AFBNOW

This is only the second story about triplets I have come across on this site. I guess people don't find us very interesting. My only complaint was it was too short. It would make a great introduction to a story exploring the brothers different personalities and their new lives with their father and his husband.

Carlos this brought back memories of visiting and touring Havana, visiting Morro Castle and touring the city in a "new Nash". If I remember correctly, my father worked in the casino at a Hotel National?

WARNING TOO DARK! I CAN NOT READ THIS! I'M TEMPTED TO DELETE GAY AUTHORS FROM MY TOOL BAR! I COULD NOT GET PAST THE FIRST CHAPTER

Carlos it's obvious you were not in the army! No one could "love" shit-on-a-shingle!!! I think you are confusing it with southern gravy and biscuits. Not the same! "SOS" is a creamed chipped beef on toast (the shingle). ASK ANY VET!

This was a looong read but it held my interest all the way through in spite of many plot turns, twists and U-turn or two. There was a lot of detail and description that added to the story. Well worth the time to read!

A question. You refer to the lagoon as part of the Intercoastal Waterway. Is this part of the Intracoastal (inland) Waterway system that was designed to protect shipping during war time in South Florida like the Lake Worth lagoon?

“GO! NOW!” I ordered. Jacob nodded, helped Jason to his feet, and over to the car. I walked over and opened the back door, so we could force Jason in. “This isn’t over” I growled at Pit “I’ll make you regret this…I’ll put led right between those ugly eyes of yours.” Was this a door or a hatchback? I've never seen a 4 door Mustang? Clewless

I normally don't read "were" creature stories! HOWEVER, i have read all your other stories. Are you sure Jed was born in California? Jed tingled with anticipation and leaned forward. "That sounds… satisfying." That sounds like he's just a sweet transvestite from Transexual, Transylvania. ???

Another good read Carlos. Thank you! A

Having been raised in a small settlement neighboring a Fort known as Lauderdale (a trading post known primarily for its liquid refreshments) we had horses growing up. Therefore I am attracted to horse stories (sorry Blue). I'm not big on romantic stories. This story was well written and held my attention to the end. I didn't even notice any of the occasional spell check errors most stories have.

I agree with Philippe! This was my favorite story Mark but I think it is time to delete my bookmark and say goodbye to George!

Hmmm. Maybe Nick should have had Zak's first, middle and last name tattooed on Noah's appendage. It changed from Allen (chap. 4) to Aaron (chap. 22). That said, I have enjoyed the story very much. We had western horses when I was a kid. I liked the detail in the earlier chapters about the different breeds and the tack. I learned a few things I did not know and Googled a few things to learn more. Put me on the + side of the Max & Loki issues. Could use more Nick & Noah--hope you were laying the ground work for another story!

This was an enjoyable change of pace from the usual subject matter on this site once I reoriented myself back to 2006. Maybe you could do another story on my home territory, Corruption County, Floriduh! The home of Mark Foley and now the official residence our leader. God save us, PLEASE!

This would have been a great story if you had mixed the Drambuie with a good scotch!

After reading Enigma I wanted to read Enigma II to follow River and Silver. I almost quit after the first few chapters but kept reading to see if it would get better. I am glad I didn't quit because the last chapters wouldn't have meant much without the background. The depth of the character development made this well worth reading. I'm looking forward to Enigma III.