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Chapter #11 - This Cold heart (Cont.)
podiumdavis commented on podiumdavis's story chapter in Chapter #11 - This Cold heart (Cont.)
Ignorance is bliss to those who believe in it, amiright? Yes Tomas' hatred will come out later; and thus I can't speak to much on him. I love his character though, let me say that. The trigger for Jacob was that he said defective (swear word). His mother had called him this, and thus was the trigger that set him off. (Bad choice of words?) Kyle's calmness is who he is it would seem, after going through all he has, I feel he's afraid to take action or to be offended so easily; it's just the climate. You'll see why later on.. I'm also glad this is your favorite; but that'll soon change once #12 hits; and I say that with the utmost confidence... Again you'll see why -
Chapter #11 - This Cold heart (Cont.)
podiumdavis commented on podiumdavis's story chapter in Chapter #11 - This Cold heart (Cont.)
Even though I don't have plans on exploring what Sarah said to her sister, I will make this statement; which may or may not answer your upbringing question. They are in the same boat as Sarah. Nuff said. Though we will look at her upbringing later on; so don't jump ahead of me LOL. I think Kyle's passive ways are because he's been here before, he's learned that words hold no bearing if the person doesn't take an offence. To be offended you need to accept that, if you don't then it doesn't hurt; IMO. Look for chapter #12 for some of your inquiries. You won't be let down; that's not arrogance, it's pride in my work... Big difference I think -
Chapter #11 - This Cold heart (Cont.)
podiumdavis commented on podiumdavis's story chapter in Chapter #11 - This Cold heart (Cont.)
First off, let me say welcome to the party. I had noticed you reading, but had never seen you like or review. Glad to see another face in the mix That said, there is a lot more to follow, as of current, chapter #12 is semi-written and needs editing done to it. After that I have nothing in reserve; which scares me. Everything posted at present was from original draft and completely rewritten, so then comes Chapter #13 which will all be written from that point on and no more editing of stuff already established. Though I know all of what happens. I don't want to say too much about Sarah; it's a wait and see type of thing. -
The Journey of Jacob and Kyle
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Chapter #11 - This Cold heart (Cont.)
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The Journey of Jacob and Kyle Chapter #11: This Cold heart (Cont.) Time line: Monday “Shit we’ve only got four minutes to get to class. Thank God we start a few minutes later than Matthew,” Jacob announced, running towards his locker, Kyle following a few feet behind him. “Quickly go grab your things and I’ll meet you in class.” “Okay! I’ll see you in less than two minutes,” Kyle announced, running past locker after locker. Jacob stopped running when he reached his lock- 14 comments
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Chapter #9 - The Mistakes we make (Cont)
podiumdavis commented on podiumdavis's story chapter in Chapter #9 - The Mistakes we make (Cont)
I feel Jacob's actions spoke louder than words in the instance you’re speaking of. I mean, he says it all the time, does he not? Actions are always louder than words, in my humble opinion. I think many could easily identify with Sarah, maybe they've come front and center with this mentality, and it's rather hard to overcome. Now onto #10 ha! -
Chapter #8 - The Mistakes we make (Cont)
podiumdavis commented on podiumdavis's story chapter in Chapter #8 - The Mistakes we make (Cont)
Kyle was allowing the option to be available if Jacob so happened to want to do those things, but he was just against it as Jacob was. Maybe I hadn't been clear enough on that; but that's the case and point. I totally agree about being teen boys and what their minds mostly think about, but I think they made their commitment to one another loud and clear. So we'll see. -
Great tip for the day. I liked it a lot. Also as a side note: for the question listed above, please don't feel that you're not special enough to share. Everyone has a voice; though it's your option to speak.
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Story Review Featured Story: A Day In A Life Of Misery / Bovian Image
podiumdavis commented on Renee Stevens's blog entry in Gay Authors News
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Toss Up Tuesday: Interview With Cailen
podiumdavis commented on Trebs's blog entry in Gay Authors News
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Chapter #8 - The Mistakes we make (Cont)
podiumdavis commented on podiumdavis's story chapter in Chapter #8 - The Mistakes we make (Cont)
Delay? What's that... LOL... Glad you finally found time. And yes, he's protecting everyone; so that makes him a good good, amiright? -
Featured Story: Reach / Traveling Home
podiumdavis commented on Trebs's blog entry in Gay Authors News
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You find out where Sarah is soon.. The Orlando boys may be of worry, but again, you'll find that out soon . The boys from Orlando: Kinshi & Josh (Same age as Matthew and Nicolas), Craig & Harry (17), Walter and Skippy (15). I believe Bill wants to give them some freedom. The camp was meant for Gay Youth to get away from bullying and the likes with some R&R. So though it may seem terrible, I think the concept was well enough.
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Chapter #4 - This Changes Everything (Cont)
podiumdavis commented on podiumdavis's story chapter in Chapter #4 - This Changes Everything (Cont)
I'm glad you're liking it KC. I put a lot of effort into my work, and I know I fail a lot of the times in my writing, but I believe the story holds its own; I hope. Warp speed ahead haha. My next story may or may not go as fast or slow. I would like to do a good slow story.. Maybe.. I got lots of the table as far as stories go -
I also had to redo Cia and CassieQ's I had them done and then their entries disapeared. I was like ARG!!!!!!!! I make sad face now. But all better now
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Yeah Part two is all sent. And I sent a new question off to Trebs and Renee to approve
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What Treb's didn't tell you is I'm a cave man, who's tied down, ball and chain, in his basement. If you see this message please send help!
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Prompts Writing Prompts #164 & #165
podiumdavis commented on Renee Stevens's blog entry in Writing World
Deal! Lemme book a flight LOL! But first, we'll snuggle and then do it. -
Prompts Writing Prompts #164 & #165
podiumdavis commented on Renee Stevens's blog entry in Writing World
I think I've done rather well with keeping focus on J&K, but I got a new story idea yesterday.. Please kill me . -
Writing Tip Writing Tip: Keeping Your Writing Life In Sync (And Backed Up)
podiumdavis commented on Renee Stevens's blog entry in Writing World
Cia, I too have washed my thumb drive. However, here lies the issue and why a cell phone won't work after going through the wash (unless you do some things) With any PCB board, the part that connects everything; it's already submerged in acid, solvent, distilled water, etc. etc. Therefore, the circuitry isn’t going to break if it gets wet. With a USB drive, it has less surface area to dry, and has no power source on its own. If you let your stick dry, aka going through the dryer, then it won’t fry itself. Although I don’t know that it would self-destruct if it were wet either. Your cell phone on the other hand has an active current, which will more than likely fry the board if it gets wet. In most cases, the phone will power down. If for whatever reason the board didn’t fry, you would let it sit for up to a week to dry. And if all works out your phone would still work. The problem lies with the active current that would potentially destroy the phone Sorry I just couldn't help myself -
Prompts Writing Prompts #164 & #165
podiumdavis commented on Renee Stevens's blog entry in Writing World
Let's see how much work I get done tonight on chapter #11, I would love to try one of these again.. But alas, I got more plot bunnies crawling in my mind....... -
Writing Tip Writing Tip: Keeping Your Writing Life In Sync (And Backed Up)
podiumdavis commented on Renee Stevens's blog entry in Writing World
Caffled, all my stories are encrypted too. Which is why I feel safe in uploading the container. No one can break my 56 character length password. -
Story Review Featured Story: Circumnavigation
podiumdavis commented on Trebs's blog entry in Gay Authors News
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Chapter #10 - This Cold heart
podiumdavis commented on podiumdavis's story chapter in Chapter #10 - This Cold heart
This doesn't only bring Matthew and Jacob closer, but Kyle and Nicolas as well.. Jacob is all and well until you piss him off.. His emotions could very well be an issue in chapter #11, you'll just have to wait and see. Play on Sarah's emotions? -- Um, no comment. Next question please? I'm glad you liked it. Wish someone would talk about his realizations though... LOL. I put so much work into piecing that puzzle together -
Chapter #10 - This Cold heart
podiumdavis commented on podiumdavis's story chapter in Chapter #10 - This Cold heart
Wait until Amanda comes into the picture. She's from California. That's all I'll say of her right now. The dream is a big part of the picture, as our subconscious is powerful tool. But I think many realizations came from that, so in some ways it was very good. Jacob's very sensitive, which is good, but also bad too. He goes from one extreme to the next. I'm sure we've all seen his jealousy and quick to anger. That might become blatantly apparent in the next chapter… Oh my...
