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What a great story, and I have to say, Brice is quite the man's man. He scooped up two guys within twenty-four hours. This is going to be interesting. Great work
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Jacob and Kyle may not be the perfect couple yet, but their compassion is above and beyond. They are very generous when it comes to Thomas and have a place for him in their lives. Still, I wonder about Thomas as a person. Is he gay, or what? Does he just want attention that he does not receive at home from his father. What a sad thing that a child has to take a chower away from home because of his parent's selfishness? Great chapter
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I am so glad that Jason found a friend in Patrick and it looks like more than a fair weather friend. Coach Campbell did as much as he could do, but he definitely threw the trump card by getting the boys and agent, and evidently a well respected one. Obviously the team is on Jason and Patrick's side and that is a plus. You know I am curious as hell as to what Jason did that has caused all the hooplah. I think it is just a bunch of homophobic crap myself. This story is so much fun and very entertaining.! Thanks again for sharing your talent
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Betty will never want her kids happy until she is a happy human being herself. Very selfish person and I don't even think she realises it. This was a wonderful chapter. Thank you
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Awwwww Shawn, what a wonderful and loving gesture. It almost makes me wish Sam would stay with you and try to make a life. Guess I will see what happens in the next chapter. Great story here
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Jade is too sweet for all of them. Keylon better appreciate his friendship. The jury is still out with me on Mitch!
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If I weren't so enthralled with this story and how wonderfully you present it, I would smack you for killing Jack! But since you say things are going to get better, you are safe. (for the moment) Sue definitely meant to protect her pup didn't she? She has the instincts of a cop still. I felt so sorry for Richard when they went to take Bernard. The horrific sight of my child being used or tortured by a mad man would be my undoing also. Your story is getting better and better if that is possible. Thanks so much for saring!
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Well, if the two guys begin living together that will tell the story as to whether or not they can make a relationship work. Micah stood his ground proudly and David was even prouder of him for doing it. Maybe the transition will go smoothly to Whitman and their lives can settle down a little.
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I loved the concept of this story. It's sad that these kinds of things have become a fact of life that we have to deal with, but thanks to people like Daryl bullying is being brought more into the open and hopefully be diminished. Thanks for a great read!
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I told myself I was not going to start reading anything new, but had to take a peek at this, and now I am totally hooked. Great start girl and looking forward to enjoying this journey. Thanks for sharing
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It always makes you want to kick your own butt when you find out you mistreated someone and that they are sick, regardless if it is your boyfriend or not so I can't imagine how Alex feels. But you can't take back things you have said, you just have to try and make up for them and prove your worthiness. Kei thinking he is all alone is heartbreaking but so many people do wind up sick and alone sometimes. Hopefully, he will not be for long. I loved how you wrote Alex's shock and shame when he found out about Kei. Gotta love the nosey nurse. Just all in a day's work! Thanks for another great chapter.
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Well Micah is at a better place in life with his music and his man. So glad to see Jake and Robbie back in the story for a visit. The violin is something that will always keep the four of them connected in life. Loved the innocence of the first sex, so refreshingly warm and loving. So, now I have to wait and see what letter awaited David on his door. As usual, you wrote a wonderful chapter
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Well, Korbyn definitely set Bray apart from the rest of the group. I just don't understand why the others, especially Jade and Ryan stood by and let it happen. Mitch seems like a tough guy, but that was a little odd for him to be the one to pick Bray up from school. Lot of mystery here!
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Chapter 5 - The Autumn Dance
joann414 commented on bryan90's story chapter in Chapter 5 - The Autumn Dance
What the hell happened? Surely Shawn did not beat Al with a bat. How horrible. These young people are a bunch of meanies. They just see how much they can stir mindless of the hurt they can cause. Good work -
Chapter 4 - The Prodigal Sons
joann414 commented on bryan90's story chapter in Chapter 4 - The Prodigal Sons
So now we know how Allistair and Sam know each other and the background to their relationship. You wrote the scene with Sam and Shawn very realistically, and even Sam's thoughts afterwards bled a lot of emotion. Great chapter! -
Chapter 15: Cousin Interference
joann414 commented on intune's story chapter in Chapter 15: Cousin Interference
You have certainly made a mess here and on top of that left somewhat of a cliffhanger! So, hopefully that means you will be back with a new chapter soon and straighten out some of these issues before I hunt you down like an animal and force you to write Great chapter once again! -
Please tell me Jeremy has not told Sam that Lucca was cheating on him or even broke up with Matt because he thought Matt was cheating with Lucca. You have woven a tangled mess here. lol
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Wow, Jeremy does not have a clue does he or is Matt the solution to everyone's problems? When are we going to hear from him btw? Maybe they all need to have a "come to Jesus meeting." Meaning everyone needs to sit down and have a truthful pow-wow. There's so much misunderstanding and everyone is suffering because of it. Poor Addie is going to go broke buying ice cream, brownies, popcorn and sappy movies. lol. Love this so much!
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Chapter 12: Second Song, Jumping Ship
joann414 commented on intune's story chapter in Chapter 12: Second Song, Jumping Ship
OMG! You last line made my throat hurt it was so intense. Lucca is so lucky and so is Sam. Now if only Jeremy will only get his head out of his ass and go talk to Matt. ADdie is a great person and friend to all and they should appreciate her. HOpe she finds someone also. Your writing just draws me in. Thank you! -
Well Addie seems to be the caretaker and sounding block here. She is doing a great job I might add. Jeremy and Matt definitely need to talk as do Matt and Lucca. Why do I feel Matt is wrestling with his sexuality? Another great one
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Tis is getting better and better. But poor Lucca is a helluva mess and he did not even know he was making it. Matt is already jealous, and Jeremy is clueless. What's next? You write so well. It is a pleasure to read
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Chapter 6: Can't Keep Me Away pt 2
joann414 commented on intune's story chapter in Chapter 6: Can't Keep Me Away pt 2
Dazed and confused, but have to find out what the hell is going on so on to next chapter! lol -
Chapter 5: Can't Keep Me Away pt 1
joann414 commented on intune's story chapter in Chapter 5: Can't Keep Me Away pt 1
That was an interesting twist. I thought it would be Sam maybe, but not Jeremy. Things are getting pritty interesting! -
Looks like Jeremy does need a shoulder. Addie is a nosey little matchmaker. lol. She seems like a great character to have on board.
