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I really liked this story and am sorry to see it end, although I am a sucker for HEA. I agree with Reece's decision concerning the older generation in his family; he doesn't need such negative people in his life and he does have an excellent support system of his own, which will now include Dave's family. Thank you for this story.
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It was so nice to finally see this story again. I've been reading it since the beginning and was wondering when you would post a new chapter. I hope the Danish/French relatives they haven't met are decent, accepting people as the twins have enough to contend with in their father. I love when Russell and Evan interact; they are truly entertaining. I look forward to more.
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John's Choice - Prompt 452 (Part 2)
avidreadr commented on comicfan's story chapter in John's Choice - Prompt 452 (Part 2)
Yes, I liked the ending and think John does indeed have a private life. I would love to hear what Natalia has to say when John does ask for more time off! -
I think it's good that Tom told Robbie the truth about his feelings. As much as it hurt, Robbie out it behind him, relegated Tom back to the BF category and can now move forward. I really like the characters in this story, although I'm not fond of Nicola, and look forward to more.
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This was a wonderful and moving chapter. It seems like things are coming together for Nick and the whole family will be better for it. Now, all we need is for a certain baby to be born without any more drama and the family will be complete.
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Chapter 11 Leaving the UK
avidreadr commented on Dodger's story chapter in Chapter 11 Leaving the UK
Let me first say I am reading and enjoying this story except for one thing, which is more my own issue. I do not care for stories that jump back and forth in time. Yes, the headings do indicate where in time we are, but I still find it annoying as I am more of a linear time person. I do have another problem with the England chapters and that is they all seem to serve to only emphasize what Robbie left behind. I get that and understood it from the beginning. I now only really scan these chapters as I am more interested in where his life is going than where it was. -
Love the story and this slight twist on vampires. I look forward to reading more.
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John's Trip - Prompt 453
avidreadr commented on comicfan's story chapter in John's Trip - Prompt 453
Yes, I liked it and, YES, I want more. John was right to be off grid; they never would have left him alone. -
Very interesting and a bit unusual, with the three souls. I look forward to reading more.
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Loved it.
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Good, intriguing beginning. I look forward to more.
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Chapter 1 Michael and Me
avidreadr commented on Mikiesboy's story chapter in Chapter 1 Michael and Me
Happy tears here also. Loved it and I wish you both all happiness for the future. -
Chapter 8 First Day of School
avidreadr commented on Dodger's story chapter in Chapter 8 First Day of School
I am enjoying this story and although Robbie's first day seemed to suck, I think he'll come through it all ahead. Oh, and one last word about his modesty issues and the bathroom --- BATHROBE!!!!! -
Chapter 42 You Can't Turn a Heart into a Diamond
avidreadr commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 42 You Can't Turn a Heart into a Diamond
I hope Megan gets through to her husband. I'll just cross my fingers and hope for the best. I look forward to more, -
Loved it. Finished reading it with tears in my eyes.
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Very good story. I want to read more about these two and how they make their relationship work. Is this the Triton from Greek myth?
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Liked it. Very well written with excellent characters. It draws you in and makes you want to know more about all the characters.
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Very, very sexy. I like these two and look forward to more.
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I don' think Reece's lack of funds will be much of an issue. I like Dave and Reece and I really like the two together. I look forward to more.
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Chapter 38 Holding a Golden Hand
avidreadr commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 38 Holding a Golden Hand
This was a perfect chapter. It only has one flaw -- it ended! I wanted it to go on and on. I look forward eagerly to each new chapter and get excited whenever I see a new one. Thank you. -
Aww, so sweet. Thank you for a great story.
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I am enjoying this story and hope we at least see the birth!
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A wonderful story. The characters were good and you really excelled at getting across the mood and emotions of those characters. I also liked the idea of the timid insecure vampire. It's a nice twist on the usual vampire story. I look forward to more of your writing.
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Chapter 35 King of Clubs
avidreadr commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 35 King of Clubs
Yay! After all the worrying and planning, Kendall simply needed to be himself. Showing that he was concerned about Candy is what made all the difference. As a bitch, she probably hasn't had that too often. I will keep my fingers crossed, though, until the baby is theirs. -
Confrontation and control
avidreadr commented on Timothy M.'s story chapter in Confrontation and control
A wonderful chapter. I hope the twins marry soon and their father - no, let's just say sperm donor - is gone from their lives. I look forward to more of the twins, their mates and the whole family.
