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"Use me" Birch is already feeling his responsibilities, and love for his other half. A little drama ahead!
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"still have to pee". Nature calls, even after discovering that you have to pee. Even though Birch is not going bers erk, I see like all is not as it seems. Something has got to break into this happy scene. Too perfect right no
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This is going to be a bumpy ride. I'd be indignant if I'd been Birch. Looking at my trinkets while I was asleep Sayer is going to have to do a lot of groveling it seems.
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Hmm, so if Sayer doesn't trust his healers with Birch, who'll take care of him? Pretty interesting:) lol
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Deciding to start something new today, and this one grabbed me. Gotta see what happens now
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Short, but sweet? Only you know that. Love reading your ponderings and thoughts.
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Wonderful take on the theme. Imagery was beautiful, and made me imagine lovely things. Love it!
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I never expect anything but wonderful from you, and you delivered. Emotions rule us during the holidays!
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A Christmas Carol: Heart of Stone
joann414 commented on Cole Matthews's story chapter in A Christmas Carol: Heart of Stone
'twerking to the oldies" That was too funny. You need to post the link to your story in your statue, btw. This is a great rendition of the original story. Had to laugh at how you improvised with your "ghosts of Christmas past". Great job, and you imagination went into overdrive on this one. Love to watch your writing move along in so many ways. Merry Christmas!!!!! -
Twice the Night Before Christmas
joann414 commented on Aditus's story chapter in Twice the Night Before Christmas
As I said before, there's not many vampire stories that can make you go awwww at the end. This went from dramatic, to evil, back to dramatic, to family, back to drama again, with that sweet, awwww for an ending. I love it -
This story makes me want to be a shifter So much love, family, furry friends, sexy friends, harness sex.. Great little story, and will be looking for more. Thanks for sharing such a sweet holiday story!
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You did venture off into different territory on the religious issues, but I think you did it in a very nice way that doesn't purposely offend everyone. The way that you portrayed your characters did parallel with It's a Wonderful Life just with a different type of issues involved. But, all in all, I loved the story. Definitely, food for thought. Thanks for sharing such a well thought out and well written story.
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Even perfect parties have hickups
joann414 commented on Winged_Wolf's story chapter in Even perfect parties have hickups
Good job. I don't know If I'd been as brave as Bella tho, when it came to Twilla. She was like the devil in disguise. -
And again, I learn from your writing! You take a short story and make it into a great piece of work. Me, liking the cold and the dark would love to witness such beauty, especially with the warmth of someone holding my hand adding to the magic. Loved this, Thorn
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There better be more, or you might want to sleep with one eye open. So glad the knock came to the door, and his dream came to pass. I could listen to Matt Cardle all night also. Even though his famous identity is known, he still expresses his attraction. Huge positive sign. Can't wait for more of this sexy romantic, story. Thanks!
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Mine is up but I can't get it to link here. Sheesh
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"costume straddling his thighs and waist" Your mind must be working lustfully overtime. That statement would have kept me reading if this was ten times as long as it is. Your imagery and words describing what he is seeing, and his state of emotions is mind grabbing. I love it, over and over. Just when I think this is great writing, I read something even better. I can't wait for more. Matt Cardle singing The First Time Ever I Saw Your Face will never be surpassed. He is one of the best singers I've found, and I would've never heard him if it wasn't for the internet. Thank goodness for my PC I could go on and on about your writing, but I'll just try to be patient and wait for the other chapter!
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Still trudging along. Probably will be unedited, but I'm not going to give up
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I agree with Adam. Relationships need to grow and be nurtured before "I love yous" are exchanged. He let Mikael down easy and was honest while doing it. I loved that about Adam. Love to get behind on a great story, but hate to get caught up Now, I have to wait again. Loving this so much girl!
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Never say "I lub you" when you're drunk. Just doesn't go over well with who you are declaring to. Not the best circumstances. Can't blame Adam for not returning the words. Tomorrow may be a little embarrassing for his boy Mikael is he doesn't remember his words and Adam reminds him. Food for thought in this chapter. I think Adam wants to explore their relationship more before making his heart known. JMO Very enjoyable chapter btw
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Adam definitely put Mikael in contact with his real emotions. Mikael's doubts should've flown out the window when he came underneath Adam Things are heating up now
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Liking Julie more and more. What a sweet and understanding sounding board for Mikael. Looks like he certainly needs one at this point.
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What an engaging story. I normally don't do the magic but, I have to say I love this. Can I please have a Duncan of my own
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Gotta love the mouthing of family during the holidays. Makes it a tedious day for the host or hostess. I know. Of course years later, we find humor in these episodes. Great job Kit.
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Certainly a very hard way to start and make a relationship work, but I'm saying it did. They fell madly in love, live in the house together now, have a cat and dog. They take turns cooking every night, and the sex is off the charts
