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'When I looked for translations of "solitary" in my (Dutch) dictionary I found more than twenty different meanings.' I love that you're doing such things. Solitary for me is ambiguous. Sometimes it's self chosen, or at least you think so, but maybe you wouldn't mind some special company also. I'm happy it felt positive to you. Thank you, Peter.
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Solitary The room is crowded and I can feel your presence here. Your stillness vibrates through me, the void a rolling sea. No sound screams in my ear Until I hear a whispered solitary Vast halls echo silence when I climb those many stairs. Open doors are mouths gaping Drapes like monsters shaping Light through mirrors flares And its glares a bright, white solitary. Blind windows show the sky I can feel the sun’s cold rays. Sweating I stretch out my hand, touch the snow-c
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Sci-Fi/meteorite/humanoid reptiles
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Poetry Prompt 6 - Elegy: My Uncle
Aditus commented on Aditus's story chapter in Poetry Prompt 6 - Elegy: My Uncle
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Happy Birthday!
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They're both really good, something we can observe every winter. To the last one I silently added 'until Zombie squished it.'
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I'm curious as to what brought you to write this' I'd rather not say. But seeing how you feel about posting your poetry, which I liked very much btw, I already got part of it. For me black is linked to beautiful things, feelings and experiences, no bad things at all. Thank you dugh, for whispering my poem.
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Back A hesitant step, much too small, to be seen. A quiet word, not enough, To be heard. A deep breath, an inner push: Naked in the light. Even though fully clothed, He shivers. Goes back to the safe place, Black, as it is his nature.
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But you also said you trusted me and even though I made it difficult, you did. Thank you, Gary.
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Yes we can! *hides* Quod est demonstrandum.
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What about the other sauces, Dark? My favorite is the red wine mushroom sauce. I know how hard it is to refrain from editing very early pieces, still I think you were right AC, in not doing it. They are time capsules, conserving our early self. Thank you Val and Parker for your kind words. Just as a warning though, let me quote Carlos: 'Yup, too much fucking drama. I can't stand that shit!! Thank you Dark!
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Poetry Prompt 17 – Childhood Verse: The Pool/Wild Dreams
Aditus commented on Aditus's story chapter in Poetry Prompt 17 – Childhood Verse: The Pool/Wild Dreams
Thank you, Gary! I hope they were good memories. I still remember how cold it was...in early November. -
Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us, Lit! Yes there will be more eventually, although I'm very busy right now so it will take a while. I want to finish the second part before I start publishing, so there won't be any delay and also to take pressure off my team.
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Poetry Prompt 17 – Childhood Verse: The Pool/Wild Dreams
Aditus commented on Aditus's story chapter in Poetry Prompt 17 – Childhood Verse: The Pool/Wild Dreams
I love sleeping because of the dreams. And I often think of stories I could write and, if I'm really lucky, they become dreams. But when I was a kid I really, really hated having to go to bed. lol Thank you for the review! -
Poetry Prompt 17 – Childhood Verse: The Pool/Wild Dreams
Aditus posted new chapter in Aditus' prompts and circumstances
The Pool The water surface glitters in the sun, beckons us over to come and have fun. Little leaf boats only need a push Clothes fly behind the elder bush. Naked in a mad dash Jumping in a big splash Frozen we shiver And blue lips quiver Then strong arms grab us Mom’s making a fuss And the bathtub becomes soon A spaceship to the moon. Wild Dreams I know you well Many stories to tell And so much yet to see No time to sleep. What will happen at night when I’ -
CSR Book Club C S R Feature: The Life Of Seeon By Comicfan
Aditus commented on Cia's blog entry in Gay Authors News
One of my favorite stories by comicfan. I think I read it two times already. -
Thank you for reading and commenting, LadyDe! 'The third alternative was an excellent idea...' I'm glad you think so.
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Lol, you're right I deleted this part when I revised the chapter. Thank you for telling me.
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Thank you, Def! After the slow start of the story, at least action-wise, I thought an end with a bang would be fitting. Almost all the loose ends are tied, one last chapter to get the rest.
