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A wonderful and poetic comment, Emi! Thank you so much!
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Your encouraging words made me not throw it away! Thank you for your nice comment and all your help, Cole!
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Weekly Update Weekly Wrap Up (Mar 6 - Mar 12)
Aditus commented on Renee Stevens's blog entry in Gay Authors News
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We had a bad storm in February, which meant our carnival parade has been cancelled. My city is famous for its political floats and we couldn't just not have a parade, which means we had it today. The weather was perfect, so were the floats IMO. For those who speak a little German, although most of the floats are self-explanatory.
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If It's Sunny, Why Am I Getting Rained On.
Aditus commented on comicfan's blog entry in Wayne's Updates
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@Carlos: Thanks for the vote of confidence, Carlos! Patience isn't exactly my strong suit. lol @Val: You will definitely hear from me. Thank you, Val. @Puppilull: *blush* Thank you. Yep Adam is telling me his story. Really appreciate this, guys.
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There's no talking around this: I'm stuck. The first chapter and prologue is written, but I'm not happy. Beside some minor things I'm struggling with perspectives. I'm experimenting with authorial (omniscient) narrator perspective, but I'm afraid I end up head-hopping a lot. The other option is I change the perspective mid-story, not ideal either. Then my summer antho story is nudging me. In my head it's almost written and I itch to actually start the piece. There's some beta-reading too. I need to think and maybe talk it through with people. I promise I will solve this soon. Rant over. ~Aditus
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2016 Spring Anthology - Crossing The Line * Now Live *
Aditus commented on Renee Stevens's blog entry in Gay Authors News
I'm done! If you haven't read the stories yet, I strongly recommend you do. I especially liked the variety. -
'A man with a poison pen.' I really love this. As always you provided lots of interesting information within your tale. I can't imagine to lose my sense to smell, horrible. He had to borrow a nose. lol Again. Great story, Cole!
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Such a nice introduction and then it became creepier and creepier. Terrible things happened, Hank became a murderer, definitely crossed the line...still in a way I feel sorry for him. He's mentally ill. Great story, Val.
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So he didn't cross the line. Yet. We gauge, we assess, and someday we jump. You captured this part of life perfectly. It will repeat itself again and again. I'd like to see him jump. Next time. Thank you, CM! Great story.
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Although I can see a lot of plotting and scheming behind Landon's back in the future, he is confident and optimistic. I thought it was risky to let his mate run when he knows something was up, but he was there when needed. I really wouldn't mind reading more, but it was a good place to stop. Thank you, Renee!
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Tanka - Dancing in the Rain
Aditus commented on Emi GS's story chapter in Tanka - Dancing in the Rain
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I would say he is free now to decide his fate, if he lives that is. You created an interesting world, so many hints, so many possibilities. So, yes please revisit Sudal when you find the time, my mind is spinning.
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Yes, sometimes I'm so blind and can't see the obvious. Thanks again! I love history and research. I'm really happy you think my strange mix works.
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'It was a special kind of torture, being forced to live after killing his love.' Yes, it's one of the most horrible things I can imagine. He is a strong character and now he has another purpose to live. Thank you, Lit! There will be more.
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Thank you, Renee! He needed to change, otherwise he wouldn't have a reason to live.
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'Such evil - and yet such determination to atone.' How else could he still live? You found the turning point. Even though Zaidu didn't have a choice, he feels the guilt. Thank you, Tim!
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I love the story, Parker! I read much about Nigeria, saw some videos. How lucky are we to live where we do, even though it's not perfect it's so much better. I liked that Daniel insisted he didn't understand, it was very brave. Of course I also liked the end. Now I can go to work with a light heart. Thank you so much!.
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2016 Spring Anthology - Crossing The Line * Now Live *
Aditus commented on Renee Stevens's blog entry in Gay Authors News
I definitely start with 'A' this time... Nice Wednesday surprise! Thank you to the anthology team! -
Zaidu The fire crackles in the background, but its warmth doesn’t reach him. Standing in the cave’s entrance, his gaze wanders unseeingly over dense forest. Long-forgotten memories have assaulted him: a walled garden, green leaves whispering in the early morning breeze, and the cries and giggles of his siblings somewhere in the house. But not the name his mother called him. Not her face. Just a faint scent...jasmine? His hand involuntarily clenches into a fist, and he turns his face toward the
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He was the price his mother paid to protect her family from evil. At the age of seven she brought him to the temple to become a priest.
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Happy Birthday!!!!
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CSR Book Club March C S R Feature: Short Stories By Renee Stevens
Aditus commented on Cia's blog entry in Gay Authors News
Short stories are perfect. I can squeeze them in although I have little time right now.
