Stephen

That was an incredible space battle. Anxiety overload!, -my nerves are about shot. My hair also just turned totally white!

With a cliffhanger like that, what sort of reaction could you expect? I hope there's still time to bring in Penguin... he has some real magic. I haven't given up hope yet!

With a cliffhanger like that, what sort of reaction could you expect? I hope there's still time to bring in Penguin... he has some real magic. I haven't given up hope yet!

Does 'Class C' species stand for crazy? If so, I agree with the aliens. I'll have to keep up with this story.

Urban Explorers has some cool but rather morbid videos online, doesn't it? This adventure seems like it'll be a lot more interesting though.

'At a boy Josh! I'm relieved that he's taking control of at least some small matter in this utterly repressive, stifling court. His actions have set a new tone for things, and he stood his ground well. Of course it's too early yet to know how much will ultimately change, but it's a start.

Oliver's sweet, but painfully shy. Things are looking up for him though.

Quite a vivid dream, and an absolutely cool ending. Thanks for sharing it.

I've been waiting for this chapter, and am not disappointed in the least. I don't know how you manage all the subplots and still make it all work so well. I suppose that's called talent. I don't think I'll ever have all my questions answered, but many of them were with this chapter. The index you posted on your forum helped a lot, thanks. So the Aqumi was set up by Yugan's ancestors. That's enlightening, and puts him in better perspective. Now he's got a mountain to climb, and not just because it's there. It is part of his mission. He controlled kitty back on Lucere! That was a shock. Earth is a mess, -a very lucky mess considering the close call that was avoided. It galls me to think that humanity was almost destroyed and the corporates used that as a chance to gain power. Shameless! They're not even done yet either. They are hardly better than the arbiters. So much to absorb here, and I love it. Thanks!

So we meet Trent, and in a flash he threatens Daniel and destroys his peace of mind. He threatens Sean too. He's a monster.

Thanks for this index, it clears some things up for me in this amazing story, -helps my feeble mind comprehend it all.

I wasn't expecting an 'other'. The idea and where this will lead is intriguing. This one sounds dangerous, and I can see why Will's primary concern is safety for Ryan. It could be a whole new threat, but then if it wasn't, there'd be no story would there? So bring it on.

I've sort of missed Gar, with his ruthless, cold mind. It sounds like Griffin does too.

I was drawn to this story by it's rather gothic nature. I found it entertaining and enjoyed the way you developed the characters. The ending was good, but maybe just a little too brief.

So, they're back! Even the nasty old mother-in-law! What on Earth can be done? I can't imagine anybody's going to sleep well tonight...

Jacob surely has a lot to think about, doesn't he? Phillip and Seth's transaction makes me curious. Is it really what it seems, or does Phillip have some other reason for picking up a young teenage boy in the dark parking lot of a local park? I hope it's something different, since otherwise Phillip just becomes even creepier than ever. Poor Josh!

I believe we share a mutual dissatisfaction with corporate power and greed. There's no rest for Shay and Mira, is there? At least now the boys are together at last. Since the Arbiters found Shay on the desert planet, I wonder how long it will take them to get to Earth? I imagine it will be sooner than expected, now that the pesky humans killed those precious little hellpups, the man in black will be really chapped!

I'm happy you decided to do more with this story, since the original chapter on Loring Lane was so good. Craig is such a lucky man, and a nice guy. He's got Graham who's a sweetheart, and I'm already crazy about Button.

This is a beautiful story and a pleasure to read. You have a way with words. Is there more?

There's a cliffhanger for you. So much hangs in the balance at this moment.

It's exciting to have George back in a new adventure. I'm glad you didn't make him suffer the tedium of Windsor for too long! Now he has a new ship to adapt, and that's always fascinating to me. I missed this story's debut as well, so it's a pleasant surprise.

I found this story by chance, while looking for another one in the index. I don't think it was listed in the Recent Story Updates like new stories generally are. I wonder if anyone knows it's out there? The links are a good option overall, but at one point I got lost in the Land of the Links and started going from one to the next until I realized what I'd done. I found myself at "Chapter 13" in a parallel universe, and even reviewed there! There are many chapters in the Land of Links, and I felt like I'd fallen down a rabbit hole. I'm off to Chapter 2 now.

Rob comes across as being a little selfish, maybe peevish. Too early to say, but just now I don't like him.

I saw this story by chance while looking for another. I don't think it showed on the recent story updates column. I only found it by chance, so you may want to re-list it. Otherwise nobody will know it's there. I do like the scenario, and the links to other characters' thoughts is something new, I don't know if that is better than the conventional manner, -it's too soon to say. I'll let you know later as I read on.

I can only hope that for everyone's sake that the mean old drunk dies. That would be too convenient probably.