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  1. lilansui

    Chapter 1

    Intrigued? Check...lol, glad you're hooked.
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    Chapter 5

    Toshi's decision coming up on the next chapter. It's taken a while to get out...considering my situation. These last three days I've been working on this story and the other one happily, so an update coming soon. Thank you for missing me Sacred...I'm sorry I worried you, I'm doing better now okay.
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    Chapter 5

    Sometimes a person needs to trust just one person in life, right, to make a heavy situation easier. Jason knowing will help Toshi make a decision on where he wants to end up I think. Lisa, thanks for always reading.
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    Chapter 5

    This has taken so long to answer, so sorry, an update coming soon. I promise. Thank you for reading, Gene.
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    Chapter 12

    Dan the angel...lol, hmmm the way he likes Jae, maybe he can be an angel with a wild side...lol. Funny, I reply to this after the story is finished, so I hope you like the ending... thanks as always for the re view.
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    Chapter 13

    Wouldn't that be fun? Hmm...that's a thought, lol. Thank you for reading Gene.
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    Chapter 13

    Thanks m.p. glad you loved it!!
  8. The One I Trust Most After rehearsal at the Su-Am Center, the Rebellion dressing room hummed with tension. Jae sat sprawled on the couch they had provided, Junghee was leaning against the wall toying with his guitar pick, and Andre was pacing the length of the room. Their make-up artist had come and gone; they were dressed for their performance. "What if no one comes?" Andre asked, stopping in the middle of the room. "I'm pretty sure no one bought the tickets. Not to mention Jaesun is havin
  9. lilansui

    Chapter 5

    Thank you for taking the time to read, Bob.
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    Chapter 5

    Chapter Five “Open,” Toshiro said, holding out a small carrot cube. Jason grinned and obeyed. He took the carrot piece into his mouth crunching on the fresh vegetable morsel. They sat at the kitchen table. Toshiro was peeling carrots and dicing them while he sat writing delivery notes for the jewelry he'd drop at the shop later. Jason had woken up this morning to find Toshiro in the living room reading intently on his laptop, a small frown dancing on Toshiro's forehead. Jason had wanted t
  11. lilansui

    Chapter 4

    Thank you LadyDe! The bad guys have that bad habit for sure. We'll see what they'll do next...lol. I'm happy the chapter was good for you.
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    Chapter 4

    Thanks Lisa, lots happening for Toshiro at the same time. So, I reread that part and I think I mentioned in quickly. Here's the line, tell me if you need that cleared a bit more.. Running cold water in the sink, he gritted his teeth as he inspected his arm. The bullet had gone through, thankfully no major artery was hit. So, Agent Baron doesn't sew the bullet in...lol Wouldn't that be a mess..lol..okay, not a laughing matter, very serious. Thanks for mentioning it.
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    Chapter 4

    Thanks so much for reading
  14. lilansui

    Chapter 4

    Thank you too Writer JT!
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    Chapter 4

    Thanks Bob.
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    Chapter 3

    Thank you Bob for reading, and letting me know that you loved it, it makes my day.
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    Chapter 4

    Chapter Four Time passed quickly the next week. Toshiro adjusted to a simple routine: waking up early in the morning to sit on the deck watching the sunrise over the lake. He made breakfast for Jason, who always woke up at around seven in the morning. They ate breakfast together. Jason helped with the dishes, and then disappeared into the workroom behind the house. Leaving Toshiro to fend for himself until lunchtime. Toshiro didn't mind the time alone. He'd taken on the house chores. The
  18. lilansui

    Chapter 2

    Not the end! LOL... currently working like mad to get the next chapter up on the posting schedule. I will wait for your reaction... Thanks LadyDe for reading and letting me know your thoughts. Means alot to me.
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    Chapter 2

    Thank you WriterJT for reading and dropping a line!! I'm excited that you're excited, lol! More to come promise.
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    Chapter 2

    Toshiro will fix it soon, promise...lol. He's thoughtful, although I think he needs Jason to teach him to stop and smell the flowers. Thanks for reading as always, Lisa.
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    Chapter 2

    Fast is good...lol. Toshiro is a man done wrong, so he has to figure out what's going on first before he can see Jason..Thank you for reading, I'm glad you love this story of mine. I look forward to more of your thoughts and reactions.
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    Chapter 3

    Chapter Three Standing behind heavy curtains, Toshiro watched Kaito send his bodyguards away and close the bedroom door. Toshiro waited for the outer door to close, aware that those two burly men who followed Kaito everywhere waited in the hallway. Kaito removed his tie, dropping it on an armchair, his grey suit jacket followed. Toshiro moved from his hiding place when Kaito turned to the bed, ready to remove his shirt. “Leave your clothes on,” he said. Kaito's shoulders stiffened and he t
  23. lilansui

    Chapter 1

    Lisa, thanks for reading!! The funny thing is when I start writing YMMC..Jaesun was Jae Sun, but writing it like that would have been confusing to people, so I put it together, and it felt like a korean version of Jason..lol. I really love the name Jason so in this story, I decided I had to have a nice guy called Jason. Thanks again...this one is almost complete, it came to me fast so it should all be up within the week, if I can figure out the scheduled posting system, just saw that my second chapter posted at a different time than I'd set (software systems = 1 Sui = 0). I'll figure it out. Thanks again.
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    Chapter 1

    Thank you so much for reading. Hope the second and the third....are just as good. Lol.
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    Chapter 2

    Chapter Two Two days later, Toshiro sat on the chair beside his bed, his leather jacket on his lap as he stared out the window into the cool morning. The small quaint town was surreal. He'd never lived in one place long enough to care about the people. Running organized crime left no time for home making. He picked up his jacket and checked the pockets. Keira, the perky second-shift nurse, had told him they'd looked for his identification and found none. They wouldn't have, he thought as
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