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What's 'schlong'? And I want to thank you. I feel so much better for getting yelled at now, not that I think myself in the same league as the above mentioned. Of course I also know they love my Jonah, deep down in their heart they love him. Even if I'm nurse Ratched now. A perfect world would be so boring.
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Poetry Prompt 5 – Rhymes and Couplets
Aditus commented on Aditus's story chapter in Poetry Prompt 5 – Rhymes and Couplets
You're spot on, the descent to reality kicked his world apart too.Well the prayer was a nursery rhyme for me. My great, great aunt let me say it every night. Which also refers to the first poem btw. So I searched the internet for sayings English speaking people know, some I did had already like 'two peas in a pot' and voilà! Thank you for your comment, Irri. I'm glad you like them. -
Well, I guess the dinner has only been part of the reason Jonah took off the necklace. The talk with Matteo, the good bye in the church, there were a lot of small things that led to him doing this.As I said before, it's hard to see Jonah doing this, when you want him to do something else. To be honest, sometimes I think I should change things. But this is Jonah with all his flaws, he has some good things going for him too, at least I hope so. Thank you for reading and commenting, Gary. I really appreciate your thoughts.
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It's always hard to stand nearby without the means to do something, when someone else is seemingly being an idiot. I get that.
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Nurse Ratched.
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Haha, emote away. I love it. lolAnother detail I slaved over to get it right (with your help, I might add). I'm glad you appreciated it, Cole. Thank you!
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Thank you, dughlas. I saw that little patio right before my eyes. You wouldn't believe how long it took me to describe it adequately. I'm glad you liked that little detail.
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Yep, Rick can be a pest, good thing Matteo has him under control most of the time. So no ranting? Did I do something wrong? As always, you know Jonah too well. Thanks, Tim.
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Going with Faramir here? 'Nice and short.'
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I can see this is going to be a typical Cole story. I loved seeing Roy and Chad acting as parents, so to say, and that you not used any stereotyping to describe Harrison's parents. I'm very curious now.
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The Gayest Man in the Whole World
Aditus commented on Cole Matthews's story chapter in The Gayest Man in the Whole World
The title of this chapter is so perfect! People forget about this all the time and I love that you reminded us. They have theire 'HEA' and I'm glad. They deserve it. But the song...I gotta say I was never that gay. lol Still, it was fitting and it was beautiful. Thank you for this wonderful story, Cole. Sometimes it's good to just start writing and then see where it goes. Right? -
Happy Brithday, dugh!
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Prompt 360 Why do I even bother? (II)
Aditus commented on Timothy M.'s story chapter in Prompt 360 Why do I even bother? (II)
I felt with Eric. It's really disappointing/frustrating when there is so little trust, (no snide remarks please) especially when it's his parents. So yes, the yelling came from my heart too.The rational me knows it's difficult for both sides though, and you showed it well. Still...parents should trust themselves sometimes, that they did well. And Rob *swoon*, what's not to love. -
Poetry Prompt 5 – Rhymes and Couplets
Aditus posted new chapter in Aditus' prompts and circumstances
Done He was a boy about two, and he thought it was true what his mother him told, in this tale of old: if they were around, No nightmares him found. And then he was ten, and there were those men, Around him was none, and that was when his dreams were entirely done. The numbers game One small step for a man, So move it baby, while you can. Two peas in a pot, One for you, one to rot. Three strikes and you are out, So watch it boy, don’t be too loud. Four corners- 4 comments
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Twice the Night Before Christmas
Aditus commented on Aditus's story chapter in Twice the Night Before Christmas
Thank you Wayne! I'm really glad you liked my vampires. When you have time to read the other one, I'd be happy if you'd tell me what you think. I'm planning a Valentine story, if I find the time. -
Ten sharp and I stood in front of Sandro's shop, feeling like I was going to throw up. Why the hell had I agreed to this? Doing a photo shoot wearing only a hat, a tie, and my glasses? No, I couldn’t do this. Then Sandro stood before me. "Jonah, right on time. Perfect.” He held the door open and I went in. “To be honest, I had expected I'd have to come over to the restaurant and drag you into the studio by your newly cut hair." "Um, yeah.” Time to confess. “That's what would have happened if M
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Prompts Writing Prompts Second Chance Prompts!
Aditus commented on Renee Stevens's blog entry in Writing World
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Yeah, you're right. Someone on my side in forum? Yes!
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Poor nail though, right? Oh yes, the story forum. The more the merrier, come hit me on the head.
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Happy birthday, Greg!
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So, this happens when a Wichtel jumps over the pond. I love it Cole, it's a heartwarming and optimistic story. People often fight over the Holiday because of the stress and whatnot, and need a little nudge to remember the basics. Thanks.
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Or Matteo is used to tread with caution around the husband and his family and tries the gradual approach to a delicate topic.So you like long hair? Well, I already told you what I think. Thanks, Tim.
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I guess Sandro wouldn't have liked the 'plucked chicken' look. But yes, you're right, that's what's family for. Thanks, Cole.
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I hope it will get better for you two in the next seven chapters...I know this is getting frustrating.Thanks, Dave.
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LOL Now that everyone has their life planned by you, what should I do? Think about other ways to torture my readers, but not so much that they start quitting on me? Jonah will never call Ren. He is hurt and feels betrayed, not exactly the right state of mind to listen to reason. Thank you, Nlaudenslager! I'll have a white Cosmo.
