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What a meaningful piece of writing! You did a wonderful job here WL. Thanks for sharing!
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Lot of food for thought in your writing. Very well written. YOu did a great job here!
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Sad, reflective, and meaningful Wayne. YOu work well with poetry. Enjoyed all three very much
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Made me malancholy for some reason. Means your poetry reaches out and touches the reader Wayne. Thank you!!!
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I am out of likes but that is ok because I looooooved it. Great work Wayne!!!!!
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Your story gets better and better as you move it along. Korbyn is quite the mystery though, and I guess in a way, so is Ryan. Jade is like a little jumping up and down kid to me. That is how I picture him. lol Good job!
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Chapter 3 Party Conflict
joann414 commented on flawlesss's story chapter in Chapter 3 Party Conflict
I think I missed this part yesterday. You must have still been posting when I read the other part. Really liking your story! These guys are quite a piece of work tho. -
I could feel a lot of pain and sadness here A.J. You expressed your emotions very well and I know it hurt to write this. YOu did a great job!
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Chapter 2 - The Mouse Trap
joann414 commented on bryan90's story chapter in Chapter 2 - The Mouse Trap
Hi, Nice twist to the chapter. Can't wait to see how the invite to the dance goes and if Sam will acknowledge his acquaintance with the weltie. I am enjoying this story so much. thank you. -
Well, the healing process begins, but what of their relationship? Can't help but wonder how it is going to evolve again and if David can handle any feelings the he develops for Micah besides friendship. Yet, will Micah develop feelings for his friend? Lots of things to be resolved here besides getting back into his music.
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Your story plots enthrall me. Great writing
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What Lisa said! Loved this
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I hope Casey's parents have to live with the guilt of what they did to their son for many years to come. David is such a great friend. The greatest thing of all is Micah finally found his emotional side again in his grief over Casey. Now, he is going to face life head on it looks like by agreeing to the today show. Great idea, putting the stone back where happy memories were made for him and Casey. Beautiful chapter!
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Chapter 1 - The Welfare Kids
joann414 commented on bryan90's story chapter in Chapter 1 - The Welfare Kids
Nicely written, attention grabbing first chapter. YOu are a very good storyteller. You introduced the characters in an interesting way. So, we have a secret romance going between Sam and Al huh? Guess I will have to wait until the next chapter to find out if Sam is going to acknowledge Al. Great job! -
Boy, isn't Amy in for a surprise! I bet Zach is going to be embarassed even more now. So glad that he stayed over though. This is such a sweet story
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Shy Zach is so cute. I certainly hope he takes Ryan up on the invite. This is such a light feel good story. thank you
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So glad you decided to continue this. Boy, Zach is a better person than me. I would have had to smack the stupid blind date with words or backhand her. lol. Enjoying this immensely!
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What an entertaining read. Date from hell was putting it mildly Thank goodness for the hunky doctor!
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OMG! Life turned one Casey almost overnight. Just thinking about his suffering emotionally and physically makes me want to murder his father AND mother for not taking up for him. How tragic. Your last sentence of this chapter just broke my heart. Why do I feel that this will wake Micah up to the fact that he needs to live life to it's fullest and appreciate all that he has been given and for his family. Great chapter
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Chapter 4 Party Conflict Cont.
joann414 commented on flawlesss's story chapter in Chapter 4 Party Conflict Cont.
So, I think we are missing a chapter. or not? -
I have to wonder if Ronny ever forgave himself . Even in writing this book to tell his brother's story, taking blame and becoming the king he thought his brother would be. I think his life was never lived in happiness, but in regret for what long ago a thirteen-year old did out of spite and jealousy. You told a very moving tale here that leaves a lot for the reader to ponder. Thanks for such a great sory
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Sorry I keep saying Robby instead of Ronny. Maybe it is the more yourthful sound of Robby that keeps grabbing me. lol So, I thought Ronny would be too weak to want the throne, even to the point of lying to his brother in the letter. Poor Edward after all of his emotional suffering, and then to be betrayed again by his brother! How horrible is that. I can't say that I would not have done the samething he did and just left making them wonder where I went and what I was going to do. Very powerful chapter!
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Forgiveness would be the last thing on my mind if I was Edward too although at thirteen, Robby did not realise the impact of what he did. Now that he does, he wants to be forgiven. I think also that he does not want the responsibility of the throne. He has his own little world that he lives in.
