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Jealousy, pride, secrets and lies can destroy love and trust. I hope that they don't do it here.
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When the Sun Isn't Watching
Stephen commented on faxity's story chapter in When the Sun Isn't Watching
I have missed this story, and it's nice to catch up. The boys are so cute together, and then after all the tender discoveries we are left with a bombshell! -
I'm sad to see that the nasty politicians and reactionaries have focused on Jarra. Wicked, misguided people are everywhere it seems. I hope they can't get to him. Now that he's out in the world more, he's more vulnerable. I worry.
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This is such a beautiful chapter, it made me feel the moment as if I was there. I'm so proud of Mirri!
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This is a sad and frightening chapter. There's a last desperate hope at the end, and I won't get all down about things just yet. Brian and Sean have to prevail and get things lined up. This new world is just such a mess, and it'd be rotten if we lost Davey after all he's done.
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Oh no, could this be the end of Davey? That would be totally mean!
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A whole gamut of intrigue and lies is exposed, along with so many aspects of base human nature. Then Konstantin comes into world focus and sets it all into place. I wonder how he'll react to this situation? At the very least, I'm sure he'll see humor in it somewhere, -I certainly do! Thank you for another fabulous chapter.
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I'm happy to see this story again, and have missed these characters that I've become attached to. I also learned that Playdough ice cream actually exists. I didn't even know until today that Playdough is actually edible. I suppose that my mother didn't ever let us have it around for fear we'd get it on everything. My friends would have it though at their houses so I did know what it was. I never thought seriously about eating it. It sounds nasty tasting! Now that I'm so enlightened I'm going to ask my friends' kids if they've eaten it, and then find out if they like it...YUCK!
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I am impressed and also a bit frightened by this new First Gulf War. Davey's been a real trooper through it all of course. I'm glad that Brian has the love and patience to bear with it, and happy they finally did the deed! Great chapter, -thanks.
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I love Siggi's narratives, -he's so delightfully grumpy. Am I odd feeling this way?
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Tension! Poor Davey, it's worse this time around, isn't it?
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This was a joy to read, thank you for the story, and I love the ending.
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It's interesting meeting Osiris and his fellow survivors. I wonder what Lest and crew really will do about Ezar? We aren't even sure we know exactly what he plans to do. I don't think anyone involved believes that he's planning anything good, but he is an enigma. We know something about his character though.
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So, Jeff wants to communicate with Moses. I wonder why? This is a very curious turn of events, and I like it.
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Chapter 8 - The Festival of the Goddess - part 1
Stephen commented on Andy78's story chapter in Chapter 8 - The Festival of the Goddess - part 1
A nice chapter: Lulled by dogma, tradition, and Joshua's impasse with his parents, you give us a picture of peace and piety, ...ending with a horrific scream!? Shameless! I hope you aren't going to leave us hanging for long... -
So close, but not there yet...suspense! This next chapter will be a challenge for me to even try to predict. I hope it comes soon.
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I'm really curious about this artifact from Seth left in the pyramids. Maybe some ancient mythical thing like a holy grail or a golden fleece? Hmm...
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This time space travel sounds both complicated and quite dangerous. It could mess all kinds of things up. To do it for a bunch of artifacts is so wrong. Ezar is a wicked man and a greedy fool. He might just bring about his own demise!
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Opie is magical, but then kindness works it's own magic. I do like this story.
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This chapter sort of brings the story around full circle. I'm happy for this ending well, and I'd like to see more of your characters in the future. Thanks!
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I'm suspicious of Ezar. What's up with him?
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I'm so sad about Andy. We all knew it could happen, but hoped that it wouldn't anyway. We hope that death won't happen in our own lives as well, but then I find myself reading obituaries more as I get older... it's all part of life I suppose. You handled this death and funeral beautifully.
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There is nothing quite like the pain and remorse of discovering that you have just stupidly caused terrible hurt to someone you love, but most of all caused yourself to have the worst of it. I think of an old saying that love breaks under the weight of time. In this case, it seems it didn't, -then it did!
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This is a beautiful tale of care and true, selfless love. It touched me, - thank you for writing it. It brought back memories of people I've known and lost, and how much I gained from knowing them.
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Strange, but of all the events Davey is involved in, his conversation with his father seems to be the most significant.
