'll see a circle of 12 purple dots, each dot disappearing, then the next. Follow it round with your eyes and you'll see the only colour is purple. Now stare at the cross in the middle - you will see a GREEN dot going around. But there is no green - you've just seen there isn't - your brain put it there. But it gets better - you'll see the green dot eat up all the other purple dots Pacman-style! We don't see the world as it is, only as our brains interpret it http://www.planetperplex.com/en/item/pacman-illusion/
  7. Yes, it was nice when they started talking English too Examples: dog breeding by evil humans = genetic problems in various breeds In "nature" it seems to happen with some species such as bonobos, lions, some fish - there's loads on the web like this link if this is your "special interest" http://abcnews.go.com/Health/Sex/story?id=4612467&page=1 Another point - there are already problems with adopted siblings marrying, unaware, and the development of the sperm donor "industry" over the last 40 years means that more siblings / half siblings are going to marry, unaware, with potentially disastrous results. There are no effective controls in place to prevent this http://www.livescience.com/2226-incest-taboo-nature.html .
  8. Fair enough. But I don 't see how meaningful data could be obtained on single occurrences - which begs the question how you could have an informed opinion either way.
  9. Not according to this Marriage between first cousins doubles the risk of children being born with birth defects, according to a study seeking answers to the higher than expected rates of deaths and congenital abnormalities in the babies of the Pakistani community. http://www.theguardian.com/science/2013/jul/04/marriage-first-cousins-birth-defects
  10. The Fosse Way. It's an old Roman road. The Romans hated going round things so their roads are very straight - which means they go up and down a lot, which means lots of brows and hidden dips. Not so good on a single carriageway with overtaking drivers determined to cash in their life insurance policies before they get to their destination ...
  11. Yikes, death penalty?? For perpetrators, writers, readers ... or all of 'em? .
  12. Zombie

    Jazz

    Herbie Hancock 01 Cantaloupe Island 00:00 02 Watermelon Man 05:30 03 Driftin' 12:42 04 Blind Man, Blind Man 19:40 .
  13. Yeah, another "family" friendly rapper to reject the vile hip-hop hating stuff. It's a cool song and vid with quality production
  14. Maybe wouldn't go down so well in Oslo today ...
  15. Try this on Youtube, Bill It's cool, but projection mapping's nothing new, it's been around a while. London-based Drive Productions’ 4D TV projection-mapping did David Guetta's gig on the Graham Norton show last year, the Jubilee projection for Madness on Buck House and loads of other outdoor events
  16. Zombie

    Amazing Birthday!

    Well done you!
  17. Excellent blog, brink. Loved the mermaid's tale, the sadness and longing, the betrayal and the consequences and your beautiful translation. Children enjoy and learn from tales like this which educate about truth and morality but in a subtle and engaging way. Children can cope with sadness and bad things happening. Disney is great entertainment but it doesn't help children to understand the real world. Mimei's tale has the same characteristics as the rich oral tradition in Europe with tales such as the Pied Piper and those written down by the Brothers Grimm. People often focus on differences between cultures, but underneath those differences we have so much in common
  18. Taboo is merely a cultural construct. There are no universal taboos. Which means we're not all talking about the same thing . Some are commenting on cultural taboos while others are commenting on matters of distaste, disgust or illegality.
  19. have a wild day wildone
  20. "Graphic terms". Interesting phrase. It doesn't mean the same as "non-titillating". Well here's a couple of thoughts. 1. Murder This is the most heinous crime. Do "normal" well-adjusted people like murder? I think not. Do they want to read about it? Hell yes - it's one of the most popular fiction genres. What's going on? 2. Graphic violence Do "normal" well-adjusted people like graphic violence? I don't think so. Do they want to see it? Hell yes - look at the box office for Quentin Tarantino What's going on?
  21. Happy birthday Ieshwar - have a great day! :wizard: I've baked you a lovely cake - full of fresh ingredients
  22. Well, that's because there is - fiction is created, real life happens So when people post views on one or the other it's important to know which one they're referring to [see above].
  23. Er, is this directed at anyone in particular?
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