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LOL. So glad I could help... hahaha. You know, I read this review together with my coffee and I had to put it away as to not spill it all over my lap top. 'why his eyes are sad and his ass is in Sicily' rofl I'm facing Monday with a smile. Thank you, Nlaudenslager!
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I see what I can do. Thanks for the feedback, sacredlove.
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Let's see what the next prompts are. Maybe? LOLThanks Lisa.
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Thank you for reading and encouraging me, Cazpedroso.
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Good, good. I'm really glad this crazy thing worked so well. Thanks, Nlaudenslager! I hope the aspirin is working.
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Okay. Thanks Val, I'm glad you think it is worth to be continued.
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Wouldn't that be cool? Having your very own piano man? The feedback is very encouraging; I think I'll be doing this. Thanks, Cole.
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How is this fair? She's getting something and he's not! Wouldn't the mole find out eventually? I smell something fishy! And now you're on! I want to know more.
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How it began. ‘Martin I’ of ‘The Lonely Heart Club – a prompt story’ (This is a chapter of my prompt collection 'Aditus' prompts and circumstances' Roman I Roman watched the waitress meandering between tables, skillfully balancing the silver tray on one hand. He had given her a generous tip so that she’d made the extra tour, bringing only his request over to the piano player. Martin’s hands danced over the keys. Smiling, he nodded at her when Anna placed the tray on top of his sheet music.
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This is a story based on Friday's prompts and Billy Joel's song 'Piano Man'. There will be no rummaging around in past prompt themes. Every time something triggers the plot bunnies to jump, I'll write a new chapter. Therefore, there might be weeks in between chapters, where I won’t add anything new. I plan to alternate between Martin’s and Roman’s POV. There is no real plan, or direction where this will go, I'm open to ideas and suggestions.
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'Stalkerish in a good way' hahaha. Glad you're seeing it this way. There is more to come. Nice to see you here too, Chezakeeba.
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Jonah is an expert runner, so yeah, a short break and he'll run again I fear.Glad you're still reading my story, Dave. Thank you!
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Coming from a master himself, this is great praise. Thank you, Cole!
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You're the first who noticed it though. If Jonah had thrown him out we wouldn't have had so much fun, you ranting and I writing. LOL Thank you, Carlos. I'm glad you're still enjoying the story.
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Thank you, Carlos! Sorry, but Michael is already spoken for... I'm glad the journal is working for. At first I was afraid it was too confusing, but once the idea was in my head I couldn't get rid of it anymore.
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Haha, yes you did. I'm honored you sacrificed some of your sleep for reading my story and I'm glad I could make it believable for you. About what will happen, well... There will be one easy and nice chapter... Thank you for another thoughtful comment, Gary. I'm glad to have you on board now.
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Nice way to skirt around the Thanksgiving theme. One day I'll be at Sturgis... Holy hell to the rest. To be honest, I don't know if I can follow this story to the end. It's November after all...
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I have severals: https://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=player_embedded&v=4N3N1MlvVc4 but this always gets to me: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WTK-caTF9Ys The translation is a bit rough, but I think you'll get it anyway.
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Prompt 323 Can I talk to you? (II)
Aditus commented on Timothy M.'s story chapter in Prompt 323 Can I talk to you? (II)
'Was there a slight hesitation...' Ha! Rob! I saw that! Anticipation is half the fun, so I'll wait patiently. So it was dad's turn to talk to Eric... I like to read about parents who care, and cringe thinking about it. LOL Can't wait for the next one. -
Thank you Irri! Just picturing you wearing a 'Team Ren' shirt...Ha! Can't believe I got you!
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You don't like possessive? Not even a tiny bit? You're not losing your inner Jonah, are you? LOLYeah, I kinda couldn't resist the famous last words... Thank you Tim. Love your comments, even when you're not ranting.
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Good start. I'm hooked. The MCs have a nice chemistry. And you're an awful tease.
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Sicily, in Matteo’s kitchen I was cutting vegetables and stirring the soup under close observation of the Lord of the kitchen. If I proved myself worthy, I would be permitted to cook a minestrone all by myself eventually, naturally only as a trial. For our lunch, not for the guests, heaven forbid! Still, it was fun to watch Matteo reigning over his realm. Although he was strict, he somehow managed bossing around his employees in a nice way. The fun started when he got inspired. He bustled abou
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I had so much fun reading this! Thank you Val!
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Hmmm #371 is tempting me to write a new story featuring Martin and Roman . Any interest in 'Lonely Heart Club - a prompt story' ?
