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I can see this is going to be a typical Cole story. I loved seeing Roy and Chad acting as parents, so to say, and that you not used any stereotyping to describe Harrison's parents. I'm very curious now.
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The Gayest Man in the Whole World
Aditus commented on Cole Matthews's story chapter in The Gayest Man in the Whole World
The title of this chapter is so perfect! People forget about this all the time and I love that you reminded us. They have theire 'HEA' and I'm glad. They deserve it. But the song...I gotta say I was never that gay. lol Still, it was fitting and it was beautiful. Thank you for this wonderful story, Cole. Sometimes it's good to just start writing and then see where it goes. Right? -
Happy Brithday, dugh!
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Prompt 360 Why do I even bother? (II)
Aditus commented on Timothy M.'s story chapter in Prompt 360 Why do I even bother? (II)
I felt with Eric. It's really disappointing/frustrating when there is so little trust, (no snide remarks please) especially when it's his parents. So yes, the yelling came from my heart too.The rational me knows it's difficult for both sides though, and you showed it well. Still...parents should trust themselves sometimes, that they did well. And Rob *swoon*, what's not to love. -
Poetry Prompt 5 – Rhymes and Couplets
Aditus posted new chapter in Aditus' prompts and circumstances
Done He was a boy about two, and he thought it was true what his mother him told, in this tale of old: if they were around, No nightmares him found. And then he was ten, and there were those men, Around him was none, and that was when his dreams were entirely done. The numbers game One small step for a man, So move it baby, while you can. Two peas in a pot, One for you, one to rot. Three strikes and you are out, So watch it boy, don’t be too loud. Four corners- 4 comments
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Twice the Night Before Christmas
Aditus commented on Aditus's story chapter in Twice the Night Before Christmas
Thank you Wayne! I'm really glad you liked my vampires. When you have time to read the other one, I'd be happy if you'd tell me what you think. I'm planning a Valentine story, if I find the time. -
Ten sharp and I stood in front of Sandro's shop, feeling like I was going to throw up. Why the hell had I agreed to this? Doing a photo shoot wearing only a hat, a tie, and my glasses? No, I couldn’t do this. Then Sandro stood before me. "Jonah, right on time. Perfect.” He held the door open and I went in. “To be honest, I had expected I'd have to come over to the restaurant and drag you into the studio by your newly cut hair." "Um, yeah.” Time to confess. “That's what would have happened if M
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Prompts Writing Prompts Second Chance Prompts!
Aditus commented on Renee Stevens's blog entry in Writing World
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Yeah, you're right. Someone on my side in forum? Yes!
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Poor nail though, right? Oh yes, the story forum. The more the merrier, come hit me on the head.
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Happy birthday, Greg!
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So, this happens when a Wichtel jumps over the pond. I love it Cole, it's a heartwarming and optimistic story. People often fight over the Holiday because of the stress and whatnot, and need a little nudge to remember the basics. Thanks.
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Or Matteo is used to tread with caution around the husband and his family and tries the gradual approach to a delicate topic.So you like long hair? Well, I already told you what I think. Thanks, Tim.
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I guess Sandro wouldn't have liked the 'plucked chicken' look. But yes, you're right, that's what's family for. Thanks, Cole.
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I hope it will get better for you two in the next seven chapters...I know this is getting frustrating.Thanks, Dave.
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LOL Now that everyone has their life planned by you, what should I do? Think about other ways to torture my readers, but not so much that they start quitting on me? Jonah will never call Ren. He is hurt and feels betrayed, not exactly the right state of mind to listen to reason. Thank you, Nlaudenslager! I'll have a white Cosmo.
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Sometimes Jonah needs to be symbolic, see it every day in the mirror to believe it.Thank you Lisa.
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Yeah, we're one. He behaves like he does and I report it. Jonah is a very stubborn man. And he's hurt. Never good.Thank you for commenting LitLover, even you we're killing you.
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And again Gary: I am very sorry. I hope you can endure some more chapters with us.Thank you!
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LOL. Nope. He is the spontaneous kind of guy. Thank you Chezakeeba.
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You know cooks and their precious knifes. And he would never do that.Thanks, Irri!
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Prompt 291 Oh crap! Here we go again.
Aditus commented on Timothy M.'s story chapter in Prompt 291 Oh crap! Here we go again.
I had the feeling Rob wanted to high-five me and shout ‘YES!’, but fortunately he restrained himself. OMG, Rob must be sick or something! Seriously though, just reading about this parent meeting made me cringe. -
I smelled coffee. Hmm…and somebody was running his fingers through my hair. "Ren…" "Um..." "Ren!" I sat up with a start only to be knocked against the head by something sharp and solid. "Ouch!" "Fuck!" "What the hell!" Rubbing my aching temple, I looked around and found Rick lying on the floor beside my bed. "What are you doing down there, looking for my cum rag or what?" "Ha ha fucking ha….” Rick touched his chin tentatively and hissed. “I was trying to wake you lovingly, but all you can t
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Prompt 328 You expect me to believe that? (II)
Aditus commented on Timothy M.'s story chapter in Prompt 328 You expect me to believe that? (II)
So, the verbal walk on the wild side did end pretty soon. Lol Reality bites and all... -
Do You Hear What I Hear?
Aditus commented on Cole Matthews's story chapter in Do You Hear What I Hear?
When I started to read I thought 'Who's Tony?' Did I miss a chapter? And then I read on and everything became clear. Very nice, Cole, you got me. So, there seems to be a Christmas all around. And why not, everyone deserves their very own miracle. Thank you.
