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Chapter 5: Can't Keep Me Away pt 1
joann414 commented on intune's story chapter in Chapter 5: Can't Keep Me Away pt 1
That was an interesting twist. I thought it would be Sam maybe, but not Jeremy. Things are getting pritty interesting! -
Looks like Jeremy does need a shoulder. Addie is a nosey little matchmaker. lol. She seems like a great character to have on board.
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I think Asher is in lust and Michael is a puzzle to be solved. Asher played it cool at his apartment, but I think Michael is fixing to tongue tie him with the sober Michael. Great writing KC! Will be waiting for more
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Micah goes for the whole enchilada doesn't he. One he has his mind made up, he wants everyone to know. Cute chapter and so glad they did not get any negative reaction, of course that is not saying there won't be any.
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Stupid me called SAm, Lucca in the last review. Sorry, guess I had Lucca on the brain. This is quite a mystery. So, where is Matt? Guess I will find out soon!
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So, Lucca knows of Jeremy know, but vice versa? Guess I will just have to keep reading to see! This is turning into a very entertaining and great read. Thanks!
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Decided to check your story out and I love it. Lucca is not only shy but dense! Why would he not ride home with his crush? Matt seems like a great guy and I can't help bt wonder if it was his lips on Lucca's cheek.
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I love how your are moving their relationship along at a slow and gentle pace. It makes it more believable. Looks like change will bring prosperity. Can't wait for the next chapter girl!
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You made my throat hurt trying to keep from crying. What a decision to make and be so adamant about. I can't blame David for being cautious though. You put a little magic in this chapter and made it beautiful. thank you
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Micah is not only getting back into his music, but showing signs of leadership. I think the quartet is a great decision on his part, not only for music, but for the interaction with other musicians and people. Once again, I love this piece!
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Chapter 19 : How to get up after having fallen down II
joann414 commented on old bob's story chapter in Chapter 19 : How to get up after having fallen down II
so glad to see an update. As I have said before, you have had a fascinating life, many facets of interest. Thanks for sharing -
IN less than 1000 words, you made tears come to my eyes. Thanks for your lovely story!
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I don't know if I think they players will guess Jason right off the bat. But if they discard the others by their personal life one by one, they might. hmmmmm. Favre is not my choice by any means even if Jason was not in the running The Rose Bowl incident has me really curious though. Well, you said no sex for awhile, so keep up the great storyline, and I won't complain Seriously, I am enjoying your story immensely!
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Chapter 3 - Prince Charming
joann414 commented on bryan90's story chapter in Chapter 3 - Prince Charming
Wow, what an unholy mess! I don't know who to feel the sorriest for of the three guys. Shawn for not being able to make Sam love him, Sam for being in a situation he has not control over, or poor Alistair and his unrequited love for Sam. Great story! -
Requiem for Antonin Artaud
joann414 commented on Johnathan Colourfield's story chapter in Requiem for Antonin Artaud
Very serious stuff. Thank you go and write that funny as hell end of chapter note. lmao Good work John -
Very lovely and romantic girl! I loved it!
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Loved all three of your pieces Fishey! Thanks for sharing!!!
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You are quite the poet. You can bring anything to life in your poetry!
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Very interesting and wonderfully written piece Fishey!
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The Buddha That Killed Lord Koo
joann414 commented on JoejoeGreene's story chapter in The Buddha That Killed Lord Koo
LOL, Your poetry hands out the unexpected and I loved it. Great job -
Wow! That was like a bolt of lightning! Very powerful! Thanks
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A very different take on the anthology, but I really liked it. Thanks so much for sharing Dolores!
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After reading this one, I now get your second poem. I am embarassed by my dumbass moment. Great work. They told a sad story!
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I did not quite grasp this one as well as the first, but that does not mean anything. I have those moments But thanx for sharing!
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Very dark, but well written. Great job!
