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  1. Aditus

    Epilogue

    Un-ending. I like that. Thank you for reading and commenting tim, even if it took me a while to finish the story.
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    Epilogue

    Haha, you know Noel quite good by now, huh? Sooooo, we will see. Thanks for reading and commenting and staying with the story.
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    Epilogue

    Landyn stepped out of the elevator, crossed the bright blue carpet of the hallway, and walked to the only door on the floor, searching for the keys in his coat pockets. "Why do they always have to live on the upper floor?" he asked irritated. Simon looked at his mate curiously. "Maybe it's a royalty thing and it's not as if you ever had to use the stairway anyway, there’s always an elevator. So what?" "Don't let Noël hear you think of him as royalty if you want to live," Landyn grumb
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    Chapter 10

    Thank you, tim.
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    Chapter 12

    Thank you tim.
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    Chapter 13

    I’m not mad about the way this ended. At. All. (Whew) I hope Diarmad has learnt a valuable lesson, watching his mate love someone else. (You and me both) ...... a liveried chauffeur (Landyn) got out. He walked around the limousine, opened the back door, and talked briefly to someone hidden behind the tinted glass. When he stepped back, he held a blue, lidded jar in his hands (Kris). Then a tall man (Noël ) emerged from the inside, supporting himself heavily on a sculptured cane. The wind blew strands of his longish, white hair into his face, and he pushed it back behind his ear impatiently. Then he took the blue jar from the driver and walked towards a path leading into the dense forest. A third man (Simon) joined the driver and together they followed some distance behind. Epiilogue will bw up soon.
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    Chapter 13

    Gawd, what a mess. (Hangs head in shame.) Thanks for sharing your thoughts tim.
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    Chapter 13

    It has been very difficult to write about Keith and I think @Valkyrie had problems to go through editing. I'm glad you're thinking he was deceived. Thank you for your comment 1brokNangel.
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    Chapter 13

    Would it be bad that I'm pleased you suspected them? That was the plan. but he deserved to know the truth (I'm going to post the epilogue soon. I hope you like it.)
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    Chapter 13

    I'm very pleased Kris and Noel had a long happy life together (I THOUGHT YOU MIGHT LIKE THE ENDING!) I wonder what his task is. (GOOD!Thank you for reading and commenting, Tim.
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    Caesura

    The third book in the series is Kabal. There will be a sneak preview soon.
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    Chapter 13

    Well, it's not finished yet. Thank you for your comment. I'm glad that you think this shouldn't be the end.
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    Chapter 13

    Never give up hope! Thank you, dughlas!
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    Chapter 13

    Well...at least Kris died of natural causes? (Depends.... Where were you and Val?) I want to know who the “others” are that Keith tried to warn him about. ( Patience...)
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    Chapter 13

    Thank you, Val! I couldn't have done it without you!
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    Chapter 13

    Diarmad sat at his desk, pretending to review some council papers while he waited. The day they would perform the loyalty tests on his closest employees had come. Ronan had notified Keith and Lionel early in the morning. As he had expected, they understood the imperative need for the ancient ritual, and instantly agreed to meet their king and his chief of security at Diarmad’s study at eleven o’clock. Since Misa’s attack, Diarmad had taken to working in his office with the door wide open, re
  17. Very enticing review! Hello weekend, no writing but reading this time.
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    Chapter 12

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    Chapter 12

    Well..... one more chapter? I'm glad you like my story! Thank you for reading and telling me how you feel.
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    Chapter 12

    can please somebody make them both understand that they belong together. (That would be me, huh? ) Thank you for reading and commenting chonga. I always take my readers thoughts in consideration.
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    Chapter 12

    Ronan, how I adore you. (You're having a thing for the big brawny, emotional ones? I oughta spank you.(I don't know, he's doing the spanking usually....) I love Landyn so much. (He kinda happened and now he's one of my favorites too.) Except Kris, we just need to find him someone else. (Much better than killing him off with Val .)
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    Chapter 12

    I understand this. It has been a big mess though. All I can say is everything goes, not exactly in the next chapter probably. Thank you for reading an voicing your opinion. I always listen to my readers.
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    Chapter 12

    I'm glad Diarmad survived of course. He's not a bad man. Just a wee bit dense. (That sums it up perfectly lol) Thank you Puppilull, for reading and commenting.
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    Chapter 12

    God. I’m glad the story is moving forward (Yeah, me too.) But I may have to skip a few chapters until his martyrdom phase (There aren't that many chapters left.) No real effort to find the traitor. ( You're right but D had to recover a little and it is hm....a few days, maybe a week since everything happened. I'm sure Ronan is on the look out.) for enhanced beings, their seeming inability to hear nearby conversations and approaching footsteps or smell others who are close suuuuuucks. ( Lol If you refer to the library scene, Let's assume Noël has been a tiny bit distracted... ) Thank you for your comment and sharing your thoughts, Geemeedee.
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