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Prompt #384 The Big Sleep
Aditus commented on Cole Matthews's story chapter in Prompt #384 The Big Sleep
Gin! My thoughts exactly! God I hate this stuff! Not the story! Jeez, you make me crazy too! -
Chapter 2 Know when to fold 'em
Aditus commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 2 Know when to fold 'em
Okay, this may sound stupid, but I'm glad Michael left. This needs time. Time to sound out their feeling, what not seeing each other daily means for them, what other possibilities they have, what the consequences of certain decisions would mean etc. It's a good chapter, Gary. It showed how deeply they feel for each other, they did talk but they didn't rush things. And now I'm curious about the next one. -
spring, definitely!
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I like Charles and Sam, they sound like interesting people. I want to know if their bubble has space for one more.
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Aww, another member of the Michael fan club! I have to think of something nice for him. Thank you, LBO.
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I'm glad you had fun. Thank you , LBO.
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Thank you! And I won't...this is our secret.
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I'm glad you could appreciate the romance even though it got messier. But Gary think I'll clean up afterwards...let's see if he is right.Thanks for your comment, dughlas.
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Yes! I'm glad you did say that, because it took me quite a while to get it right. Thank you, Cole.
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I am very thankful for and very much appreciate your trust in me, Gary. Through your comments you let me get a glimpse at what you feel when you read RRS. Since you just started publishing your first story, you know how much it means for an author.Thank you, Gary.
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So true. That's what I wanted to try with this story: people aren't rational beings, they don't do the right thing and they make the same mistake twice or trice, w/e. Watching this from the outside...Wise words, Dave. Thank you.
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Let me give you a *hug*.
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I can see you're working extra hours as Jonah's advocate here. I think he very much appreciates this.Yes, what would have happened...now we never know. Thank you, Tim.
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I could see everything right before my eyes. It was very emotional and absolutely believable. I can't wait to read more. Good job, Gary!
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"Hey Rick. I'm going over to Sandro's tonight. He said he has finished the collage and invited me for dinner to celebrate. That okay?" My cousin leaned back, crossed his arms in front of him and frowned. "So, the great artist is finally ready to show off his work? After what…?” He made a production out of looking at his watch. “Five weeks? And we’re not invited?” “Um…” He waved his hand about. “If Sandro wasn’t always gallivanting with you all over the island, it would have gone a lot faster.
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Thank you Carlos for letting César talk and act like he did. No political correctness and shit, sorry I mean um stuff, but right to the point. I was cheering him on when he talked to Lourdes after their spring break-up. Perfect! So, what's next?
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What can you expect if someone's name is Lourdes? I mean in theory you could expect a lot...
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And I am again late to the party, but I get to read three chapters! Wouldn't you like to have your dad react like that? Still, being ripped away from his friends, school and even his bigoted family must be hard. I really liked the Oreos and milk part. Great start, Carlos.
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Prompt #382 - The Butler Did It
Aditus commented on Cole Matthews's story chapter in Prompt #382 - The Butler Did It
But isn't it always the gardener? Anyway, I have to say...well what Carlos said. But I always liked Fahd, so that's good. And may the next prompts inspire you or something... -
Found this again: Live version Or the studio version
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Nope, no Sandro for you. lol Not even Matteo really got why Jonah is so upset. He will explain it to him in the next chapter. Thank you Lisa! For everything.
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Lol, or that. And he can't be charming all the time don't you think? He's stubborn, and impulsive, and trying to do things instead of things being done with him. He needs to muddle through a bit more, give him time and he will be charming again.Sorry for being late with answering to your review. I really appreciate your comments.
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Especially if he's a red head. Right? And my Jonah is so far away from Mr. Perfect...he makes the readers yell at me. But that's okay, now I know I did something right.
