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Poetry Prompt 17 – Childhood Verse: The Pool/Wild Dreams
Aditus commented on Aditus's story chapter in Poetry Prompt 17 – Childhood Verse: The Pool/Wild Dreams
Thank you, Gary! I hope they were good memories. I still remember how cold it was...in early November. -
Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us, Lit! Yes there will be more eventually, although I'm very busy right now so it will take a while. I want to finish the second part before I start publishing, so there won't be any delay and also to take pressure off my team.
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Poetry Prompt 17 – Childhood Verse: The Pool/Wild Dreams
Aditus commented on Aditus's story chapter in Poetry Prompt 17 – Childhood Verse: The Pool/Wild Dreams
I love sleeping because of the dreams. And I often think of stories I could write and, if I'm really lucky, they become dreams. But when I was a kid I really, really hated having to go to bed. lol Thank you for the review! -
Poetry Prompt 17 – Childhood Verse: The Pool/Wild Dreams
Aditus posted new chapter in Aditus' prompts and circumstances
The Pool The water surface glitters in the sun, beckons us over to come and have fun. Little leaf boats only need a push Clothes fly behind the elder bush. Naked in a mad dash Jumping in a big splash Frozen we shiver And blue lips quiver Then strong arms grab us Mom’s making a fuss And the bathtub becomes soon A spaceship to the moon. Wild Dreams I know you well Many stories to tell And so much yet to see No time to sleep. What will happen at night when I’ -
CSR Book Club C S R Feature: The Life Of Seeon By Comicfan
Aditus commented on Cia's blog entry in Gay Authors News
One of my favorite stories by comicfan. I think I read it two times already. -
Thank you for reading and commenting, LadyDe! 'The third alternative was an excellent idea...' I'm glad you think so.
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Lol, you're right I deleted this part when I revised the chapter. Thank you for telling me.
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Thank you, Def! After the slow start of the story, at least action-wise, I thought an end with a bang would be fitting. Almost all the loose ends are tied, one last chapter to get the rest.
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Thank you, Rosicky! 'Equity in the relationship'. That's a clear yes. Many people might have expected for Diarmad to be the dominant partner, and he will be, but only when Noël let's him.
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Peter, I'm sorry for answering so late. As always you got my intentions perfectly, this time regarding holly with its blood red berries and of course ivy, one of my favorite plants. 'Lord Noël'. I couldn't resist, although for him...he'll need a while to get accustomed to the title. Thank you for another great review.
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The Holly and the Ivy Chapter Thirteen I clutch the overloaded breakfast tray with both hands so as not to spill the juice -Man. Keith really overdid it this time.- while pressing down the door handle with my elbow. The red bed curtains are still closed, but I know the one facing the window will be open. Rounding the corner, I look directly into Diarmad’s dark blue eyes. Is that a hue of silver? What did I do now? And here it comes. “Do not tell me you went to the kitchen like that.” Holdin
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Happy Birthday, Dugh!
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Thank you!
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I'm glad my poem inspired you! Thank you for sharing your thoughts, Tim.
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Thank you, Lisa!
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Thank you, Val!
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Thank you, Gary. I've been unsure to post it, but I think it's okay now.
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That's a good thing, I hope. Thank you, dughlas.
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Thank YOU, for your help and encouragement.
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'Such a roller-coaster of emotions.' Was exactly what I wanted to accomplish. Thank you For describing your thought and feelings. I'm so pleased, lol. I'm sure they will find each other again. Maybe I'll revisit them in a short story.
