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A rather gothic mystery, and I love those. Will we have ghosts? I'm excited already.
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This is a brilliant and wonderful little story.
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I'm beginning to warm up to this story, and it's taken time, but I decided I like it. At the start the plot began with Rick's deception, -one that could hurt someone vulnerable. I didn't like that. Now that Rick's become involved in another lie, and one done to help another vulnerable person, my view of him has changed. The confrontation in the park helped. Rick isn't selfish and spineless, and you are just playing with us again, wicked man!
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It would be naïve for the twins to think that nobody would guess, or that nothing would go wrong. I can understand why Josh is so upset over Phillip and Parker, since he'll have to deal with the consequences. At least he got a chance to escape for a little while. I'm worried about this trip to D.C. Something's bound to go wrong. At least Josh knows that he's not alone, and that's a huge relief.
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Those nasty zealots on K74 are at it again. They are the terrorists of the Solar System. All that G-force sounds uncomfortable. I suppose I wouldn't like one of the future amusement parks. Our boys don't seem to mind though as they rush to confront the new threat, like heroes as always!
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I like this story, even if it was a happy one. People-watching in some places can be fun, especially in museums when it can hardly be avoided anyway. Andy's comments about the other patrons are interesting, even if they are only fiction. It was a refreshing meeting with a new friend. You captured the mood simply and perfectly, without all the other baggage that comes later.
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I'm happy to see this story. Will and Ryan appear to have achieved some sort of normal domesticity. Of course it can't last...
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Just when you think you've got it figured out...things go completely wrong. So sad for Davey.
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Two close calls for Josh. The deception is only getting more difficult. Then we're left with Ethan in bed and ready to say something. Hmmm, ...what would that be?
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So, you've left us hanging there, haven't you? The boys are out of pocket and Sonic is back on Attunga. This makes me nervous...
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There are times now when I miss the simplicity of DOS. It was so direct and easy to get around in without all the hassles of today's Internet. I didn't know about the matter of the miscalculations of the Soviet missiles. I find that to be amazing, and don't know why I didn't know about it until now. Thanks for the enlightening chapter.
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These distinctive brothers make me curious. So now my imagination is up and running about who and what they are. I love it when a story gets me going.
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What an amazing walkabout...there is nothing like the real thing, is there?
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I read this novel a while back on another site, -I can't remember which. Now I'm reading it again and that's unusual for me, but I really love it. It's addicting, one of the best things I've ever found on the internet. I'm so glad you've brought it here to GA.
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Love dilutes the snark attack, and the water's less red now. Who would've guessed? -It's nice to have Siggi back.
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I love the idea of a dolphin flash mob. SuperSonic rules again! The boys aren't doing too badly either. Having to go all the way to Uranus is so unfair though...it's cold out there.
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I like Cody, he might just bring in a whole new dynamic. Things may get awkward if he gets a crush on one of the J's and thinks it's the other!
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I'm happy that Alexi and Josh are together at last. The long separation over and they are all happy as a family. These last chapters were well worth the wait. Thank you for the fine story!
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It's good that JT could focus on the football game and play well, considering what he'll be going through in the next two days. The details about his mother's murder would've been shattering to me. There's so much tragedy and death around the boys right now that it'd be easy to get carried away by it all.
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Such a contrast between this homecoming and the last one, but so goes life... I'm savoring this version. Then you go and throw a snake in it! -What's this Guild?
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Graeme, you can guess by now how much I enjoyed this story, and may wonder if I'd have anything else to say about this final chapter and the way you ended this story. It was happy and real. But I was especially happy to see that you'd managed to tie up all the loose ends. They were all tied up in neat, leafy boughs. I love The Tree. -Pardon that awful pun, but it popped into my head last night and...
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Part IV - The Heart Decides. Chapter 31
Stephen commented on Graeme's story chapter in Part IV - The Heart Decides. Chapter 31
It's happy news about The Tree, but I think John Young isn't one to simply let things go. The man has such an ego that I can imagine him trying something really stupid just to get his way. He probably thinks he's above the law. I'm happy for Vince and Matt, and a little worried about something bad coming up to mess with their plans. But I do think that love is strong in this community, and it will prevail. Thanks for another fine chapter Graeme -
What a relief. That whole ordeal is over in almost no time at all, -just as fast as it as it started. Thanks for the trip back to the Cold War!
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Alexei is a mean, greedy, and scheming animal. His attempt to abduct the boys is ruthless and as heartless as the USSR. I think this disqualifies him as a human and so can't you just kill him off? The wicked little bastard is messing everything up. The Putain too.
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Part IV - The Heart Decides. Chapter 30
Stephen commented on Graeme's story chapter in Part IV - The Heart Decides. Chapter 30
Why do I have a tear in my eye? It's just a happy tear I assure you! The secret's out for sure now, and it's only that confounded Council that needs to come around., -that and the unhappy Felicity creature, the Youngs too must be defeated.
