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Poetry Prompt 16 - Carol - An Early Gift
Aditus commented on Aditus's story chapter in Poetry Prompt 16 - Carol - An Early Gift
I had everything but the refrain. All I could come up with was somehow meh. I went to bed and -zing- there was the refrain. Thanks for your kind words, AC, and always for the prompt. -
At least they were on their own with no big wigs around. I liked your emergency mating. Enjoy their mating...there is one last chapter. Thank you for your thoughts and support, Puppi.
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It was the first time I wrote something like this. I'm glad it worked so well for you. Thank you, WriterJT!
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The Holly and the Ivy Chapter Twelve The arms around me feel like steel bands. Rough clothes rub against my naked skin. I have to get out of his hold. If I could get him to let loose only for a moment. With the gloved hand covering my mouth and nose it’s difficult to breathe. All I can smell is leather. He’s mocking me. My feeble attempts to free myself seem to amuse him. Fucker! I stop fighting. Suddenly I have room to lean forward slightly, and then I slam my head back as hard as I can. Fuc
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I understood it as a wake up call. And stupid me had to think of Tanner and Tannenbaum. Anyway, I liked the story. Jude is heading for an interesting new year, I'm sure.
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Poetry Prompt 16 - Carol - An Early Gift
Aditus commented on Aditus's story chapter in Poetry Prompt 16 - Carol - An Early Gift
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Poetry Prompt 16 - Carol - An Early Gift
Aditus commented on Aditus's story chapter in Poetry Prompt 16 - Carol - An Early Gift
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Poetry Prompt 16 - Carol - An Early Gift
Aditus commented on Aditus's story chapter in Poetry Prompt 16 - Carol - An Early Gift
You think? Thank you! -
Poetry Prompt 16 - Carol - An Early Gift
Aditus commented on Aditus's story chapter in Poetry Prompt 16 - Carol - An Early Gift
Thank you, Def! They actually planned on catching Santa, to finally prove it's their uncle. (me) Well, the little one, the other two already know, lol. -
Poetry Prompt 16 - Carol - An Early Gift
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Two naughty children have a plan And cookies are the bait. In camouflage with camera They’re targeting the plate. A picture proving he exists But Santa he is the late. A dare, a wish, a secret thought A precious gift that Santa brought. Four tiny feet creep down the stairs, Till they reach the landing To sneak a peek at Santa Claus With Daddy he’s standing But what is this? They joke and kiss! Answers they’re demanding! A dare, a wish, a secret thought A precious gift tha -
I would definitely call this the perfect Christmas miracle!
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A Secret Santa contest within a Secret Santa contest! What a great idea put into a nice story! Merry Christmas, Santa. This made me smile.
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“Did you know the Ancient Greeks considered mistletoe an aphrodisiac and believed it aided fertility?” Although already on her tiptoes, Nell still had to stretch to be able to whisper into Eugene’s ear. “Aha.” He eyed the couple kissing under the little green bouquet his sister had hung up strategically in the quietest corner of the room. “You think Kyle and Lara are trying for kids?” But Nell was not so easily deterred when she was in full lecture mode. “It’s those berries. They look like tin
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In this story you can learn interesting things about mistletoe, encouraging Christmas punch and kissing the the wrong guy at the right time.
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Lol! Thank you, WriterJT! I'm glad you thought so.
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Happy Birthday! Have a wonderful day!
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Happy Birthday!
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I strongly believe the 'mighty push' has been David's love. They say love conquers all. Right? Beautiful, Gary. The description of the 'in between' was really impressive, almost poetic. A very nice piece.
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I liked how you described the upcoming storm, outside and inside. The dynamic will definitely change with the new arrivals, soooo 'Crossing lines' next?
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I'm glad we all agree that the doc was a creep and other colorful things, and now we're glad he is dead. It felt really good to write this actually. I understand your not trusting Andra yet, after everything that happened... So sorry for your nails. Thank you, Def!
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'...violently bites the hand held over his mouth. That way he can drink Diarmad’s blood, which would complete the mating. Why didn't I think of that? Too late now. Finally someone who appreciates the suspense. But reading about hanging from a cliff for a whole week made me feel bad. Almost. Thank you for your review, Peter!
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I didn't read the story this belongs to, but I got a good feeling about this family. It's how it should be, controlled trust.
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Okay I'm on the 'He is still alive' team. I couldn't read as fast as I would have liked. I might even have skipped some parts only to reach the end faster. Of course I read it a second time afterwards.
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I can't believe it! You can't do this to me! I'm sitting here all creeped out and that is the end?! I want a solution. Great job, Val. Wow.
